~ His LifeTask

~ His LifeTask, Elisa Laura, Poetry, Kings, and Fools, Love and Death, A lifetime to carry...

                         

~ His LifeTask

 

 

Nobody said this was easy;

Walking on a sharp rock with barren feet

You felt the wind cutting your face,

The salt of the sea, and

Those as tears on your cheeks...

 

Slipped further away in the subconscious

The angels shooting some arrows at you

Some transformed it as hail;

Others as rain, but the pain,

O' the pain...

 

It was too heavy to feel, too heavy to see

Nothing was even there anymore,

But you, alone, and alone in this misery;

In this place the most hidden place

Of the hurting chambers of your surface,

 

You just extended as a tiny creature,

In some skin made of some genes,

And hair that was unkempt and raw;

But you could not even care,

You were just alone and there,

 

Anxious and defeated, thoughts

Eating your skull and brain

Like hungry maggots crawling;

Until there's nothing more,

Then a tiny pile of human dust

And all there is left is pain and the lore...

 

I have left before, a lifetime;

This time I just came back for you,

Maybe to help you disappear;

But also to calm the sea, our sea,

To make those rocks a golden throne

For you to sit on reborn and free

 

 

    Welcome back my King

          Welcome back home

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

05/28/2013

Author's Note

I shall soon come by to read you, and your wonderful poetry, when I'm feeling better, in the meantime, (I still suffer from Writers Block, fortunately, I did many work in my hiatus, to keep you amused... so please enjoy

xx Thank you...

Reviews

[MichaelsLyric.com]

Wow, this took me on adventure. You always have elegance and grace. This piece has a cinematic feel to it. Although, I'm not sure who is "the king." This could be religion, could be a lover. In any case, this is an excellent write. Thank you for your creativity.

Thank you so much Michael, glad you enjoyed the piece... (it's an older one I wrote)... glad you name cinematic, I have something with it.... ;) "the King" is someone very special... lol and it's not about religion though, but nice you had that in mind even... many thanks, i'll be back for you after a good sleep, went out, (time difference) lol... must hit my pillow xx

[MichaelsLyric.com]

Good night )

Goodnight sweet friend... many thanks again :) can't wait to read you again :)

[Cryingkate]

Grandfather ......... E.L. I didn't forget. I have been with you all of Nov. in thoughts and prayers.

Connie dear thank you.... I felt your presence.... shall catch up soon! (hugs) I read the poem in silence and the responses. You're sweet, always.

[kublakhan27]

The pain of a loss never dies...all there is left is pain and the lore. I only hope to compile enough lore to eclipse the pain when my time is up. I'm in sensitive mode today so a work such as this brings me close to tears. I wish I could say more but I'm not a very good reviewer...I don't know how some people are able to respond to poems with poems of their own. Most of the time, I can only say that I like something, and that it spoke to me on a deep level. That's what this piece did. Wonderful work my sweet sis...I actually had this in my bookmarks for the longest time and forgot it was there. I just discovered it again today :) Love and hugs to you my dear Eli :) xoxo

You're one of the best reviewers I know, and sometimes we are just out of words, but being here is just enough for me dear... :) your presence always makes my day, and it doesn't have to be a perfect review, for it was felt with me (((HUGS))) xxx I will be soon back for you (not feeling so well tonight)... and don't ever worry about my little scribbles darling bro.

[kublakhan27]

I'm sorry to hear you're not feeling well Eli...take all the time you need to recover, and know I'll be thinking of you and wishing you well :) You make my day as well dear sis, and I'm happy when I know I can make you happy :) Talk to you soon my darling, and I hope you feel better tomorrow...love you (((HUGS))) xo

Did had a great sleep sweetie, and woke up now to do Yoga, :) have to do a few important things today, and will get my rest again... Love you always Steve, you make days brighter Big Bro! xoxo :) keep on shining yourself too hey! I want you happy (((:

[kublakhan27]

Glad to feel you're doing better my sweet :) I've never tried Yoga before but I do meditate a lot...I actually have a record that helps me do it haha Love and hugs to you as always kid sis, and you know you know I'm always happy when you're around :)) xoxo

Thanks for the sweet comment dear Steve. :) Love and hugs, back. I must hit my pillow now lol...I'm so happy too to see you you're special to me.

[J. J. Nightingale]

There is pain here ..
There is beauty in this journey
Each line tells us of a life, of a death
And all we finally desire.. is to come home

I Love this .... Jasmine xoxo ♥♥

Thank you so much sweet woman, I feel really bad, I can't be so much online :( I will as soon as I feel ok. ♥

[J. J. Nightingale]

Sorry you r not feeling well ... ♥♥♥♥♥ Hurry Home Little Dove ....

Awww, I am trying he he.... :) but can't focus still on here muchly. Miss you ! ♥

[Jack...]

Dear sweet Elisa, I have known this profound sadness expressed by your poem today. I have felt the sharp stones tear at the skin and the arrows finding my heart...darkest days seem likely to last forever until that one break in the clouds, a bit of sun smiles and birds again sing in the trees now gathering new leaf in vibrant color. So soon the sorrow comes replaced with new offering and perhaps, one that returns so that you not stand alone. Very beautiful, you have a soft style which clings to the heart. Loved this one my friend.

Thank you so much my dear friend. It's for a long long time pretty dark... but I know there will be light always. :) I have tasks to do still.... many hugs!

[Pax]

I see the pain, felt it.... it's a sad emotions to carry...

Nobody said this was easy;
Walking on a sharp rock with barren feet

~ life was never easy, i know, we know.. because life is a lifetime of challeges... simple or hard, good or bad... no matter what we do live for ourselves, for love, for life itself... pain in the rain, it will passed...coz a storm is not forever there... the dawn will come, and then you'll reborn...

this is such a painful and beautifully conveyed...
i love reflecting on its beauty...
great job big sis!

Thank you so much for understanding my poetry, in life, deathly aspects, and in general...I'm always happy you read me well, and I come back for you... Hugs x

[Pax]

always welcome big sis.... hugs...