~ My Orange Moon

~ My Orange Moon, Elisa Laura, Full Moons, Poetry, May

~ My Orange Moon

 

 

Thou shone so bright,

The night of full moons, in me;

Shall I ever be upon these clouds

To follow thee?

 

Shall I be there, when it’s that day?

Where could we mourn better,

Than with our hands folded,

On these unexpected stairway’s?

 

And where could I be taken?

For the days, are more beautiful

When surrounded in grey’s,

Let me absorb you in my vast body…

 

To observe thee, in the most occult nights,

I embrace thee with my invisible sight

Thou shall not pass, the forlorn darkness

Before I was there, I knew your light--

 

It was so fast, and high,

I could reach out the scale of pain,

Just to reach your top, up there--

Let me dwell in the glance of thee, fain

 

From a distant relieve, I shall salute,

The longer passages of time so brute,

Now wait me, for time is blank in so many forms;

And color me, through these heavy chained storms

 

 

                            ~ Elisa Laura

                             05/25/2013

Author's Note

Still having a Writers Block, so here in the meantime something I saved from May...
For all the Full Moon moments, to come, return and surround us~ Enjoy xx

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

I often feel that your poetry should be declaimed from a high podium with all the relevant gestures by an exceptional actor with a voice like burnt whisky in period costume. This is no exception. A remarkable write full of rich layers and fruity phrases.

Sigh... thank you Ken, dearest friend, for your support always, it means so much to me. When I'm totally better, i will bite into your work :D can't wait...

[Frieda P]

Stunning, there are no words, this one took my breath away Elisa. Magnificent cara! xo

Muwah thank you cara mia.... love to you!! xo

[Vikrantsingh]

Elisa - what a capture of thought in this poem you did this is stunning :) I really loved this picture ;)
I just jumped on this and read - Well nicely penned and expressed wonderfully.
- Singh :)

Thank you so much my dear friend... :) I love to read your thoughts, this early morning... :) xx be back soon for you!