~ She and The Harpist of Rome

~ She and The Harpist of Rome, E.L. Elisa laura, Rome, Italy, Music, Love, Romance

~ She and The Harpist of Rome

 

 

She heard his light strings,

Whirl along the quay,

They sung, they touched her

Heart, through fine senses,

Among the green gardens

Of Rome, that day --

 

The sunshine, shone,

Rosy on her cheeks;

The smell of fresh jasmine,

And newly fallen rain,

Gave a combination,

Of gossamer odors, and to fain;

 

He did imagined her in as 

The pure perfume of Rome, 

And with the distant

Sound of horseshoes;

Tapping on the cobblestones,

To make his musical notes complete

 

It brought the rhythm of the day,

In a floral silk oasis -- touched,

With the essence of her being

And by his sublime creativity felt

In his head, like a never ending

Dream...

 

The mix of these fresh colors

That a mind can perceive, in the purest

Coherence, filled with ozone,

And the sun... she so close...

 

The elegance and music, made her

Together with the ambience to

Fulfill and embrace

And a heart to be full of love -

To be finally home.

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Sometimes, you are asleep, and wake up with poetry in your head...

Enjoy xx
Music by: Giulio Caccini - Amarilli, Mia Bella

Reviews

[Allen Smuckler]

My GOoDness Elisa...
where do I start...How about, I absolutely loved everything about this write...everything
I'm not usually a big fan of accompanying music, but in this case it worked purr....fectly...then the picture of Giuliano...and away we go....
But the write...sublime in every way, shape and form...beautiful, thoughtful, classical imagery brought this dream to life. The spontaneous and unforced change in style, erratic but purposeful rhyming (especially the near rhymes), and your grasp and usage of archaic words (fain, quay),
a touch of metaphorical brilliance and voila...a masterpiece. This is as close as you get.
Awesome write Elisa...Great poem...wonderful message of love.
BTW...I always sleep with a pencil and pad and tape recorder near my bed for just those situations...
Ain't no way I'd remember diddly the next morning..or even 30 seconds after awakening..... some of our best visions are just before dawn.
allen

Oh Allen, thank you kindly for this great review, you noticed so much, and the words coming from you make me smile... Oh you do that too? That's so great, I write everywhere I can with my old fashioned hand notebook, even at the middle of the night, I have a dream diary too... I'm very pleased you did enjoy this piece of me, can't thank you enough... Elisa

[Cole Hayley]

Beautiful, it really truly is. I love the last stanza.

Thank you so much my dear friend... always nice to see you by, I have trouble with WC... be back for you when it's less slow... :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

This is enchantingly beautiful, Elisa Laura.. I feel like I was there with you in Rome.. the sounds and the sights so wonderfully described.

Lori, thank you so so much... I'm glad I could take you with me for a while, I will be back for you x

[Pax]

I feel like i have travel to Rome and enjoyed the music and scenery you just conveyed in your words big sis... It's a gift to share such passion with us... and i know you'll always find a home here in wc and in your poetry... Great poem!

Thank you kindly brother love xxx

[Pax]

a pleasure big sis.... always, hugs!

I can't thank you enough my sweet Brother Pax :) tight hugs! good day at work!

[Pax]

smiling... yeah... it's a good day, still silent coz it's still ramadan time they off to work a bit late because of the fasting stuff... am thankful its almost done...

Oh it must be so so hard, in this heat... I really do respect all who are taking part of it.
Wishing you the best day, shall pop in later more, for I have to rush now.. smiling to have had you by my dear friend bro, and soulmate xo

[Pax]

more hugs.... take care of yourself :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I still have visions of sugarplums in my head when I wake up! : ) Actually, I'm not awake, in the purest sense of the word, until I have my coffee.

My dear girl, this is abundant with awe...

"The pure perfume of Rome,
And with the distant
Sound of horseshoes;
Tapping on the cobblestones..."

You craft imagery as brilliant as the written word itself! Such a lovely work!

xo
Kelly

Thank you so much Kelly, your words warm my heart... I saw a few new ones at your library, I will be reading to tonight. I'm so happy you enjoyed, thanks a lot xoxo :)

[Everett DeValle]

Lovely, Elisa...I felt like I was in Italy with your description...home is where the heart is. I truly enjoyed reading your poem.

Thank you so much dear... for your continues support, and the love. Sometimes I'm an old soul lol, but I'm happy you enjoyed this one... :) "she said humbly" x

[Everett DeValle]

I adore you, Elisa...yes, I've have an old soul too...I'm a Capricorn. :)

Very classical write and I enjoy classics...Oh, shhhh. :x

With your words, you warm my old heart :) I'm a Cancer, maybe I've swum for ages in the ocean... ;-) I won't tell... my lips are sealed hehe... I'll be back tomorrow for you my friend much love. xx

[Everett DeValle]

Okay Elisa...it's always nice to hear from you.

I know you won't. :x

So it's nice to hear from you Ev!!! I'm so pleased and happy with the old friends from the old times on here... :) have a great rest of the eve... Ev! love and hug! :)

[Everett DeValle]

Awww, Thank you, Elisa, for your friendship.