~ Tonight I Followed You

~ Tonight I Followed You, Tonight You Followed Me, Elisa Laura, E.L. Flamenco, Rumba, Love, ART

~ Tonight I Followed You

 

There was a signal, just a tiny little signal,

        Upon the water, where I sat tonight,

                It felt like an uprising aura of your soul;

        That slowly came closer,

Like a stealthy black panther

        Bringing the beat, like no one could --

                 Coming back for a moment…

        Touching my toes, putting shoes on them,

 Blindfolded I felt to dance with you

                   Tonight I Followed You,

Invisible like two teenagers, on our lake;

        You moved me like a Queen,

                  There was nothing needed 

           Anymore to be seen

As the gods not even can help, our fate,

        What can we do than follow?

                 Two steps, I was forward you

This time, you followed me,

         Two heartbeats into our rhythm

               And just one soul to see,

 

                   One soul truly free...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

08/01/2013

Author's Note

While I spoke to you, tonight I told you something...
Something in your ear...

This is for you A. W.
;)

Enjoy xx

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

This is so touching and stirring to the soul. I too felt the dance that takes place here between two souls in love and in bliss. Beautifully penned. I like how you personalized this poem with...."on our lake;" This is another great masterpiece and I am glad to have read this.

This was one for my sweetest friend, and partner in the arts, thanks so much for being here on this one too, means much to me... I see my video stopped grrr, Youtube have to edit a lot... within the time... but I will. Thanks so much dearheart xo

[joshua deathdealer]

When you have the time you much teach me how to make youtube videos autostart. I've tried everything with no luck...well it worked one time but never again.

That I'll do, but only for you ;) lol no just kidding, that's pretty easy.... shall mail you soon about that, and also other thingies, I've discovered :P

[joshua deathdealer]

Ok. at your convenience. its no rush.. Thanks (:

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"stealthy like the panther"

nice.

i like this meeting of two souls...this romantic dance---two heartbeats in rhythm...

very romantic piece...

jacob

Thank you so much my friend, appreciate your words. :)

[sharonlee]

Hauntingly beautiful!

Peace and Blessings

Thanks so much love, to you too... :) I'm smiling, good morning from here... xo

[Everett DeValle]

A black panther you are...you an amazing poetess, Elisa...the imagery and playfulness you offer in your poem exudes the characteristics of your soul. Wonderful.

Thank you so very much my dear friend. I was asleep, but I always wake up, when I catch an error, or I didn't spelled well a word, so I edited it. Your words bring me pleasure upon my night my friend. :) so grateful ever to you... and I'm sorry I lack in time... I am guitly :P

[Everett DeValle]

No worries, Elisa...the time you give, I cherish. I understand, we do have lives beside writing. :)

Sleep well my friend.

Thanks so much for understanding Ev ~ You're the best, real friendship is trust, love, and freedom, you're one of a kind in that... for I cherish you. (for me it's no rush on here) life needs to be happy, and relaxed :D you know all about it dear... see you soon my friend. xo

[Everett DeValle]

I'm always chilling...chilling is an art. :)

It is a true art my friend, only a few can achieve.... :)

[Everett DeValle]

Yeah, I heard the Italians are a master of it...I'm going to do it too. ;)

Love you, Elisa. Gratzi ala Mama!

Ti amo anch'io tesoro.... :) grazie mille per essere qui con me sempre, amico mio. Ti adoro.
I think we are masters both in it lol, we should keep up that vibe... I love it. It's pure, real, unforced, and it feels natural. :) Sei grande Ev! xoxo

[Everett DeValle]

Awww...so niiice.

I'm in love with an Island Girl...so much so, I Love her so...she has my heart...her love won't let go...it won't let go.

A free flow. :)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Sensual and beautiful poem ElisaiEnjoyed reading it :)

Thank you dearly Nkosana :)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

my pleasure :)

[Traci]

"This time, you followed me,
Two heartbeats into our rhythm
And just one soul to see,

One soul truly free..."

Your words are clearly a breath of fresh air, expressing such vibrancy and love. So beautifully written, definitely a favorite, my friend.

Hey love thank you so much, I sat tonight at a lovely riverlake... next to my home, and I did write, it came right out of my heart, for someone truly special... your words mean the world to me, thank you.

[Jack...]

Elisa, my night is now complete. The beauty of your words has solidified my day and allowed night to sing to me. I love this poem. I love your style, like a feather on the wind, it floats to our eyes and our hearts. Very beautiful.

Thank you so much.... Jack, your words mean a lot. Coming from a great poet like you... it's a little surprise for my partner in art... :) So pleased you love it ... can't thank you enough.