~ Tonight I Followed You

~ Tonight I Followed You, Tonight You Followed Me, Elisa Laura, E.L. Flamenco, Rumba, Love, ART

~ Tonight I Followed You

 

There was a signal, just a tiny little signal,

        Upon the water, where I sat tonight,

                It felt like an uprising aura of your soul;

        That slowly came closer,

Like a stealthy black panther

        Bringing the beat, like no one could --

                 Coming back for a moment…

        Touching my toes, putting shoes on them,

 Blindfolded I felt to dance with you

                   Tonight I Followed You,

Invisible like two teenagers, on our lake;

        You moved me like a Queen,

                  There was nothing needed 

           Anymore to be seen

As the gods not even can help, our fate,

        What can we do than follow?

                 Two steps, I was forward you

This time, you followed me,

         Two heartbeats into our rhythm

               And just one soul to see,

 

                   One soul truly free...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

08/01/2013

Author's Note

While I spoke to you, tonight I told you something...
Something in your ear...

This is for you A. W.
;)

Enjoy xx

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

This is so touching and stirring to the soul. I too felt the dance that takes place here between two souls in love and in bliss. Beautifully penned. I like how you personalized this poem with...."on our lake;" This is another great masterpiece and I am glad to have read this.

This was one for my sweetest friend, and partner in the arts, thanks so much for being here on this one too, means much to me... I see my video stopped grrr, Youtube have to edit a lot... within the time... but I will. Thanks so much dearheart xo

[joshua deathdealer]

When you have the time you much teach me how to make youtube videos autostart. I've tried everything with no luck...well it worked one time but never again.

That I'll do, but only for you ;) lol no just kidding, that's pretty easy.... shall mail you soon about that, and also other thingies, I've discovered :P

[joshua deathdealer]

Ok. at your convenience. its no rush.. Thanks (:

[Belle]

And that was an amazing love story. Even god cannot stop the fate of that would be made by the two lovers. For some reasons this poem made me feel the love of Pyramus and Thisbe.

Thank you Sis for reading ...

[Adam M. Snow]

Honestly, I absolutely love it.

Thank you so much my friend, good to see you back! :)

[Adam M. Snow]

You're most welcome and thank you. I've been going through a lot, with a good friend gone missing after his roommate was killed (he's still missing, been 4 months), to a death of my grandfather last month. But the best thing I can do at the moment is just keep on living.

Thank you so much, sorry it can take me a while, my connection isn't what it supposed to be, Oh my... that's terrible. :( I can feel you in all, life can be so hard... private message me anytime if you want to talk, ok... hope you're ok. :)

[Alia ZJ.]

I find this sweet and romantic. You're such a dear poet, Elisa. :D I remember reading your poetry 2 years back when I operated another account, you were the same free-spirited, jovial, eloquent poet. Love your work! ;)

Oh really? oh it's such a long time ago... but thank you so much! Did you had another name back in the days? glad to see you back, and pleased to see you still didn't forget about me hugs!

[Alia ZJ.]

Haha Well yes. You and Robbie, was that her name, your best friend? They really were good old summer days. ;)

Oh, yes, me and Robbie are entangled forever lol... we became true family for eachother, she's my bestie yes!!! I miss the old days, so good you're back! :D

[Alia ZJ.]

Lol I feel funny over how much details I still remember though. Back then, I operated as 'VelaneDeBeaute' :3 Screw WC, they shut my account off, but I wasn't held back lol. Anyway, keep writing, and do send me rr when you post anything new now! ;)

Oh yes, now I remember something, yes... thanks for helping me out, there are so many lovely writers/poets on here, I will keep in touch with you from now on... :) how stupid they did, don't know why either, but I saw the note... anyhow, great you're back here.

[Alia ZJ.]

Haha Sure, will stay in touch! :D

That makes me smile Ghalia :D your work is amazing!

[Alia ZJ.]

Lol I might as well start jumping up and down. For a seventeen year old, it feels like God admitted me to Paradise xD

Haha..... You are funny..... Xo

[SHEEMA HUQ]

A classical take on a tale of two lovers and the twist of fate, you build the story line very competently, and the last line rounds off this verse, extremely well :)

Thank you so much Sheema, I'm always really happy to see you by my friend. :)

[Empirik]

I have been speechless for days!!! This is easily one of my favs! I love the progression of thoughts and feelings each moving to a point of realization or motivation. The one most regard is here. As I feel more than embraced in the role as this is with you. You are great! A great Queen! Lovely write. Thank you!!! XXX

OMG! I could say more and more..but I wait. I will most likely post another reply. Lots of luv! :)X

Yes, wait... lol, that's always best! :) You're so so welcome, I'm sorry I made you speechless for days, but that makes you think and I do love to let think my readers ... and that's a good artistic process. :) You're so welcome, I treasure us, our past, our friendship our passion for art, our dances, and just you! so glad you enjoyd this one! :D I couldn't be more pleased, keep on penning, for you deserve it to be seen! Now, sketch... ;-) breathe, and create... Lots of luv too :) XX

[Empirik]

Yes, I could not have said it better. Indeed it is always better to really set art inside the heart as one becomes the part it is meant for. Love it and U. :)

That's why I'm so much offline lol... I need my hikes, travels, let it land, feel, taste, and let it land again, pause, and write, pause and write... feel the notes... ya know? :D Love you too bestie X

[Empirik]

Exactly!!! The best process. X

Sorry WC is slow tonight, but this is what I said: " I'm glad we are the same.... X :) always! in that... love and let love... "

[Half Dream]

This is such a splendid read! Beautifully written. I can feel the emotions behind your words. Nice tribute for your friend. Pure friendship is we all search for. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for sharing. :)

I'm very grateful with your time, and read my friend, thank you so much, be back for you! x

[Half Dream]

You're very welcome. :)

:) I'm smiling ....

[Half Dream]

:) *smiles back*

[shallimarRose]

This is absolutely beautiful ... shallimarRose

Thank you dear, xo :)

[Frieda P]

A divine intimate moment, a glimpse of romance in its finest hour. A dream, perhaps the purest of memories, two souls dancing as one, what could be more blissful....stunning Eli, you've taken my breath away once again. Love the music too my sweet friend. xo

Thank you love for your support, here. And the sweetest words! :) Mille baci da parte mia, X

[s y e]

The lovely memories you have of your friend are sweet and honest, I loved this Eli - an absolutely lovely write, something that we all hold dear to us are the memories we have shared with others, so when they are no longer with us - or away from us - we remember them and hold them close.

Yes, dear Noodle, we should... thank you so much for your lovely words... really, it means much to me xoxo... and to him. I'll come by tomorrow for you, can't wait...

[s y e]

I will come back again, tomorrow, too. Now I'm logging off for a while xoxo

Me, too, in a while, sleep well hun.... I'm tired of my trip xoxo :)

[s y e]

I'm tired in general. haha xoxo

hahaha, lol, I didn't saw that one coming.... ;-) well we can shake hands lol.... muah! till tomo saw you did wrote a lot of new stuff :D

[s y e]

Hahaha, :P Yes we can, lmao. mwah, ciao xoxo Yes I have. :P Hah.

[Lydia Shutter]

The tender memories you have of a friend are honest and sweet. Yes, when one is taken away, they are free, but the one who remains is forever changed. Elisa, dit is een ontroerende schrijven. Lydi **

Thank you so much Lydi xxx Je woorden betekenen heel veel voor mij.... liefs...