~ The Poetic Mosquitoes

~ The Poetic Mosquitoes, E.L. Elisa Laura, Fun with words, Mosquitoes, To replace yourself for a day into one parasite...

~ The Poetic Mosquitoes

 

 

The Poetic Mosquitoes,

They dance, look, and fly;

Circles around the light,

 

They are hungry, they want,

They always fly out of sight

The Poetic Mosquitoes,

 

Armed warriors, in the air,

They think large, nor small,

They are forever musing after all,

 

And when you don’t expect them,

They suck your essence fair,

 

Watch out!

 

The Poetic Mosquitoes just

Will be there…

 

Slurping, your poetic blood

From your Poetic brain

From May until the fall,

 

The Poetic  Mosquitoes,

Are around, and they simply

Do watch you all…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Dear readers, ghost readers, and little mosquitoes,
Have fun! :) (I thought, being bitten so many times, on my
nephews wedding party tonight how it was to replace myself into a mosquito).
Another experiment. Have fun!

Enjoy! xx

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

an experiment well executed ....bbbbzzzbbbzz
love the intertwining thoughts that I have when reading this...amazin' beauty writer
now I wonder what was your hypothesis...hahaha*)
this is just a great write from content to concept from thought to your words-adored it
bbbzzzbbbbzzzbbbzzz....and I hate that spray bad for the ozone and so darn smelly...*)
wonder what you use on poetic mosquito's....pens with no ink, oh no wait this is a new era...
Wi-Fi signal drop.....hahaha just kidding see how fun this piece is?
have a super great beauty writer kinda day...and thank ya for sharing

Haha, thank you sweetheart xo, Oh it was pretty simple... ;) read the authors note lol... I find it most lovely everyone reads this one into his/her own way... :) I like your bbbzzzbbbzzzbbbzzz moments :D It's just we have so much mosquitoes here in this clime and hot / humid temperature right now, I was bitten so badly yesterday lol, I forgot to bring my spray... my nieces and friends too, everyone was bitten, we were all doomed. LOL. That's a great interesting thought... it could be typ-ex, ink eraser, or maybe magic lol.... I laugh about this fantastic review, thank you dear Holly, (a little later this evening I try to read your fantastic experiments, and poetry) can't wait :) xx

[Luke L]

Lovely piece. Are the poetic mosquitoes things that suck your inspiration out?

Thank you so much Luke :) that could be~ I like this one of a thousand interpretations I see here tonight... glad you came by!

[Pryde Foltz]

Just married. Congratulations. Funny and witty poem.

Hy Pryde, Oh not me... confusion lol, my nephew was.... thanks for the time, and review my friend :)

[Friday]

Nice write. There's a great deal missing though. For example, the weight of the individual mosquitos before and after. That would add to the scientific accuracy of the piece and make it more logically appealing. :)

Ah thanks my friend, I will think that out.... great advice :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Interesting concept, my friend. I like the idea of "poetic mosquitos", but I take this in a metaphorically different direction. To me, this speaks of those who circle writers and suck their poetic, creative flow for unfriendly reasons; those people who are not always forthright with their convictions and truths. I can also see this as being attributed to the poet herself, as sometimes we are the mosquitoes, sucking the life blood from the earth around us to create something worthy of reading.

By the way, love the song you chose...I have always been partial to that old song, reminds me of my mother who likes to sing it :)

Hey Sarah, thanks, I didn't expected so soon a reaction, so I logged out... Thank you for your interpretation and thoughts, on this experiment :) truly appreciated :) I love the song too, it has nostalgia for me. P.s. is it mosquitos or mosquitoes? for I looked it up, and I think it can both, but I could be wrong... xx

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I think the proper way to spell it is "mosquitoes", but that is the general American spelling...I have seen it spelled mosquitos by people from the UK. So...up to you I think, though I would spell it mosquitoes. :)

Ah great you explain me this... from out of Spanish I would chose the UK form myself, but I thought too this was proper... thanks for the insights/help.