~ The Poetic Mosquitoes

~ The Poetic Mosquitoes, E.L. Elisa Laura, Fun with words, Mosquitoes, To replace yourself for a day into one parasite...

~ The Poetic Mosquitoes

 

 

The Poetic Mosquitoes,

They dance, look, and fly;

Circles around the light,

 

They are hungry, they want,

They always fly out of sight

The Poetic Mosquitoes,

 

Armed warriors, in the air,

They think large, nor small,

They are forever musing after all,

 

And when you don’t expect them,

They suck your essence fair,

 

Watch out!

 

The Poetic Mosquitoes just

Will be there…

 

Slurping, your poetic blood

From your Poetic brain

From May until the fall,

 

The Poetic  Mosquitoes,

Are around, and they simply

Do watch you all…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Dear readers, ghost readers, and little mosquitoes,
Have fun! :) (I thought, being bitten so many times, on my
nephews wedding party tonight how it was to replace myself into a mosquito).
Another experiment. Have fun!

Enjoy! xx

Reviews

[Holly Mason]

an experiment well executed ....bbbbzzzbbbzz
love the intertwining thoughts that I have when reading this...amazin' beauty writer
now I wonder what was your hypothesis...hahaha*)
this is just a great write from content to concept from thought to your words-adored it
bbbzzzbbbbzzzbbbzzz....and I hate that spray bad for the ozone and so darn smelly...*)
wonder what you use on poetic mosquito's....pens with no ink, oh no wait this is a new era...
Wi-Fi signal drop.....hahaha just kidding see how fun this piece is?
have a super great beauty writer kinda day...and thank ya for sharing

Haha, thank you sweetheart xo, Oh it was pretty simple... ;) read the authors note lol... I find it most lovely everyone reads this one into his/her own way... :) I like your bbbzzzbbbzzzbbbzzz moments :D It's just we have so much mosquitoes here in this clime and hot / humid temperature right now, I was bitten so badly yesterday lol, I forgot to bring my spray... my nieces and friends too, everyone was bitten, we were all doomed. LOL. That's a great interesting thought... it could be typ-ex, ink eraser, or maybe magic lol.... I laugh about this fantastic review, thank you dear Holly, (a little later this evening I try to read your fantastic experiments, and poetry) can't wait :) xx

[Eric Pudalov]

Wow, Ellie, I saw your author's note, but while reading this, I definitely didn't interpret it as being inspired by *literal* mosquitoes!!

As I read it, I thought of it as either critics, or people who didn't necessarily understand your poetry, constantly demanding that you write for them! But then, in the literal sense, yes, I hate being surrounded by mosquitoes too!!!

Reading it that way, I think of being in the jungle in Brazil, with gigantic mosquitoes sucking the life out of you. So the poem works in so many ways (as all of yours do). Wonderfully funny and enjoyable, and a surprise read! You have helped brighten my day, my friend!

Haha thank you, it's an oldie, and you remind me again of that evening, where we all were bitten to death... it was pretty fun, with my whole family. Thank you for your beautiful words my dear friend. :)

[Pax]

haha... this made me giggle about the time on my incident about bedbugs...
Mosquitos and Bedbugs are much the bloodsuckers i hate... ;D
Paxie the bedbug hunter is outnumbered by mosquitos now, can't do it alone ahh... lol
kidding...

a creative fun piece big sis!

I love the rhyming here like a childrens song, there is a melodic tune i am singing while reading this in my head... amazing big sis...

Haha lovely brother, your review makes my day, thank you always for the fun and humor dear xoxox :) I'm back later I hope.... Muah.... X (on phone with nasty auto correct) that's why the previous comment is deleted x

[PurpleQuartz]

I love how you have a different way of looking at things! I really like the way you described the mosquitoes as Armed warriors. Great poem and with a brilliant flow.

Thank you so much deary! :) I see them as warriors, for the have an sting/angle... :) it's fun how many creatures there are living on earth... in all forms... (if we think about it lol) each and everyone has a particular way of living/eating/bite/suck/ etc haha... hugs!!! THANKS

[emmajoy]

Ouch, just slapped one of your poetic mosquitos - nasty things. Should be put down alongside their sordid verbal darts and strange connivances. Trust you to spray your thoughts over them. If you could do the same in my multi dimensional world, would be very grateful, dear friend! Great post.

Haha Emster love, you make my night with this review, lol.... I will I will, I just bought another electric whisk... you know one like a tennis racket haha... I smashed my other already into pieces... ;) I shall wake over your poetic musquitoes, if they are nasty, promise *___*

[emmajoy]

Thank youuuu xx

[Lydia Shutter]

I loved this! Indeed, poetic ideas (mosquitoes) do take up a lot of our time if we are truly poets. We see a scene and think immediately how to write about it....how to share it with the world. What wonderful metaphor here! Lydi**

Thank you so much sweet Lydi! :) happy you enjoyed this one!

[Frieda P]

Ha hate the bloody buggers, but love this! Seems they're everywhere, even on poetry sites, need a zapper for the WC! Only you could make mosquitos enticing my friend! I remember the one's in Italy were like B52's, you could hear them from a mile away as they zoned in on their target, reminds me of something....great one Eli!

Frieda!!!! :D so good you're back, and thank you for this review. HAHA a zapper for the WC lol you crack me up... you're right the one's in Italy are much stronger... bigger. Italians always do the "Zanzare" lol when a beautiful woman passes they make that Zzzzzzzzz sound ;-) Thanks so much love! xo

[Frieda P]

Ahh, Zanzare's yep, I forgot what you call those pests, when I was there with my sister Lee, she used to call them 'those little b******s'...ha, I'm sure they thought she was exquisite! Glad to be back, thanks for the welcome, good to read you again cara! xox

Those teasing Zanzare... hehe... haha she's right your beautiful Lee. :) those memories are never to forget... I think they loved her sweet blood :) You're welcome dearest, for all. Baci xoxo :)

[Hana Saemon]

love this!! ive just killed 5 mozzies. totally can relate to this. haha

Thank you very much Hana, lol... haha how is the weather at yours?

[Hana Saemon]

it's winter here in nz. but for some reason, these buggers refuse to die. haha. how is it there over at yours?

Oh and here it's summer, ofcourse, you live down, and me up.... :D strong ones at yours then !! good to see you by Hana, I will read your work soon! xo

[Hana Saemon]

yeah they are commando mozzies. haha! keep writing :)

I will dear, thanks so much, be back for you!! xo

[Traci]

Another brilliant piece my friend, love the concept, well executed.
I'm very fortunate here in California, I only see a couple here and there.
Keep up the great writes my friend, nice to see you back :)

Thank you very much sweet T. :) I will dear, for you and close friends!! hugs!

[Renée]

well this could go two ways as many writes can...but it is a fun one E L ! Miserable little suckers aren't they ? lol they can be a muse or just little blood suckers feeding ... ( ; very creative !

They are luv, they are miserable little nasty suckers.... :D for the Malaria is even worse.... thanks for seeing the double fuzzy sight of it ; D hugs haha.... you're funny dear!

[Renée]

always a pleasure E L here they carry west nile virus

Oh no... very bad for the neuro system.... I know, I have heard of it, bad bad... do they have an antidote? I'm interested in this biological process... for it's probably to resolve with good brains, who think... I suppose....

[Renée]

No they don't ... but we are careful

Okay okay.... interesting, I will keep my eyes, and news feed onto this forever open thanks to you, if I absorb a thing, will notice you... :D

[Renée]

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[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm quite fond of the mosquito, myself. I won a spelling bee in the sixth grade by correctly spelling the word! I know, I know...hard to believe myself.

They are such annoying little creatures, though I haven't experienced them here in California. Perhaps they're too busy sipping Margarita's by the pool. ; )

Thanks for the memory, hun! Have a wonderful evening ~ Kelly.

Oh that's so so good of you Kels! oh I did doubt if it was spelled Mosquitos or Mosquitoes, I asked my sweet friend Girl Friday, and she explained it's an American/English difference... from out of Spanish (another of my languages) I should choose "mosquitos" for it's rather comfortable, but then in American it would not sound nice.... :) so I choosed the proper way for here. :) They are such annoying little creatures, so so right you are, I'm just so bitten last wednesday, I had a wedding where I wrote this one, in between, some keywords, and all my nieces and nephews, and other friends and fam, were bitten too, I think we have sweet blood lol.... it's humid and very hot right now in the Netherlands, mosquitoes love this. Other friends of me beneath the reviews, made me allert on the fact mosquitoes can fall down to a wall, by drinking drunken blood lol, It's soooo true, I never thought of it, but it has logic. I always have an Asian eucaliptus cream from my grandmother with me, which smells a bit of lemon, they hate it, and keep away... it's powerful stuff. I love your review, thanks for popping in dearest, and I can't wait to give you more of my thoughts, thank you so much... with love, and friendship, Elis xo