~ Funny Facts in Fullness on Free Mornings

~ Funny Facts in Fullness, for some fun. E.L. Elisa Laura (not special at all), just for freedom and for forever being me. A funny fact of you. Few... nice party it was...

~ Funny Facts in Fullness on Free Mornings

To have her fully for your own,

You must be one, fully open;

You must be one fully fearless

You must be fully "him".

I doubt the strength of full facts;

For they are fucked up, 

Further freaked out by tides of fake

Fused emotions by fire;

No freaking water to free;

The fear of the burning,

There never was a fluent balance;

For it brings no tears, nor

Fever only a fact of truth

To have one fully for your own,

You fulfill yourself with her,

You fulfill yourself with her happiness,

Not with your pity guilt.

To have one fully for your own;

You must leave your own fully for her;

Fully to fulfill her, fully to be fulfilled.

Not with projection, not with guilt.

Fullness, deep as a fishbowl, 

Fullfilled with Greek full liquor

Drunken philosophical facts;

Dionysos felt, to full fill your void

Heavenly visions, of heaven's earth;

Burned like vulcanos to void stomaches;

Vomiting guilt out in the morning

Reality felt, for denial is fucked up

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Do what you must,
Feel especially free...
Have fun :)

X

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Amazing words play and sense -play, dearest Eli! I like the tension in the F and V sounds, it also sounds as Freedom, Future, Forever, words which are my favorite! :) I like the way you express yourself here, and your thoughts of fully devotion...It`s something I always think about. I loved that to have someone" in your poem means to "totally love" someone. and you should be fully fearless, whatever is the world around! My favorite:
To have one fully for your own,
You fulfill yourself with her,
You fulfill yourself with her happiness,
Not with your pity guilt.

So wise, so deep! as only you can say it :)

-nour-
July-013

Thanks for your insights Sis, and for truly knowing me. Love you x

[Souladareatease]

Awww Elis indeed it felt a bit as a rant, these ARE but given truths that one SHOULD know--it felt as though You've been exposed to those who don't...somewhere along the way...I guess we all have eh? I came to writing borne from the ashes of one who was a master of masks...it taught me much after breaking...very much as I am...perceptive and read the walks of life well in their personality...this one wore many many unseen ways and demeanor...hidden almost as waking to a different person...I thought myself truly dumb as an innocent babe of sorts...I have always lived and been a very OPEN person ...as to my character, heart and mind...I give what I AM...this is why it confused me and baffled me...causing me much self psychology...to be always "thought aware" and and have a rug pulled ...it sent me to escape for some time....see the essence of Your Poem is truth in person...no denial of the self and equality of that in a connected other......free to be free ....and I was duped into believing such....very odd these people of the world who are literally only living to further themselves by leeching upon others in a complete false and pirated way...depleting the other while stockpiling for the self...uggh....hehehe Geeeesh Elis...I am sorry it is TRULY a wonderfully deep write-and YOU had fun with it...I don't mean to draw the fun from it...its just I saw the shadows in it---behind the light in truths. a deep write for me lol :D

LOL, this was just so fun to do... I had a bachelors party lately were we did pole dance, ha! I still have some bruises on my legs, this is a mix of creative art over different time jumps, I've explored... weddings, fun, crazyness in marriges, and to relativate it all, for life is short... To pole dance is a real sport, like I said to Corset, it is very undervalued by many people with prejudices. While it's a nice sport, and it not even has to do something with sex, or erotic thoughts, (hard to sepparete for many men), but it's true. If you knew how much arm strength you need to do it... then after we were all drunk, was remembering the moment. (not I was while I wrote this). My mind is as a holistic porcupine, some take a single spine from me, and I give 10 back. :) (hard to follow I know). But you did it so well, I'm glad it brought you back to yourself, and seeing yourself standing next to the sideline, for it's important to face yourself like that. I'm not perfect, I'm just releasing, what I absorb, on many moments... thank you dearly for being my friend, I appreciate you!!!!!! :)

[Souladareatease]

Indeed it does take strength...a good friend of mine is an instructor and She was hedging bet I couldn't mimic a couple forms---bet Your a*s I DID ;) but to do such feats for long periods...I will gladly go back to chopping wood for hours Lol (I'm the single spine guy :) --except certain wines I've tolerance to......indeed to realese whats given-whats learned--observation of life in all form...yours, mine, nature-neighbors---it's accumulative knowledge and gives the mind and spirit better perception as we walk...Indeed MANY of Your writes bring me to myself--I AM part egotist :) the other part is Your writing is that Universal and well written!!! ALWAYS appreciate You Elisa!!!

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Brilliant, fulfilling play with words, really energetic too, great work, very well done!

Haha, thanks love... :) I felt kinda funny that morning ;-)

[Richard Layne]

Denial is fucked up. Wow what a write--vomiting out the guilt. Free spirit, I envy you.

lol thanks Rich :) sometimes it's fun to write... ;) be back for yours! ;)

[Corset]

Firstly , rotflmao..did Ellie just say :fucked up" in here hahahahahaha awesome, that's awesome...ahh
I love the pole dancer, love should make you want to pole dance, this poem is spot on. You're amazing.

Thanks Corset lol, I guess I lost my class into the arms of steel :D haha... thank you so much love xx

[Corset]

you know those women have amazing arm strength, lol, they have too , she works that pole like she was born on it.

Hahahaha.... it's a sport, you know, much and many times seen as dirt... and a taboo on it, but I had cursus lately on a bachelor's party, pretty fun! xD I have respect for these women!

[Corset]

I could do that, ROTFLMAO, just kidding, well guess with enough practice a puppy or perhaps a cow could do it, (inside joke, calling myself a cow just now, no one else, I'd re- post that video but that would be repeating myself, it was a rich memory, golden)

[Soul Fire]

Whoa! very interesting tale this tells well done as always!

Thanks my friend, I felt kinda funny.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I loved this one Elisa! I feel like you've set yourself free a little bit here, and it's an interesting sort of freedom. Composure is over rated, sometimes we just need to strip off our clothes and run through the rain screaming nonsense at the top of our lungs, and sometimes, we are lucky enough to find someone who understands that need and is willing to cooperate with it. Beautiful...

Exactly for we all need some fun! :) thanks girl :D and we do! great to have your lovely sarcastic mind, by this morning, and thanks for your review :) (p.s. I"m not drunk) LOL....