~ Like some Wild Roses

~ Like some Wild Roses

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Today's poetry, out of the soul

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~ Like some Wild Roses

Today, I looked at your many faces;

They hung as love under the perfect sky,

 

I swoon like a lover in silence,

For you and me are there

 

Beneath the Wild Roses 

We become, the grass, the sand

The unconditional love,

 

With thorns around our stems,

We are entangled, as

We bleed into one.

 

But suddenly there were voices;

Calling me back, 

So I did prepare the BBQ.

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note

Photo made by me today,
Enter a dreamers mind ;)

Enjoy! x




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Daydreamish and full of happiness, not a single unpleasant care in the world is present here. How you can go from the most gorgeous and happy poetry to the darkest and most solemn with ease eludes me... My mind dwells no lit corridors. I think, that for a vacation i would like to visit your mind, and explore the world in your eyes and imagination.
The bbq part just jumped out of nowhere and made me smile. It was so random. lalalalala, look at the pretty flowers..... BBQ BABY!!!!!! :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

LOL my sweetheart, and bestie, how do I miss your reviews :) you are the only one who understands th.. read more



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So beautiful poem and photo, which I can even feel the scent of roses! For me wild roses always have deep meaning of love, heart attachment, place far away, passion, secret desires...I love their aroma. Your roses have the idea of transforming in another reality, where all senses are perfect, and where we dwell in great love, even bleeding - with our thorns, that is the price we pay to be "together" but that we even don`t notice, as our love is higher. (very enjoyable end, returning to "reality" :)

-nour-
July-013

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, we think alike, I love their aroma too, they smell so good, these ones I could sm.. read more
This is quite a wonderful journey of unity and collective understanding. I like you start the piece with his many faces of love. These faces seem authentic--they are not masks that provide false identities or facades. Instead, they define every facet of his beings. So he is a jack of all trades when it comes to love. I also really liked the moment where you spoke of how they merged into one. They are not just two lovers making love--they are a part of all things in this world.

The call back to the reality of physical duties made me smile; often times it goes that way, doesn't it?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much my dear friend, for picking all so precisely up, in that teriffic brain and feel.. read more
Haha busted! Funny how we carefully travel within a world of our own to gather all panoramic details and be soaked with our fantasies and suddenly poof! You have to prepare the BBQ. That is freakin' funny. You almost got me there:) Good job, good humor xoxox

Posted 11 Years Ago


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11 Years Ago

Haha lol, :D a smile from ear to ear here.... ;) So glad you enjoyed this one love xx
Androglossia

11 Years Ago

It is not very often that you feed us humor so this piece really standout.
A delightful poem. Very romantic. So like the world would be for two in love.
Very well written poem. Love the imagery in this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you dearly sweet Tina :) always happy to have you around!
what a beautiful picture this is EL. a blue sky, red roses whistling around in the light. you can almost
hear them speak.....just wonderful...thanks for sharing.
dana

Posted 11 Years Ago


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11 Years Ago

Hello sweet dana, thank you dear, for noticing that... you see beyond!! :) be back for yours! hope a.. read more
Love flows from your beautiful words and imagery as it does your lovely soul.

I swoon like a lover in silent,
For you and me are there......Love these lines!!!

But suddenly there were voices;
Calling me back,
So I did prepared the BBQ.

I like the way you ended this, from dreamy state, snapped back to reality. Nice twist.

Well done, another favorite.



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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much my sweet Traci! I'm glad that you enjoyed this one... hope all is well with you ((.. read more
"I swoon like a lover in silent,
For you and me are there"

~Ha-i do the same when i read your work ;)~
~no...really it's brilliant...beautiful!!!~

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Ha lol James .... ;-) thanks a bunch my friend
I liked the way that you identified with the wild roses. Your mind is flush with roses, and if you could you'd morph into a rosebush for a day. Then you'd write a poem about your experience as a rose bush. I'm intrigued by anthropomorphic rose bushes.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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11 Years Ago

Ha that's so nice you notice that friend, for I think you could be very right, thanks for understand.. read more
Wild Roses indeed, all the symbolism Paints of life as another calls for its need--Beautiful Painting Elisa!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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11 Years Ago

Thanks, G. :) so much!
Souladareatease

11 Years Ago

Lovely indeed

11 Years Ago

That makes me smile, thanks again... I'm catching up... :)
beauty from the beauty writer...adored
lovely photo and the words just add to it...beneath the wild roses with a BBQ what an image
thank you for sharing beauty writer

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Aww, Holly sweetheart, thanks so much for your lovely words! x

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