Daydreamish and full of happiness, not a single unpleasant care in the world is present here. How you can go from the most gorgeous and happy poetry to the darkest and most solemn with ease eludes me... My mind dwells no lit corridors. I think, that for a vacation i would like to visit your mind, and explore the world in your eyes and imagination.
The bbq part just jumped out of nowhere and made me smile. It was so random. lalalalala, look at the pretty flowers..... BBQ BABY!!!!!! :D
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11 Years Ago
LOL my sweetheart, and bestie, how do I miss your reviews :) you are the only one who understands th.. read moreLOL my sweetheart, and bestie, how do I miss your reviews :) you are the only one who understands this silly goose. :) You may always take a brief vacation in my head. I have reserved a seat especially for you! :) Let's eat!!!!!!!! :P
So beautiful poem and photo, which I can even feel the scent of roses! For me wild roses always have deep meaning of love, heart attachment, place far away, passion, secret desires...I love their aroma. Your roses have the idea of transforming in another reality, where all senses are perfect, and where we dwell in great love, even bleeding - with our thorns, that is the price we pay to be "together" but that we even don`t notice, as our love is higher. (very enjoyable end, returning to "reality" :)
-nour-
July-013
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, we think alike, I love their aroma too, they smell so good, these ones I could sm.. read moreThank you so much, we think alike, I love their aroma too, they smell so good, these ones I could smell on distance. My roses did that to me exactly, for they did speak to me, in a weird way, at least, (i'm not loosing my mind lol), but the connection with beauty you know... Thank you for always feeling my writes dearest! :) Smile from ear to ear overhere :D
This is quite a wonderful journey of unity and collective understanding. I like you start the piece with his many faces of love. These faces seem authentic--they are not masks that provide false identities or facades. Instead, they define every facet of his beings. So he is a jack of all trades when it comes to love. I also really liked the moment where you spoke of how they merged into one. They are not just two lovers making love--they are a part of all things in this world.
The call back to the reality of physical duties made me smile; often times it goes that way, doesn't it?
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11 Years Ago
Thank you very much my dear friend, for picking all so precisely up, in that teriffic brain and feel.. read moreThank you very much my dear friend, for picking all so precisely up, in that teriffic brain and feelers of yours! :) you made me smile, couldn't have said it better myself. You pretty know me haha.... :) hence to the last part. Thanks a lot.
Haha busted! Funny how we carefully travel within a world of our own to gather all panoramic details and be soaked with our fantasies and suddenly poof! You have to prepare the BBQ. That is freakin' funny. You almost got me there:) Good job, good humor xoxox
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11 Years Ago
Haha lol, :D a smile from ear to ear here.... ;) So glad you enjoyed this one love xx
11 Years Ago
It is not very often that you feed us humor so this piece really standout.
what a beautiful picture this is EL. a blue sky, red roses whistling around in the light. you can almost
hear them speak.....just wonderful...thanks for sharing.
dana
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11 Years Ago
Hello sweet dana, thank you dear, for noticing that... you see beyond!! :) be back for yours! hope a.. read moreHello sweet dana, thank you dear, for noticing that... you see beyond!! :) be back for yours! hope all is well with you :)
Love flows from your beautiful words and imagery as it does your lovely soul.
I swoon like a lover in silent,
For you and me are there......Love these lines!!!
But suddenly there were voices;
Calling me back,
So I did prepared the BBQ.
I like the way you ended this, from dreamy state, snapped back to reality. Nice twist.
Well done, another favorite.
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Thank you so much my sweet Traci! I'm glad that you enjoyed this one... hope all is well with you ((.. read moreThank you so much my sweet Traci! I'm glad that you enjoyed this one... hope all is well with you (((HUGS)))
I liked the way that you identified with the wild roses. Your mind is flush with roses, and if you could you'd morph into a rosebush for a day. Then you'd write a poem about your experience as a rose bush. I'm intrigued by anthropomorphic rose bushes.
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Ha that's so nice you notice that friend, for I think you could be very right, thanks for understand.. read moreHa that's so nice you notice that friend, for I think you could be very right, thanks for understanding my brain. :) and your nice review!
beauty from the beauty writer...adored
lovely photo and the words just add to it...beneath the wild roses with a BBQ what an image
thank you for sharing beauty writer
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11 Years Ago
Aww, Holly sweetheart, thanks so much for your lovely words! x