~ Let me kiss the Silence

~ Let me kiss the Silence, Elisa Laura, E.L. A poem from out of my hiatus, forfeelings, birds, love, rest, life, spring, happiness, moments...

~ Let me kiss the Silence

 

 

My silent muse,

The only way I see you;

Is; “like a prince of forlorn decades”

The question is;

“Would you stay”?

When I will forget “the time”?

 

Sip from your glass of wine,

Finish the blood of pleasure;

We are falling stars of love…

 

For our sins we do

Control in our strength;

 

Days,  are maybe gone,

But nights lasts long

Longer than anything...

 

Let me drown, into your arms

That are velveteen steel;

Let me be forever there

 

For I feel safe, and home,

Next to your heart---

 

We were too soon,

On a frisky night of love;

A steamy place of grace,

 

Now we know flying time isn’t

Only important,

But level is…

 

The very soft sighs whereby

We see our muses flow

Richer than we still both breathe...

 

I embrace your gift,

Of another day;

The tattooed hearted love to stay,

 

For I am, just a simple glimpse

Into your whole universe

Of grace…

 

For now just let me kiss the Silence

Of your heart---

 

Because I’m near…

 

 

-           Elisa Laura

Author's Note

~ Let me kiss the Silence
was a write I made, when I hiked for a day long, I sat on my bench, in the sun, and there was a little bird, resting on a tree. I thought it would be nice, to share this into metaphor with you... for I don't believe I didn't felt a moment...
Thanks for reading, until soon my friends, when time permits. xx



- Elisa

Reviews

[Jack...]

On a lonely branch you watch me as I write, my thoughts and dreams fly to paper as you might to a new tree, on silent wings. Still I see you, though deep in thought of another who builds his nest in my heart, I fly to him on winds of spring as you my little friend, dance in the warm sun.

Very cool Elisa, so beautiful and warm and filled with love.

Thank you so much my good friend, from the road, for popping in on this a bit older write, so appreciated, have a good Sunday.

[Sasha]

amazing !
loved every part of it !

Thank you kindly Sasha :)

[tuvi]

wow .... this is one slightly higher than my range of read so far ... but I'm glad I took the initiative to read it ....
I really liked the complexity of metaphors used here ....
its amazing and scary at the same time that love is so fragile as the bird ...
I'm somehow very much captivated by this write up ! off course with your due permission " would love to add this to my favorite "

You are so well crafted in words , presentation ...its discernible ....

Thanks for this lovely piece of work !!
It's nice to have such good writers around , that reminds me of how much more I need to improvise and learn from profound writers like you .....

Love,
Tuvi

Dear Tuvi, thank you so much for taking the time, and pleasure to review. You may add it to your favorite, always, take care :) thanks for your support.

[tuvi]

thanks dear :)

It is my pleasure to reach you, and others, I will come back for more of your fantastic stuff! x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like the complex metaphor in this...or allegory maybe.

you really do see the bird, you observe the bird...you glimpse its world and are near.

but that is just like love...we see the other person, observe that person, glimpse into his or her life...

with a part of our own...and we share hoping to fly off together...but sometimes there is just a simple glimpse, and that is all we get.
whether it is a lover or the muse....but we can only hope each will come back to stay in the comfort of our arms...or our pen...and that the relationship can fourish...good for both.

Thank you so much jacob, for this wonderful review. You always see some things beyond :)

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Love as fragile as a bird’s wings … I feel the stillness of the moment within the metaphorical word play of this exquisite write. A poetically cognitive composition of spontaneity; embracing the flavour of the instance!

Bless

Thank you so much my friend, you really get me on this one... for your talent, I come back... I will, I can't wait. - Elisa. Blessings