~ For Many Years of Thoughts and Whispers

~ For Many Years of Thoughts and Whispers, E.L. Elisa Laura, Love, Real Love, Visions, Trust, observations, a life time ahead, A life time almost gone... May... there, us. ♥

~  For Many Years of Thoughts and Whispers

 

Now you’re sitting there my love,

    Another year passed you by the lane

For many, many days together,

    The wind crossed your windowpane...

So often we rode together,

    But those times are dust by now;

Your thoughts rusty, touched by the weather

    As once we saw flowers along the road

 

This old library soaked you in,

    The immortal story to continue due

Life getting older, to move you within

    The immortality smell of ink’s and hue

 

Do you still remember? us laying down together,

    And hung above our heads this rood

There were we drove like new born children

    And where the moon did watch the wood…

 

You still hit some notes, on your old piano,

    Now and then, a song flies by on ivory keys,

Your hands still move, as the old days,

    I saw you real, and fell back onto my knees

 

Now here I am, old, fallen and next to you;

    Seeing you smiling by every book

Traveling your mind to youth, holding your hand,

    Whilst I sit still, appreciate you, there, and look...

 

My one and only love…

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

This was a pre-vision from May, I saw the future.

Enjoy,
xx


And now I can say, Oh yeah, I'm a very old soul in a young body....

Thank you x

Reviews

[Damien Thibodeaux]

This is beautiful. It feels like a love story from another time, like it could have been written generations ago. Ah, the immortality of ink. It shall remain when the flesh is but dust.

You have re-made yourself since you've been gone. Your poetry is different. I loved this poem.

Damien thank you for all you do... :) I'm happy to have you around.

[Friday]

Very nice flowing piece. I'm going to be a little wicked perhaps. I'm not sure about the 4:th line...shouldn't it be "window pane" (2 words). English isn't very rash at times :)

Thank you Fre! I will check it up tomorrow... :) so good always to have you by... - Eli

[Friday]

Can anyone please tell me how one differs between a "living room" and a "living.....room" (a room that lives in other words) in English for example? Just being curious :)

Interesting...

[Horizon K.]

May you grow old, together, with your love, and each shared moment from yesterday until forever be treasured... Yes you are an old soul dear sister, and this beautiful wistful poem, looking forward at yourself looking back, I know you are someone who knows each moment's worth. xoxo Horizon

Thank you so much Sister, for understanding my brain. :) One Love x