~ Magic

~ Magic, E.L. Elisa Laura, Love, Beach, Home, With You, There...

~ Magic

 

When the day makes love,

     To the night, for the last time;

There you can see the Magic,

     Like a perfect poetic line

 

Love  flew, like colorful pieces,

     Around your reflective being

Eyes who catch the message always;

     Are wise above the time they're seeing

 

No, rush, no lust, no wonder,

     Just embracing the nothingness of here,

Pure with the air we’re breathing,

     And love grows without any fear

 

To not want to touch it,

     Is the magic of all due time;

Be surrounded by it, is purity

     For shivers thrill down your spine

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you for reading...
A poem from out of my hiatus
Feel free ;)

x

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

the feeling of your poem is immense, and so wide variety! It`s wonderful to capture magic in all moments of love, in intimacy of nature and time...All your verses radiate purity and clarity of emotions...My favorite lines:
No, rush, no lust, no wonder,
Just embracing the nothingness of here,
Pure with the air we’re breathing,
And love grows without any fear

wonderful piece!
{nia}

Thank you dearest for picking out the lines you love the most, always happy when you are here.

[J. J. Nightingale]

As day entwines with dusk .. we love
Eyes touch places softly
The magic of eternity is ours
As day entwines with dusk .. we love

Soft, gentle .. beautiful ! ...... Jazz xx :)

Thank you my beautiful Jazzy xx :))

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome Little One .. :) xx

[Peter H]

i like the imagery of the twilight in this piece :)

Thank you dearly...

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

A lot of beautiful imagery here...sublime and soothing. This reminds me of a summer's afternoon, waning, while the sun descends on the horizon and people enjoy the last few hours of warmth and heat upon the shore. I love the feeling and the emotion illicited here. You write so eloquently about the ethereal beauty of things.

I thank you dearly my friend, glad you enjoyed this one! :)

[Leslie Philibert]

I`m glad I read this, I like her work...

Danke innig mein Freund :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

did you mean "time they're seeing"?

this is exquisite in the lines and imagery...i am still absorbing this piece...day and night making love...producing perfect poetic lines.

i like "the nothingness of here" which is actually quite something in reality.

there is something in the in between that only poets see and feel...

Yes, thank you, I meant that... :) and you're so right about the last part... beautiful review. Thanks j.

[kublakhan27]

Magic in the title, and magic in the words...I absolutely adore this piece...this is probably my new Eli favourite ;) Great work my friend :) xox

Thank you my sweet friend. :))) you can make the Eli smile xoxo

[kublakhan27]

And I'm happy to know I can do that :) Always a pleasure my friend :) xoxo

[Corset]

Ellie this was so eloquent and magestic, truely inspired.

Thank you beautiful.... ♥

[Inda]

This piece allowed me to feel a nice calm I rarely feel, so thanks for that. You've painted a great picture in few words and that is an great feat.

P.s: Welcome back!

Inda, my dear friend, thank you very much. So pleased you enjoyed this. :) grateful with your words, and thanks for the welcome back :)