~ Magic

~ Magic, E.L. Elisa Laura, Love, Beach, Home, With You, There...

~ Magic

 

When the day makes love,

     To the night, for the last time;

There you can see the Magic,

     Like a perfect poetic line

 

Love  flew, like colorful pieces,

     Around your reflective being

Eyes who catch the message always;

     Are wise above the time they're seeing

 

No, rush, no lust, no wonder,

     Just embracing the nothingness of here,

Pure with the air we’re breathing,

     And love grows without any fear

 

To not want to touch it,

     Is the magic of all due time;

Be surrounded by it, is purity

     For shivers thrill down your spine

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you for reading...
A poem from out of my hiatus
Feel free ;)

x

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

the feeling of your poem is immense, and so wide variety! It`s wonderful to capture magic in all moments of love, in intimacy of nature and time...All your verses radiate purity and clarity of emotions...My favorite lines:
No, rush, no lust, no wonder,
Just embracing the nothingness of here,
Pure with the air we’re breathing,
And love grows without any fear

wonderful piece!
{nia}

Thank you dearest for picking out the lines you love the most, always happy when you are here.

[wunder]

~'you can do magic'-awesome-shivering down my 'bionic' spine-you know-
i really like the rhyme-these lines...'there you can see the magic, like a
perfect poetic line'~and i love that song!!!~ ;-P

J

Ah James, why do you always bring me smiles I lost for so long lol, :D thanks bud!

[wunder]

~lol~sorry that was such a silly review-i've been at the doctors
every since we last spoke-i told you i was ill-just got home not
so long ago-i think-time is a bit distorted...BUT-as long as u r smiles'!!!~ :D

Thanks I like your kindness my friend. :D and it's no silly review at all! I did my job well if it could bring over these feelings :P

P.s I wish you all well.

[wunder]

~thanx-yer a dear-but hell-i'm an idiot-i made myself sick-sort of~
DUH!!!- :D
...i'll tell ya' 'bout it when i can see straight again~ ;)

[wunder]

~does that make any sense???~huh-lol~

HAHA.... I give you all space, and rest my friend.... ;-) aye!

[wunder]

~pffft-i think i'll hang around and make fool of myself for a time...ha!!!~
~me needs vacation anywhooo~ :)

Hey, you're no fool... :) never, for that rich poetry you just posted!!!!! I need one too....badly! haha

[wunder]

~let us all vacate then-
i will buy a '76 VW Vanagon-
and we'll travel the world~lol... ;D

That sounds too GOOD! :) I see you driving the beast... :D

[wunder]

~lmao-we'll go the back roads to all the remote spaces
that no-one ever sees-it will only take a decade or two-
and when we get lost we will know we are home~lol~ :)

On wich meds are you tonight dear? haha.... ;) lol my goodness~

[wunder]

~i know-i sound stoned-lol-i'll send you that InFo May TioN privately~lol~ :D

Hmmm. I am to sober. :D ok, tell me.

*TOO SOBER I AM. :D

[wunder]

~no such a thing-(or) too sober or not so sober etc...~
(wow-i am stupid!!!)

Like to be or not to be? :P Hidden Beatle lover :P

[wunder]

~yes!!!-everything is turning and spinning-suddenly~ :D

Haha Volks Wagen, The Beatles, Music, I knew you got it... ;D

[writing mojo]

you're so intense with the mending of nature in the enrapture of unveiling your spirit in a clustered accommodations to reach for stars, within the rhythm of time left...great piece

Thank you humbly my dear friend, I so appreciate your way of thinking...

[Souladareatease]

Much here to Love Elisa---but what a way to end--not wanting to touch it for fear of breaking its fragile Beauty-but hold it pure and dear for all eternal--very much I sigh to this Beautiful Ink

Thank you fine friend, for I'm sighing with you lol, for it's a gasp of elusiveness all the way, in beauty not to touch...

[Clockwork]

I like how you start with how the magic will come to be, and then show us how it is in all of its glory on the last stanza of this one. And that last stanza really just shows us how to let love naturally take its course instead of forcing it into existence. I think that is a really good message. I like these magical love poems from you. They have a very summer vibe to them, one that I miss very much.

Thank you very much my friend, for saying that. There is a lot of them, into my catalog, these were written in my hiatus, and actually I am preparing myself to show soon more horror I did...
This year, I didn't went to my Spain, so I did as if I was there, into this one ;-) for I miss the summer here in the rainy and overall grey clime, also very much... thank you for your time and effort my friend.

[Androglossia]

This poem speaks volume to me. It depicts the feeling of being deeply overwhelmed in mind or emotion which ushers a person into absolute contentment. I loved the third stanza and you know very well why:) I think it is the heart of the piece. This is 10/10.

Thank you sister, x you always feel me, yes we both know why... :) talk soon... until then xx

[Androglossia]

You're very welcome:) take your time!

[Traci]

Eli this is so eloquently written, with beautiful imagery. One of my new favorites.

“When the day makes love,
To the night, for the last time;
There you can see the Magic,
Like a perfect poetic line"

This is a perfect poetic line! You express the magic in day and night, words full of love, as we embrace the purity in your captivating words.

“No, rush, no lust, no wonder,
Just embracing the nothingness of here,
Pure with the air we’re breathing,
And love grows without any fear”

Magic is captured in your words, “And love grows without any fear”, simply brilliant, my favorite line.

Magic if found in real love, pleasure in the simplest of things, like a day at the beach savoring the essence of all things.

Traci dear, thank you so much for digging deeper into this one. You're the best, so pleased you enjoyed this one :)

[Pax]

First stanza ~
Reminds me of the summer time on the beach reaching for the one you love in one full embrace in poetic ambience of warmth and beauty.

Second stanza ~
Oh I can relate to it too well… Love indeed has many shades of color.. in your reflective being you’ll see the you, the wiser you and the stronger you that keeps you battle life’s challenges… love this line: “Eyes who catch the message always; Are wise above the time they're seeing”

Third Stanza ~
Oh how love grows without fear… that is simple brilliant.. you’re a wise one big sis… truly… in your words I see reality we live in of today…

Last stanza ~
I see magic shows itself when you least expected it… the purity of magic is how you let miracles come in into your life… with open arms...

Brilliant work big sis!

Thank you so much, I'm happy to see what you write about this! xx

[Pax]

your most welcome, you write beautifully big sis... hugs!

Thanks again lovely brother, I will catch up on more of yours, as soon as you're feeling well xx

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice photo. A cold beer, the beach and no place to go. One of best days of a life.
"No, rush, no lust, no wonder,
Just embracing the nothingness of here,"
Good to know peace and real pleasure. Real pleasure shouldn't be work. Should be free and easy. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Thank you my sweet friend, for you get it so well.... ;) makes me smile. Real love, and pleasure shouldn't indeed... it's there already :) coming back soon for yours! - Elisa