~ The Red Moss

~ The Red Moss, E.L. Elisa Laura, Fantasy, Reality?, Rest, Peace, A Writers Place, Visions, Free style

~ The Red Moss

 

 

No limits, no pain,

A land of passion without

The superficiality of needs

The color of love in this

Long vast red fields…

 

I walked to my land home,

I saw ages passing, I saw them fly-

The journey felt for eternity

Tearing me into it nearby

 

Optimism here was different,

Grey was the color of peace,

And red was the one of

Neutralism, and the love

For no trees

 

Plain simple, as all what

Was needed was there,

No wings were rusted,

No birds with fear,

 

The land of

The Red Moss was here,

My new home,

There, finally near

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Feel free...
Thank you xx

Reviews

[wunder]

~"Plain simple, as all what
Was needed was there,
No wings were rusted,
No birds with fear,

The land of
The Red Moss was here,
My new home,
There, finally near"~wow!~
~Lovely poetess-i may just stop by-and
start swiping your poetry~ :-D ~beautiful~ :))

Thank you so much my dear friend. :)) you always shine on my page :)) can't thank you enough xx

[wunder]

~~~welcome~~~ :) ~~~

[Lover Of Words]

Again i am full of amazement.... Great job my friend

Thank you so much Kelsey, dear! :) happy you enjoyed it!

[Lover Of Words]

Your welcome my pleasure!!!!

Thank you again love x

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure!

[Traci]

So, so beautiful and captivating. The music set a perfect tone, allowing me to not only read your words but feel them. Absolutely one of my favs, and such a pleasure to be reading your fine work again.

Thank you love, for being here... this one posted tonight, :D it was a write from May, in my hiatus... so glad you can feel the wholeness. Lot's of love to you! mail you tomo :D xoxo :)

[KeeD]

The ambiance of this piece is breathtaking, mind cleansing and set me in a state of nirvana. I imagined myself in such a place breathing the air, meditating in the positive vibes of your words.
Favorited, One of the best poems I've ever read from presentation to execution it's perfect.

Keegan, :) good to have you by, and extremely good you mention "nirvana' for you understand my brain, I guess. Thank you so much, I'm honored by your visit :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

We should never define anything by its appearance. A wonderfully inspiring poem.

Dale thank you very much :) glad you liked it. Hope all is well :)

[Babe Roxx]

A very tranquil and enchanting poem, Elisa. The image was so vivid. :)


~Ev

Ev, thank you dear, lovely to see you by my friend, great you found it tranquil, :)

[Babe Roxx]

You're very welcome, Elisa.

Yeah, tranquil. :)

[PurpleQuartz]

I was bewitched by this poem. I felt as if I could see it all with my eyes and feel it with my heart.
It really is an honour to be reading your poetry once more.

That means so much to me you say this... thank you dearly my friend. My job is done when it was a bit captivating :) (hug)

[Nihad Dweidary]

I love how you couple the music with the words. The atmosphere becomes so haunting. I love how you reversed what things stand for. You created a new land, a new vision, one we have not seen before. Beautiful. Really beautiful! -Nihad

Thank you so much for supporting me on that, for it's who and what I am, connected in all matters to music. I write on it, I sleep with it, I eat with it, and well.... yeah.... :D
Thanks for your constantly support, and friendship. - Elisa, lovely words!

[Jack...]

So very charming my friend. Like a cool breeze on a hot summer day, your words flow through me. You make me feel at peace with your poem this day my good friend. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece with us.

I feel so happy Jack I could give you a peaceful feeling, for that's what I want and would be the best gift, for everyone (on here, or in life). A restful place, where we can write, dance, make music, have fun, and most of al, share love. :) Thank you so much my dear sweet friend.