~ The Red Moss

~ The Red Moss, E.L. Elisa Laura, Fantasy, Reality?, Rest, Peace, A Writers Place, Visions, Free style

~ The Red Moss

 

 

No limits, no pain,

A land of passion without

The superficiality of needs

The color of love in this

Long vast red fields…

 

I walked to my land home,

I saw ages passing, I saw them fly-

The journey felt for eternity

Tearing me into it nearby

 

Optimism here was different,

Grey was the color of peace,

And red was the one of

Neutralism, and the love

For no trees

 

Plain simple, as all what

Was needed was there,

No wings were rusted,

No birds with fear,

 

The land of

The Red Moss was here,

My new home,

There, finally near

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Feel free...
Thank you xx

Reviews

[wunder]

~"Plain simple, as all what
Was needed was there,
No wings were rusted,
No birds with fear,

The land of
The Red Moss was here,
My new home,
There, finally near"~wow!~
~Lovely poetess-i may just stop by-and
start swiping your poetry~ :-D ~beautiful~ :))

Thank you so much my dear friend. :)) you always shine on my page :)) can't thank you enough xx

[wunder]

~~~welcome~~~ :) ~~~

[Pax]

I marvel into your fantasy world big sis... I love this... i feel like i have step in this land of dreamy piece you wrote...

Optimism here was different,
Grey was the color of peace,
And red was the one of
Neutralism, and the love
For no trees

Oh how i love that verse... it gives strenght to me like i always thought of optimism and Neutralism in harmony in my mind... the grey color of peace is well fitting to the solemnity of the imagery of your art... Great work big Sis...

Hey Paxie thank you dear... I'm so glad you could put strength out of it. :) Take care bro tight hug!

[Pax]

hugs back tighter plus a wide smile... your very welcome.... take care as well... stay healthty.. :)

I work on it lovely one. At least I´m less dizzy. Hugs back at you dear. Till the moment is their...

I meant (there) x

[Pryde Foltz]

I love the clear, crispness of this one.

Thank you very much for saying that Pryde :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love all the imagery in this...such beauty in your words, but what really strikes me in this is something i think is so important...love not built on need, but just attraction, want and mutual respect.
"no wings rusted/ no birds with fear"

when we "need" that causes expectations and fear...but if we just want the love of another for who they are...that is something to sing about.

That's the love jacob, my hippie friend, I do love you say that!!! great eagle eyes j. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The simplicity of life... when all is pure and fear was not harboring on thoughts..
I love that you have depicted grey to be a peaceful color in your mind's eye....and red being the purity of love without anything toxic to taint the passion.This is an exotic expression indeed!...A lovely write Eli. ~xoxo~:)

Thank you Sis, for you exactly know always where my heart lays.... where it beats.... :) so happy to have your words by for nobody knows me as well as you!!! :) xoxoxoxoxoxoxo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I feel our connection, always Eli... it's you! Really magical woman! :)
This is enchanting. ~xoxo~:)

AS I FEEL YOURS! nobody knows me better than SIs! love you xoxo :) thank you so much!!!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

always a treat to read your art Sis. ~xoxoxo~

As I do love yours, for we are some sassy opposites and that's what is just awesome!!!! LOL :D love you!!!!!!! xoxoxoxox :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

love you too!... now go to bed! (((hugs)))~xxxxxx~ :D

[J_Star]

It usually irritates the crap out of me when videos start auto-playing when I land on a page, but in this instance, I let it play on, transfixed by how the words moved through the sound of the music. Really nice fit together.

Yeah I know a lot of people hate it, but for me it's a total package, for I'm a musician as well as a poetess, and I can't explore myself not without one and the other... so I am humbled, you said this honestly, and also, you still visit, without being irritated by it. It means a lot to me, and I shall not forget, for I come by for yours either.... in due time! :) thank you.

[J_Star]

Do you have synesthesia?

Hmmm interesting, do you mean the band? (music)? or the Sixth Sense kind of feeling?

[J_Star]

I mean the crossed-senses business. Like do you hear colors, or see sounds, or anything like that. For instance, when you hear this music, is another sense tied to the experience?

Yes, I have... (at least) they say... :) I get it in, I write it out, I breathe in life, I breathe out Poetry, yes, I do. I do often write on the music I've posted, but I can also write with no music, and pretty soon find the absolute piece after... (not longer than 4/5 minutes to find).
And I'm lucky to be a bit eclectic.

[J_Star]

All the best people are eclectic, don't you know :)

............................... I know..... ;) but I am never too old to discover more!!! for music is infinite!

[Clockwork]

While this piece also has infinite tones in it, like the Man of Gold, it has a more earthy feel. I see more country landscapes here, maybe barns and pastures. Although the place and the journey you describe is still a magical one. I enjoyed the third stanza the most. That sounds like a truly great feeling, and an extremely soothing place to be!

Thank you so much dear Christian, for your time and review, and for picking out my favorite stanza too. :) I imagine this place in my Second World, as a place and a home to write in, to feel safe, to not feel any harm of anyone, but to focus on love and peace. Your review, brought me back again, so thanks... my friend.

[Clockwork]

You're welcome :-) thank you for sharing this piece of that wonderful world!

Thank you so much again for visiting me. It's always a honor when you come by :)

[Clockwork]

Always good to visit your world, Elisa.

:-)

That's beautiful, for I do love yours as much too!

[Astro]

I like how you express the escape fantasy in words that describe alien characteristics of a new reality, one that can only be understood by sending the writers mind on an imaginary journey where anything is possible and can be understood through a poetry all your own. The ambient music you have attached is the first music accompaniment that I have enjoyed while reading. I often find it hard to concentrate with the addition of music, it pulls me away from meaning and blinds me to form. Well done.

Thank you very much Astro, :) Cheers!!

[Astro]

You're welcome

[J. J. Nightingale]

There was no pain nor fear
I was getting closer
Finally near... home..

Beautiful ... Lovely ......... Jazz xx

Thank you so so much lovely woman! xx

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome Little One .................... xx

[Ken Simm.]

The words that come from this other place of yours are truly remakable Elisa. There is a real sense of freedom of spirit here. And I enjoy the use of colour metaphor.

Nice you pick that out dear Ken, thank you fine sir.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Oh, to be so pure and free... This would be a wonderful place to spend a lifetime; just here within your words and the world that you have created with them. I love the idea of transcendence and metamorphosis within this piece. You always speak to the heart of the matter, my friend.

Thank you my dear friend, yes, I am inspired by transcendence and metamorphosis, always.... :) so good to have you by, thank you. :)