~"Plain simple, as all what
Was needed was there,
No wings were rusted,
No birds with fear,
The land of
The Red Moss was here,
My new home,
There, finally near"~wow!~
~Lovely poetess-i may just stop by-and
start swiping your poetry~ :-D ~beautiful~ :))
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much my dear friend. :)) you always shine on my page :)) can't thank you enough xx
I love the simplicity of this piece. This would make a beautiful song.
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10 Years Ago
Thank you again dear, actually it was a written song by me, I wondered who noticed, couldn't miss yo.. read moreThank you again dear, actually it was a written song by me, I wondered who noticed, couldn't miss you did.... :)
"Love for no trees" ? I love me some trees. E, what do you mean by this?
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11 Years Ago
This write is surreal my friend, really a 200 or 300 percent. So all that we normally adore, I try t.. read moreThis write is surreal my friend, really a 200 or 300 percent. So all that we normally adore, I try to block into this one. See it as a living on Barsoom (mars). :) it's the paradox of my brain.
11 Years Ago
*tried ...................... typo ;)
11 Years Ago
So too the red grass?
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The same, my friend, try to feel for a change, all that is out of your comfort zone, all that is the.. read moreThe same, my friend, try to feel for a change, all that is out of your comfort zone, all that is the total contrast of your thinking, (and feel free), which color your grass turns into? :) xx
11 Years Ago
probably brown or orange, that would be horrendous haha. Thanks for explaining
11 Years Ago
That would be perfect, that explains, why you picked out your profile picture, with "blue-orange" th.. read moreThat would be perfect, that explains, why you picked out your profile picture, with "blue-orange" those colors, in painting are the two contrast opponents, linea-recta. ;)
11 Years Ago
Perhaps haha, I'm terrible with colour which is why I have difficulty painting.
11 Years Ago
I think all art, is difficult, when you're not feeling it a 300%... but overthink it too much.
11 Years Ago
(that was typicly Dutch logica, I meant to say lol, to think it over).
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For me I can see it perfectly in my mind but I just can't get it out.
11 Years Ago
hmmm I wonder what that is, I think it's fear to fail, or fall.... or it's just not exactly ready fo.. read morehmmm I wonder what that is, I think it's fear to fail, or fall.... or it's just not exactly ready for you to come out (as you prefere).
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No, I think I just have a disconnection from my brain somewhere. It is the same with my speech, some.. read moreNo, I think I just have a disconnection from my brain somewhere. It is the same with my speech, sometimes I just can't say what I mean.
11 Years Ago
To be biological^ haha
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and that makes me think what the exact difference is; between a blockade and a disconnection, the mi.. read moreand that makes me think what the exact difference is; between a blockade and a disconnection, the mind is the most wonderful tool to discover. :) (p.s. I know this feeling), sometimes I feel nothing at all. Totally void. Then I am blunt to others, and can't react normally. Or it not comes out normal, or like I prefered.
11 Years Ago
I really don't mind, it just makes choosing words more important.
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Yes, you're frustrated, people pick out words to "try to make a write" I read that somewhere earlier.. read moreYes, you're frustrated, people pick out words to "try to make a write" I read that somewhere earlier this eve/night....
Ah yes. This is true, people often create things that don't make sense
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True to that, and that's art... in poetry, you can create whole new worlds, not all (has to be as yo.. read moreTrue to that, and that's art... in poetry, you can create whole new worlds, not all (has to be as you said to someone too this night) so personal ;)
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You puzzle me sometimes too, make me think I guess
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You have to know me very well, to understand me, I think no guy ever has found the key, to solve the.. read moreYou have to know me very well, to understand me, I think no guy ever has found the key, to solve the mystery. I'm mostly a fantasy / romance / science writer. Some horror along the way too...
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I do not think I want to. Like I said before mystery is fun haha
Mystery is what keeps people interested, (they say)..... I know you and me, follow our own road... b.. read moreMystery is what keeps people interested, (they say)..... I know you and me, follow our own road... but we have appreciation! haha
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I know what you mean
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Long live the freedom of a writer....... fly high, my free bird....
~"Plain simple, as all what
Was needed was there,
No wings were rusted,
No birds with fear,
The land of
The Red Moss was here,
My new home,
There, finally near"~wow!~
~Lovely poetess-i may just stop by-and
start swiping your poetry~ :-D ~beautiful~ :))
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much my dear friend. :)) you always shine on my page :)) can't thank you enough xx
such wonderful dreamland here:) such calm , a place where one may float and feel in perfect harmony.
Excellent Pen Elisa!!!
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11 Years Ago
Yes, this is the place I write, in my Second world... thank you so much dear friend :) always happy .. read moreYes, this is the place I write, in my Second world... thank you so much dear friend :) always happy to see you.
This poem is artfully done. Every environment is a system in harmony with itself. Your poem and picture inspired me to write this gift poem which you may keep as your own:
New Worlds
Gray above and red below
charcoal houses in between,
makes it possible to know
other places seldom seen.
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11 Years Ago
Hey Aethereal, thank you so much for this lovely poem to a poem, I so appreciate your words, beautif.. read moreHey Aethereal, thank you so much for this lovely poem to a poem, I so appreciate your words, beautiful.
Your words are as breathtaking as that picture! I too was struck by your use of color in:
Optimism here was different,
Grey was the color of peace,
And red was the one of
Neutralism, and the love
For no trees
Grey- the color of peace just makes so much sense. The perfect blend of black and white. Red- not a taunt nor the color of blood but the color of the vibrant world of acceptance and harmony. It is so good to read you once again.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you very much, for understanding and feeling my poem, my friend... Hope all is well, and come .. read moreThank you very much, for understanding and feeling my poem, my friend... Hope all is well, and come back for you soon, glad you enjoyed this one.
i love the peaceful clear view of the place with red moss! It`s so mysterious, also has deep feeling of returning home, reminds me of filed of subconsciousness, where we live in our dreams. It has feeling of love, pain and world out of the time. It`s empty, but in the same time is full with the view and feeling of home. Loved this:
Plain simple, as all what
Was needed was there,
No wings were rusted,
No birds with fear,
{nia}
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11 Years Ago
Thank you dear for your wonderful words, they always make me happy :) you feel me!