~ The Red Moss

~ The Red Moss

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~ The Red Moss, E.L. Elisa Laura, Fantasy, Reality?, Rest, Peace, A Writers Place, Visions, Free style

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~ The Red Moss

 

 

No limits, no pain,

A land of passion without

The superficiality of needs

The color of love in this

Long vast red fields…

 

I walked to my land home,

I saw ages passing, I saw them fly-

The journey felt for eternity

Tearing me into it nearby

 

Optimism here was different,

Grey was the color of peace,

And red was the one of

Neutralism, and the love

For no trees

 

Plain simple, as all what

Was needed was there,

No wings were rusted,

No birds with fear,

 

The land of

The Red Moss was here,

My new home,

There, finally near

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


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~"Plain simple, as all what
Was needed was there,
No wings were rusted,
No birds with fear,

The land of
The Red Moss was here,
My new home,
There, finally near"~wow!~
~Lovely poetess-i may just stop by-and
start swiping your poetry~ :-D ~beautiful~ :))




Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much my dear friend. :)) you always shine on my page :)) can't thank you enough xx
wunder

11 Years Ago

~~~welcome~~~ :) ~~~



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I love the simplicity of this piece. This would make a beautiful song.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Calissa Knox

10 Years Ago

That's wonderful! I would love to hear your song sometime, I know it's beautiful. :)

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much again.... xx :)
Calissa Knox

10 Years Ago

You're very welcome. :)
Tearing me into nearby...hits home. Lovely poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thanks luv, I knew you would feel home in such a surreal place :) makes me smile! thanks a lot!
"Love for no trees" ? I love me some trees. E, what do you mean by this?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Mystery is what keeps people interested, (they say)..... I know you and me, follow our own road... b.. read more
Kenaz

11 Years Ago

I know what you mean

11 Years Ago

Long live the freedom of a writer....... fly high, my free bird....
~"Plain simple, as all what
Was needed was there,
No wings were rusted,
No birds with fear,

The land of
The Red Moss was here,
My new home,
There, finally near"~wow!~
~Lovely poetess-i may just stop by-and
start swiping your poetry~ :-D ~beautiful~ :))




Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much my dear friend. :)) you always shine on my page :)) can't thank you enough xx
wunder

11 Years Ago

~~~welcome~~~ :) ~~~
such wonderful dreamland here:) such calm , a place where one may float and feel in perfect harmony.
Excellent Pen Elisa!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Yes, this is the place I write, in my Second world... thank you so much dear friend :) always happy .. read more
Very beautiful, this made me feel peaceful after reading it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you dearly my friend. I'll come back soon for you.
This poem is artfully done. Every environment is a system in harmony with itself. Your poem and picture inspired me to write this gift poem which you may keep as your own:

New Worlds

Gray above and red below
charcoal houses in between,
makes it possible to know
other places seldom seen.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Hey Aethereal, thank you so much for this lovely poem to a poem, I so appreciate your words, beautif.. read more
Nice









realy nice






Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot :)
ayosonolowo

11 Years Ago

Youu are welcome
Your words are as breathtaking as that picture! I too was struck by your use of color in:

Optimism here was different,

Grey was the color of peace,
And red was the one of
Neutralism, and the love
For no trees

Grey- the color of peace just makes so much sense. The perfect blend of black and white. Red- not a taunt nor the color of blood but the color of the vibrant world of acceptance and harmony. It is so good to read you once again.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much, for understanding and feeling my poem, my friend... Hope all is well, and come .. read more
i love the peaceful clear view of the place with red moss! It`s so mysterious, also has deep feeling of returning home, reminds me of filed of subconsciousness, where we live in our dreams. It has feeling of love, pain and world out of the time. It`s empty, but in the same time is full with the view and feeling of home. Loved this:
Plain simple, as all what
Was needed was there,
No wings were rusted,
No birds with fear,

{nia}

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear for your wonderful words, they always make me happy :) you feel me!

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