~ I Could Hear Your Liquid Melody

If you listen you can hear, another half... in words, music, love, and distance.

~ I Could Hear Your Liquid Melody

 

 

The notes of your violin,

Cried, like painful, truth

Yet hidden in the strength

Of this perfect male sensuality

 

Only you could move me, on a record,

Like a marionette, of love, making me

A dancing doll for a moment, forgotten by

All time due, rush…

 

Melancholic pleasure-

Soaking into the deep

Black hole, of being lost there,

Together, but powerful together alone;

 

On distance, I dance with you,

So close inside of my heart

We breathe the music of passion

Like we play and sing as one

 

With every gasp you took;

Whilst playing your wooden child;

 

I fell in love, and deeply in love with you,

With your music, before we ever met

 

Your hair beautifully dark as the night,

Your eyes, could draw a landscape by their own;

A sea of loneliness, wherein I could drown -

 

Your hands, as soft as silk,

Playing so gracefully in distance for me,

 

A medley of tears, for me to catch,

I would save them like little raindrops,

In this glass I’m holding,

 

I will keep them forever safely,

Next to the shell of joy,

So I can hear, but also watch,

 

 

Your  Liquid Melody…

      Mixed with your heart strings

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Inspired by Russia, and the fantastic stories and literature of this beautiful country.
Love is something elusive. Freestyle poetry/Prose, whatever you want to call it...


Enjoy!

Reviews

[Matt Sayer]

The music, defying distance. Tears and laughter, coaxed like a timid mouse by the soothing strings, the melody of moods penned by a musical heart. Truth in vibrations: spoken, sung, screamed. An orchestra of life drawing two souls into a dancing duet, the peaks, the lulls, the climactic crescendo: love in stereo.
Your poetry resonates so evocatively with me, Elisa. Love this :) xxxx

You have a gift you know that my dear friend ;) it's beyond A.I. ;) thank you so very much for digging into my work, and to feel and understand it so well.... xxxx

[h d e rushin]

just beautiful..........where have you been.
I missed you.

dana

Dana dear, I'm so happy to be back, you have no idea... life called my name, and I did follow for a while.... I missed you too! can't wait to read you my dear friend xx

[Poetic Justice]

beautifully haunting..and visually simulating..

PJ, love, thank you! good to be back after a long time, and to see YOU!!! missed reading you, i'll be around hope all is well with you :)

[Poetic Justice]

having to care for my parents currently, so this is taking a back seat..but it's good to read your work, you haven't lost your touch x

Aw, thankies dear, I know what you mean with that... I was off to care here too... can't wait to read you! xx