~ Backwards

Love, Romance, Place to wake up, Euphoria

~ Backwards

 

 

I once belonged to steal the night, from a day,

But what a wonderful garden you’ve grown,

A window pane, so transient, visions into

Delights bloom, grace and harmony, of your own

 

Now nothing less is brought to me,

Just your eloquent voice of  rest and peace,

Burned us backwards against the clock

There is no more need to cry out the salt of tears

 

Embrace the pain, softly and with your careful touch,

Whisper it, your invisible heart, through the morning dew;

Paint the name, for it has to be buried there

Deep underneath this bed of leaves anew…

 

Now closed eyes will bring you forward

To awake into the bed of being there at home;

A place to stay, and to forever wake-up

On Sunday mornings, with a timeless love so prone

 

 

-           Elisa Laura

Author's Note

This is a write from April 2013,
I hope you enjoy! :) do what you must,
Constructive Critisism is always appreciated,
Love, Elisa

Reviews

[Rosalind Gale]

You do me in baby, my head always a mix of things when I read you. All sorts of one thing set next to another. You are unpredictable, yet at the same time, you make everything end in the way I hope it will. I so hope you are happy my dear Elise. Big kiss and hugs - my so talented writer -
Rosalind
-xxx-

Oh Rosie, sniff, you brought me tears to my eyes, my darling... you know we have such a strong bond, even when we don't hear eachother for a very long time... I thought of you that much lately, and now you just pop in, it's fate, for sure.... I hope you're well, and enjoying every tiny piece of life, and I'm there for you too in a while, I promise... my also ever talented muse. :) Love to you Rosie, and a strong hug from the Netherlands... ♥

[Richard]

I think that's genius to add a song to your poems ... everything from the font to the romantic style it's this is great I hugely enjoyed this it's very lovely

Richard, thank you. Also for being here on my page, I returned after a while... I can't live without music, and music can't I guess without me, all I do, is on or with music, and without it, it won't be Elisa.... so, I'm grateful for you having my back on that ;) thanks.

[Richard]

Haha yes and I really like that ... music can't live without me ... because it can't ...with no ears there can be no music :) Although Beethoven might argue ...

Aw yeah that's very true :)

you're very welcome

Beethoven is my old friend, I just love his argue's ;) for he, once had made a piece on my name LOL.... So good to have you by, thanks again, I shall read you soon!!

[Richard]

did he really? named Elisa? wow that is an honor :)

thanks very much as well I look forward to it

I guess everyone knows the medly.... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LQTTFUtMSvQ choppy quality though, but I couldn't find a better one within time... just for the idea ;)

[Richard]

oh yes I do know now thank you for that :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

It is natural to become one with nature
The leaves fall, then carry the weight of loving
Rest in gentle peace my love
I am your succor..

I love the music you chose !
This is romantic, soft and natural

Jasmine ♥♥

And thank you my beautiful friend... I have no words, for what you just said... ♥

[Friday]

Beautiful writing. I thought I'd write eloquent but it's in the piece so I can't...:)

Hi Friday, thank you so much for passing by here, and your wonderful words... they mean a lot.

[Friday]

Dank :)

You speak Dutch? :)

[Friday]

A little/Een beetje (something..:)

Nice nice... keep on practicing, if you need any help, you know where to find me.

[Androglossia]

Did someone come home? Was that the reason of your absence? Oh, I can see a garden in full bloom sprinkled with so much love and renewed moments of bliss and contentment. To wake up with your one true love next to you is pure happiness so innocent that you want to freeze the moment just to soak yourself with it. I hope I wasn't wrong. I really enjoyed this, my dear:) Glad you're finally here.

Such a warm, and heartfelt interpretation dearest, there were we all are on a Sunday morning, woven into the soft blankets of bliss ;) thank you so so much! So good to have you around again! Love...

[Androglossia]

Hmm.. so you are a flower in full bloom then:D With pinkish cheeks and an obvious smile. I'm so happy for you.

Yes, you can say that ;) it goes better than ever.... hehe.... :D

[Androglossia]

Woot woot! Here comes the happiest woman :)

Awwww (((HUG))) it's good to be back!

[Androglossia]

HuGs back at ya *_^

[Jack...]

I loved it, it felt peaceful to me and very relaxing. It is so nice to see you back again my long lost friend.

Jack hiii!!! thank you with whole my heart dear friend, I missed you guys! A lot happened... It's good to be back! :)