~ There at Home

~ There at Home, E.L. Elisa Laura, Fantasy, Fiction, Mystery, Secrets, Cave, Home Love, Peace...

~ There at Home

 

A new day was there, I woke up into this huge cave

As big as a mouth of an animal of forlorn times

The sun reverberated through the caverns,

I stretched myself, and smiled, I was ready for a new day

 

He stood there, in the line of the sunlight

Too far away to see his face, but I knew he was

Off duty today, and human… slowly I walked to him

“Where are we”? I asked, He answered: “you’re home”.

 

I didn’t needed to know more, it felt as home,

And every breath I took, translated my heart

Into little smaller pieces of happiness

Here was no hate, or sorrow, it felt just peaceful

 

Many sound effects echoed through the cracks,

White gulls flew by, and sang their own song

And then I felt his warm hand on my shoulder, 

“Let’s go outside, my lady, I'll show you my secret”.

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Clockwork]

In some ways this reminded me of the scene from Inception where they wash up on the beach of the deepest level of dreams. In your poem, sunlight really resonates on that beach and delivers true purity and cleansing to everything it touches. The cave especially seems to be full of light and promise for a delightful adventure with a special someone.

Wow, C. rich visions again, for I can tell you it was all fictive. :) I do love probably a charming man, who shows me the way... ;) good to have you by C. so appreciate it.

[PurpleQuartz]

This is so lovely! I love the feeling of belonging and being in the perfect place! Beautifully captured Elisa :)

Wow, thank you PQ, so happy you are here... x

[Distant horizons]

Perfect description of not only the new day, but the feeling that, yes, today is and can be a new day. For all of us. Anywhere your heart can be translated into smaller pieces of happiness, sound like a true home to me.
Another wonder filled slice of Elisaness :-)

Exactly dear friend, thank you for your insightful gateways your brain tells us here. X

[Distant horizons]

Your welcome tulip :-)

:-)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

there is always something quite measured, your value of tranquilty about much of your writing, these are themes which you express to such a variation of ways, I love this

Thank you so much lovely one!!! :) London dearheart, I'm so happy to see you always, and you feel it always so good! thanks dear!

[icelandicblue]

There is no more beautiful backdrop than nature. To awake to the sounds and smells of the outdoors and of course to someone special makes us realize that it is the most exquisitely simple things that makes life beautiful.

Thank you so much my dear Lady for your encouriging visions... :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Wow! Such a beautiful place. You are really home...a peaceful home.
Like this much.

Hello dear dhaye, thank you so much, for being here, and reading :) it means much to me, this was a piece after the one before... there is more to come soon, and I will come back for you too!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Nice choice of music, too. :)

Thank you dearly :) my friend!