~ Highway of Dreams

~ Highway of Dreams, Elisa Laura, E.L. Fantasy, There...

~ Highway of Dreams

 

On her knees she felt the soil,

The light and soft drops as 

Transparent worlds her wet skin.

 

Thousands of  little crystals

Reflected the early moon’s shimmer

She was arrived in his dream...

 

Now there he stood, upon the stream,

" Come take my hand "

His low strong voice whispered...

 

He sounded calm, and pleasant

The way he looked at her, made her heart sing

And believe in his trustful manners

 

She took his hand, and climbed

Upon the edge of these two delightful

Elements of this place, filled with magic

 

With the passion of curiosity,

And fire sparks in her heart,

She gave herself over to his land

 

With twilight in the air, and the whirl of leaves,

She looked upon his white elves hair,

As he smiled, and said, "You are safe here"

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

Author's Note

Do what you must ;)
Thank you xx

Reviews

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

You are a siren of poetry dear soul! I have walked in your palace many times before..listening...lingering..soaking in the hues of light and dark...passions and tears. I was afraid that if I made a noise..it might fade away like a dream. I am confident now that it is you I hear singing by the water! Thank you for sharing your beauty.It has brightened my soul and led me back to a home that is growing green again with life.

Thank yo so much for this most stunning review.... :) so happy you're here in my Second World. ;) you have rich feelers, and a great reviewing skills. I shall come by soon for you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this reminds me of "because i could not stop for death" by emily dickinson...only the language is more beautiful and uplifting.

a date with death...but he is not depicted as the grim reaper...he is depicted as a kind gentleman...like a guide..like a protector...we are safe with him.

i may be way off, but that is where this delicious piece of writing took me.

your poems always seem metaphysical in some sense....not quite earthly.

Oh jacob, this is wonderfully interpret out of my little words, you give me new insights, here. :) lately I feel metaphysical maybe... sharp eyes again my friend... grateful to have you always around.

[Adam :P]

i like the imagery great poem

Thank you very much Adam :)

[Alexander Rodgers]

Another beautifully written piece of work, and you always find the perfect music to fit with it! And pictures too, how do you do that!? Lol ;). I love the fantasy aspect of this, the tale of love, safety, and land. ''With the passion of curiosity,

And fire sparks in her heart,

She gave herself over to his land'' That is great! Keep up the good work Eli :)

Thank you dear friend, really... It comes to me, I guess...? I don't know, the pen does often it's work, :) your words are treasured here Alex! :)

[Alexander Rodgers]

You're welcome :). That's true, the pen does often do it's own work, more times than not. And thank you, as are your words :)

Most welcome, after my movie I come back to delve more into your pieces, :)

[Alexander Rodgers]

I thank you for your consideration and reviews of my work so far :), no rush of course :), you are one of the best reviewers!

Aw, that's so sweet of you to say, thank you too, for your heartfelt writes... I enjoy them. :) till a bit later :)

[Alexander Rodgers]

You're welcome (: have a pleasant afternoon, well, I suppose time may be different where you are whatever time of day or night it is, have a pleasant one!

Thanks a lot, it's here 10:30 in the evening... :) movie time... and then after more reviews yay! happy afternoon overthere friend!

[s y e]

Wow, the way you write your poetry is amazing, such beautiful, outstanding imagery. I loved the way you worded it and the images we got from reading it was superb! The music clip is really fitting for this write, it was a great choice! The picture is beautiful! WOW.

"Thousands of little crystals
Reflected the early moon’s shimmer"

Vivid imagery from these two lines, my favorite lines :)!

Dear Sye, thank you dearly for your beautiful words upon my poem... lovely you picked those lines out, dear young lady! :)

[s y e]

You are very welcome hun, I really enjoyed it xo

That's a pleasure to know, for people like you I keep motivated to write xoxo :)

[s y e]

Awwwwwh thats sweet :) xoxo