~ That Day, after Hiking...

~ That Day, after Hiking..., E.L. Elisa Laura, Hiking, Poetry, Free Style, Nature, Aspects, Painting, Photography, Music

~ That Day, after Hiking...

 

 

 

 

Essence felt, and tears in my eyes

Of that sharp wind, playing with my

Newly cut hair-

 

Long distance in my heart of moments

To catch, and to cherish, like velveteen

Feathers of silence,

 

There where I walked, it was like an nuclear

Airborne field of lost souls, on a regular Tuesday

 

But alive enough, to breathe a new season

Of love, into my lungs,

 

I felt it was especially brighten

Although the blisters on my feet yearned for care

 

A vision I found, of me and him upon a high hill,

Long enough to stay, and to dream...

 

But my bathtub was there, and music in my ears,

A moment of rest, and be lost of some fears;

 

"That day after hiking" told me to love

And embrace every living molecule of our space...

 

Now I can breathe again, being reborn

Out of moment living,

Touching the core-

 

Long distance out of my heart with moments,

But near and felt, through every vein, as our

Shared future and picturesque brain...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Clockwork]

I like the idea of loving and embracing every molecule of our space. That line is incredibly universal and loving. Its the kind of wisdom that spreads peace and good will to all things. As for the field of lost souls: I would say you pretty well took me there. I have felt similar fields on some of the hikes I have taken in old parts of the country, especially where you can really feel the way the earth keeps time. Quite a rejuvenating piece of writing indeed.

Thank you dearly my friend, for this was such an inspirational hike I took that day, I will send you the pictures of that hike in a while... :) so you can feel the exact mood I walked in, nice to see you back today, great words! thanks again!

[Clockwork]

You're welcome. I would like that :-)

Check your mail ;)

[Clockwork]

They are wonderful! Thank you :-)

There were much more, but it would be too long in the mail, so glad you enjoyed them! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing music and poetry.
"That day after hiking" told me to love
And embrace every living molecule of our space..."
The above lines were my favorite. So many lines stood out in the poem. This is the type of poem that come alive and hold the reader. You did. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Hi my friend, thank you dearly for this lovely review... I felt the old souls so much on my hike...grateful always to have you by!

[Baby Ricochet]

This is really beautiful. Outstanding work young lady. I like the Nuclear airborne field of lost souls line and the "That day after hiking" part best. Outstanding work young lady

Thank you dear, did you ever saw the movie: " A bridge too far? " that's the Bridge I'm living next too ;) World war 2 bombed by the Germans that time... I was hiking on that field... :) thank you so much for these words BR!

[J. J. Nightingale]

Even if all we feel is pain, still we feel something
Alive is a good place to share ..
I like the way you savor breath
I like the way you treasure heart beats
And soak in the warmth of Love recalled ..

Take Care Little Dove .... Jazz xx

Wow, dear Jazz, such a beautiful poem to my poem, I love you always for doing that, you give me inspiration, and new thoughts, dear woman! xxxx :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

:).............. xxxx

[Pax]

The vividness of your words are like paintings of the walls of the four corners of the bathroom... smile... i see you painted the emotions like weariness, soreness, tiredness then all erase in thinking of your love... breathing in all molecular space in between... distance is just arms reach in pure love, right? ... the videos creates a haunting atmosphere while reading your words... you choose great music dearest... that's a fine taste of musicality in your views....

Awesome work!

Aaah nicely worded Pax, in your first lines, I like that thought of your brain. Yep, here you can see your painter skills. ;D Wow, breathing in all molecular space in between, so so true... even we excist of them, - and + ions, all is connected, only we don't think so much about that, I knew you would, little scientist. :D thank you so much for this great review, and all you feel in between my little lines :) xx

[Pax]

smiling ~ little scientist, now that dream is stored in my bucket list of unfulfilled dreams... oh yes... the ions... both always exist in this world... its a duality i see... Your most welcome dearest friend... always!

Hehe, (on my bucket-list too ;)!!! )and many more musings.... slowly slowly they will come true, but that bucket shall be over full LOL ;) thanks again dear x

[SHEEMA HUQ]

it seems that hiking, invigorated you consciousness effectively, such nicely written prose this is, I did enjoy greatly :)

Thank you dear, with whole my heart :)

[Androglossia]

It is in the silence of days do we find solitude. And it is in solitude do we find longing. Longing for love that was there yet out of reach. But they say, long distance makes relationship strong and it is what I see here. Great excution of the things you felt that day, dear:)

I feel so humbled too by your words my dear friend :) thank you lots! xx

[Androglossia]

You're most welcome, love!

[Jack...]

To me I found this beautiful, exhausted by love, by nature, by him, walking side by side, loving and embracing every molecule of this space...the space deep in your hearts, together. Very nice.

Thank you so dearly Jack, you have a sharp eye! :)

[Distant horizons]

Isn't it amazing what simple pleasures of the beauty that surrounds us, can invigorate our hearts and minds into breathing, feeling and as you say, being reborn, with new eyes that replace the old ones that forgot how to dee the beauty surrounding us, even in those harshest of days. Beautifully expressed emotions of the heart, mind and soul Elisa

Thankies Green Mountain!!!! : D

[Distant horizons]

Welcome Tulip :-)

[s y e]

OMG!

Everything was amazing, I loved how certain lines were in bold and others weren't. Emphasising certain lines added more 'oomph' to it. The video clip was.... WOW and the picture was... WOW, I loved it all!

xox

So grateful to you little treasure xoxo thank you!!!

[s y e]

My pleasure sweetie xoxoxo

xoxoxo :D

[s y e]

;-D xoxoxo