~ Infinitum-Reditus

~ Infinitum-Reditus, mirrors, ego, ancient, dark art, E.L. Elisa Laura

~ Infinitum-Reditus

 

 

 

 Copper curled edges,

Creeping as size

Around this presence

Rusty quadrant hinges

Squeaky sounds

A creaking

Wooden floor

Full of cracks

 

And we…

 

In the center of

Our consciousness,

Looking deeper

Into our soul

Our future,

Our past

Where we are

And breathe

So boundless

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Pax]

a deeper look within the soul! ~ highly intriguin ~ i feel like i was drawn into the mirror of our old self, current self & the future one as well... we see it through our mind then process by our vast imagination, gliding from past to present till the future... we can only perceive it in our soul but fully grasp it is just a thought, either way hopefully it will come or not. I find this highly mysterious big sis, Great write as always ~

Thank you Pax, sweetheart for your insightful review, love it! x

[Pax]

hey you ~ big sis hug ~ your most welcome ~ i haven't seen you much around, miss u~ take care always... being busy it means that your life is always in order... come back if your not busy anymore...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

beautiful piece, Elisa. I picture a very old house, two story...wooden floors...and old mirrors...

i think it is about mirrors to the soul...and how we get really creaky as we age...bones, and tones of what is in our mind.

jacob

Aaah Jacob, yes, you felt me on this one pretty good my friend. It's an honor to have you always by..... really. I have something eerie with mirrors, since I was a little girl, I hated watching myself so double mixed like within the cultures I share in my blood, I could never ever give myself a proper country, it was too mixed, too many cultures, to many flows, and that's what the self-searching part of each of us is... when looking in a mirror, mirrors, don't lie... they tell truths. Thank you for your thought provoking review dear friend appreciate it always.... - Elisa

[Revery]

Wow, so impressive. You paint the image, if only in black and white, so perfectly. You make it all look so easy.

My dear G. and friend what a suprise, so lovely you came over, this night. Thank you muchly my dear, if there is anything I can review mail me!!! I lack of spare time I know, feel so guilty :( missing you all guys!

[Renée]

Wow ! Much different Elise than when I first met her... Well Done Dear Poetess !

Yes, it's the hidden Eli, whooooopah! :D love love and love dear one!

[Renée]

Woot Woot xo ( :

♫♪ Love to you dear xoxo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

WOW!... not what I expected, Sis!...This piece took me on a spiritual journey...
The beginning was eerie, it opened my eyes, and set the tone leading to another dimension...
You opened the doorway to a whole new realm..a new age of thinking my dear!
This one in quite intense for me... Loved it!
Exceptional write Eli!~xxxxx~

Heya sis.... ♥ :P I know... it's a style, I have in me, deeply hidden..... you felt it omgy.... ;) you always do :P It's intense, it has a meaning of pure perception. Medieval, and mediating in one..... thank you so much for understanding my weird brain at times ;) love ya! xxxxxxx your little sis... :))))

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Sis, you have a BRILLIANT brain...universal... I totally wish I could go into that realm of meditating... WOW!... outstanding!

Come take my hand, and I will bring you to other realms...... just by the touch! :P you sis, are my example, more erotic writes will come soooooooon :D can't wait to explore my kinky side :P woot ha :D

[Robbie~xoxo~]

you are writing erotic writes soon? or me? lol
I would love to read that from you!!! OMG! (he he) I know you're Sassy! ;)

Lead the way sis!.... :D

LOL, Ok, here a little secret love, I never told you sis, but I have more than a 200 hidden erotic poems, on my hard drive LOL, never ever but a few posted on here..... ooops.... more to come soon hehehe xxx I share your blood luv xxx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

What the What?... I mean WTF?!! lol
You do?!...well hot damn!...you need to post them girlie!XX ;)

HAHAHA I know I know, too reserved......... ;) yep...I like those for real special moments I guess... XX but you're right, I should come over my comfort rational DUTCH rigid Zone!!! and be more Spanish ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Yes your bloodline is passionate... XXX

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I know you are ready to cross the comfort zone Sis...come over to the other side. ;)

I will.... :D can't wait ;) you inspire me to do soon!!!!! x

[Robbie~xoxo~]

awww Thank you Sis... you inspire me too...in many ways... You lift me up!~xoxo~:)

You too love, you have no idea, I'm so silent on here lately, because of the lack of time, but the reason of many I stay on this site is to be with you and Pris, and some close friends on here.... who crack me up, and feel me on distance, you're brilliant yourself lovely one! do NOT EVER CHANGE!!!!! for you are blessed in my arms, and heart xoxoxoxo :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

and you know why I'm still here... of course we must take breaks now and then, I think I'm due for one this weekend. :D
But I always come back for you and your astounding work of art... I am always enlightened by your thoughts... Thank you for being you, I feel blessed to know you!~xoxoxoxo~

So I come for yours, and I will go through more I didn't had the time for, I promise, sweet sis. I feel really guilty of the lack of time I have right now... there are so much beautiful writers on here, I read, and my fingers are itchy to review, and almost on my keypad, but then real life calls me back again :(((
I'm so enlightened by yours too, you're one of the most free gifted souls on here, no blockades, just the way you are, and I truly admire those people, sis....you're a treasure forever. And when I say that, I mean it. Thank you for being you too, what we have is not breakable by no one, (told you before lol)....

xoxoxoxo many blessings love.... you're the one on this site who needs all you deserve!!! xoxoxo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I understand...no worries here Sissy.. I haven't written anything new in a week! lol
I will post a day or so...I'm not in a hurry, I just want to enjoy reading and enjoy visiting my friends... I am exhaling... life is great! You need to breathe too...
When you write it's amazing, when you review it's brilliant... so take it easy and enjoy being you! Because I do...you are truly special... a rock steady soul in this cafe... my soul sister, you're the best!...YOU ROCK! XOXOXO

You're doing right, do never be in a hurry, or rush..... a pen writes when it's the right moment, and it comes, exactly when it should.... (then your masterpieces flow like they do always) I so love them :))) Life is so great, a lot of people don't see it, I love those positive personalities like you're! most are so depressive, and down, I know life is hard, and they don't even know how hard ours is, but they have all a story to tell... and I bless us for being that mostly positive, around, and not drowning in that negativism, of spirit. You're strong, and I admire you for that. So so badly!!!! sis!
So are you my Rocky sis! always, and be that way you blow wisdom, lust, art, and spicy needs on here.... nobody can imitate your quill of brilliance!!! :) for me you're an HERO SIS!!! you rock!!! xoxoxox love you!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh well, It's been a couple years... we went through alot together!..as I recall you have had my back for sure!!...Because of you I'm stronger... and we have built great friendships here...totally blessed all the way around... Full circle!
I'm gonna say it... it's cliche' (don't laugh).."You complete me"....or rather, you complete our circle! ;D

Love you Sis! XOXOX

We did, and we know eachother best!!! :) so happy to be with you always sis.
You have had mine too, and I never ever forget that! you never let me down, in the worsest times, with health, problems, and all.... I treasure real friends as you are. We now are stronger, became wiser, became more mature than we even were. We have such a good strength of friendships shared on here, never to forget, and to treasure deeply. I care for each and every one with us.
NOOOOOO Never cliché it is.... it's the "CYCLOID" many don't understand, you know that poem, I wrote ;) LOVE YOU BIG SIS!!! always, and forever xoxo :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Yes... I remember!... you always show me something deeper that what the eye can behold... it's within the soul... THAT I LEARNED FROM YOU!...I'm glad we got through all that ugly stuff, unscathed! lol
Only more mature in loving one another here... surpassing the turmoil.. Whew! lol
Never will I forget you are golden Sis! Priscilla felt that too... she tells me that you're magical, all the time! XXXX

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Like I didn't know that...pffftt! You were my friend first!...but we won't fight over you, we'll share your sisterhood! :D

LOL me too, so glad.... I really enjoy life as you too much, for being sucked into negativism. (it's not our daily karma) our daily way of living... we need just to see things, positive. (however we see darkness always, aside, but meaningful). You and Pris are the world to me! I feel you both so close, and will come visit you one day! like we spoke about :) can't wait.... magical creature you are, and Pris too xoxox.... my beautiful sisters. And yes, we were eachothers first friends OMG long time ago, I never forget, how special you are to me love, and sis......... oldschool isn't breakable!!!!!!!! ♥

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Yes we will...even if we're eighty! lol
Going on my bucketlist, but I hope I can wear a bathingsuit still. Hahahaha! What the hell!...who cares right? lol
Going to Greece for sure!....among other places... Priscilla has already started planning it...:D
Can't wait!..

So so true sis.... even till when we are old , and sitting in wheel - f*****g chairs... we always have fun love.... I promise you! even when I become senile.... lol... I will even dig more into our childhood ha!!!!! ;) Yes, we should go to Greece, I want you two to take with me and show you every beauty Europe has to offer.... those seas are azure blue, and those rocks are marvelous, the sea wrack at Zakynthos is a must be.... I have problems with my extern hard disc, Pris knows, and some other, I'm trying to fix it to send you loves some pics, but it's giving me headaches.... Pris is gooooood, she did yes!! and we should go soon! can't wait either, our hubby's just go fishing on Italy when we go there LOL hahaha GIRLLLLL TIME!!!! xx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

TOTALLY Girl Time... LOL
Even in wheelchairs, it can't keep us away from margaritas, mojitos, and swimming! :D
Well be the best looking old chics there! lol ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I don't give a crap if I have to draw my eye brows on! lol
I'm going! :D

HAHAHAHHAHHA you're so so right... we are!!!!!!!!!! tanned skin, lovely hair.... ;) and style LOL :D and passion (most important) ;) Me too, I'm going on till the bone sis............... now that's odly kinky lol ha! X

Oh sis, I have to go, snifffffies all the way :( hubby is drinking early coffee, and I need to take a shower to get on my appointments... talk soon dear, it was so nice being with you tonight!!! you crack me always up!!! needed it xoxoxoxox love you!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Have a beautiful day Eli!...I'm going to bed... :D
Thank you for bringing me joy!...YOU shine bright!...Love you!...Thanks for the laughs..always have to keep in touch.. (((hugs)))~xoxo~take care!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

talk later... till soon~XXXX~

Till soon love, ready to jump into the shower LOL xxxx ;)

[Corset]

beautifully crafted El, there is an air of endlessness about it :)

Thank you so very much dear Lady! x

[Priscilla Sayers]

Now you KNOW this is a masterpiece that speaks to my very core. How brilliant you are precious soul! I have a pic to send you and other sisters. It reflects this piece & our in breakable bonds. Posting in to your page in a few:)

Aw, thank you! I'm curious sis what picture you mean... :) thank you for your time, and review, I so appreciate it... love, E. Always! x

[Priscilla Sayers]

The one I posted in your comments:)
I favorited this one I just love it Sis!

Oh sis, I love the picture, you know, you always feel me on distance!!! brilliant! :D