~ Infinitum-Reditus

~ Infinitum-Reditus, mirrors, ego, ancient, dark art, E.L. Elisa Laura

~ Infinitum-Reditus

 

 

 

 Copper curled edges,

Creeping as size

Around this presence

Rusty quadrant hinges

Squeaky sounds

A creaking

Wooden floor

Full of cracks

 

And we…

 

In the center of

Our consciousness,

Looking deeper

Into our soul

Our future,

Our past

Where we are

And breathe

So boundless

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Pax]

a deeper look within the soul! ~ highly intriguin ~ i feel like i was drawn into the mirror of our old self, current self & the future one as well... we see it through our mind then process by our vast imagination, gliding from past to present till the future... we can only perceive it in our soul but fully grasp it is just a thought, either way hopefully it will come or not. I find this highly mysterious big sis, Great write as always ~

Thank you Pax, sweetheart for your insightful review, love it! x

[Pax]

hey you ~ big sis hug ~ your most welcome ~ i haven't seen you much around, miss u~ take care always... being busy it means that your life is always in order... come back if your not busy anymore...

[captain]

Intense! & Awesome!
Profound beauty in poetry.

Thank you kindly :)

[h d e rushin]

I gave this poem to my sister, who is going thru something right now, as a
propitious example of how the poet of the 21st century is forever seeking
certainty from the uncertainty of physical truth. However much it stresses
the existence of objective proof.

Just be willing to look a little deeper in your soul.
Nicely written.
dana

Ah dana, I feel so honored with your visit, thank you dear. I hope all is ok, with her, and in my thoughts, and prayers. If i can help or anything, mail me. :) your friend Elisa, thank you dearly, for your support, always.

[icelandicblue]

Oh such beauty in so few words. We must turn toward true selves in order to understand our place on this infinite plane. I found this to be very philosophical and compelling.

Thank you for noticing all again what I was trying to mention dear woman... you're a special seeer! ;) so happy to have you by tonight, I will review soon more when I'm cured from flu cough cough... ;) x

[icelandicblue]

Oh Elisa I hope that you feel better soon!

Thanks, alot, it will be ok soon :) just rest, music, reading poetry, and I feel already a lot better :D

[s y e]

Wow, mind blowing, amazing! Im speechless.....

Loved it! xoxox

♥ Thanks love

[s y e]

Anytime! :-)

xoxo :)))

[s y e]

;-) xoxo

[Damien Thibodeaux]

Oh, my.... infinite magic.

A friend had mentioned she liked your work, then I saw a review for one of your poems written by another mutual friend, so I had to check you out. After reading this, all I can say is, I am captivated.

Thank you so very much.... Yes infinite magic :) welcome in my world :)

[RedInk524]

We focus so much on what we perceive with our eyes and ears, all the while completely ignoring what lies inside. There is so much to explore within and discover. Though, i must admit, from a madman's perspective that adventure is much more eventful and strange... What a horror it would be to look within oneself and find nothing?

Yes, m'dear, you're so right, and as a madman or not, (I see them as the most intelligent persons by the way), otherwise you're too dumb to get there... ;) your perspectives, are richer and way beyond many... so being a little on the other side, makes you an artist ;) always keep that in mind... :) it would be a truly horror to find an empty sepparated feeling from what is art in ourselves yes.... that would be my worst nightmare... so let's fly always high shall we lol :) thank you :D

[RedInk524]

Despite it always being said, it is finally proven that genius and madness are very related. lol, it is about time someone shut the skeptics up.

Ah yes, I could discous with you further on this in private... LOL, you're soooooooo f. true! and I know and hear you here.... :) you're the best!

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I love the deep feeling in your poems, only in few words you create a world full of charismatic feelings and thougths, of reflections and hyper realities...It`s one of my favorite poems!
{nia}
02.04.13

That's a big compliment sweetheart. I'm grateful to you :) so so much!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow, classic eternal feeling I've got here. Brilliant piece, love it!

Thank you very much Marc, will come back for your work soon ;)

[Leslie Philibert]

What I like here is the way the poem progresses and builds on a strong, opening image.
Fine job, well observed

Hi Leslie, Danke Shön! :)