~ Bubble Waves

~ Bubble Waves, E.L. Elisa Laura, Echo's, Fun Writing, Fun Rhyming, Fiction, Other Dimensions, Poetry

~ Bubble Waves

 

 

There were once two bubbles in the occult sky

And they had one direction,  upon storms high

 

Slowly closer to a parallel world they sang their song

She danced in her thoughts, and bubbled along

 

He was  dreaming words in waves, with no escape

While he was swirling echo's in  his red super cape

 

She needed to wake up, but the time was not right

He in her mind knew, and not fought the fight,

 

They waved thousand frequencies through the misty air

That was the beauty in bubble waves for them to share

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Kristallo]

Ah, this is lovely. Two separate entities, lost within their dreams, loftily roving the wide expanse of sky in a bubble world that's all their own. I wonder if they are aware of one another- or perhaps he and she are totally immersed in their seclusion. Maybe it's a bit of both, as you described how she needed to wake up, but the timing was not right. There's a soft note of romance to your vision. I loved the third couplet, especially, and the line, "He was dreaming words in waves, with no escape" was brilliant. This flows with mystic grace. Well done. :)

Thank you so much sweet Kris, for this most insightful review, you gave me a huge smile on my face...your words are always so close to what I am trying to say with this poem... I love reading you. Thanks for being here xx

[Belle]

It is perhaps my strong attachment to reality that I was not able to grasp the intent of the poem, but thank you for this review, I have the meaning now. Surrealism is really yours, my Dear Eli.

Thank you Belle, for your words, hon. x

[quinfinn]

most of the time when two bubbles collide they both burst and are destroyed. sometimes though, they join together, close as can be and float along in harmony. excellent interpretation here! i love this write!

Hi Quin, thank you for your lovely words on this write :)

[quinfinn]

denada!

[Priscilla Sayers]

So lovely my beautiful Sis!
Bubbles! Like star~crossed lovers sharing the Universe of ocean waves, where life began and home, my love, home. I love this & love you!!!!

Aw thank you so much sis... your meaning I treasure always high!!! I lack of time, :'( and I hate it... missing you!

[Souladareatease]

ahhh the capture of energy and bubble of life=I Love it!!!

Thank you dear :) will be back for your writes x

[beautiful dreamer]

i love the rhyme! wonderful poem miss Elisa

I'm grateful to you, for all the reviews :D

[beautiful dreamer]

oh its no problem :) i like reading your poems

[Zahra]

really creative and nice pictures as well. Nice use of bubbles. :)

Thank you very much :)

[emmaline]

That was fantastic...

Thank you very much! :)

[Pax]

its like I'm on a surreal dream in sight... your words dive me into a new world of bubbled people :D ... a new kind of world were love is still present... two souls together in the misty air... waving their love and flying high.... your words always flies high dearest friend...p.s. my wings is getting rusty over the days...but still still good... hope yours is doing great!
great job!

Hi dear, rusty.... Oh no!!! ;) thanks a lot dear... :) I send you bubbles for if your wings not work ok.... X

[Androglossia]

Life is a bubble. Riding on the wind, tossed back and forth, each bubble can be awesome or strange. And it is when we find someone whose strangeness or awesomeness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall into mutually satisfying awesomeness and call it love.

Oh dear Maryanne, you make me smile with your interesting and beautiful words here. Thank you dear... :)

[Androglossia]

Robert Fulghum actually said that. Not the bubble thing but the compatibility.

[Androglossia]

You're very welcome dear:)

I find that most insightful, I am going to read more about that, thank you love x

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Sometimes we are secluded within our own bubble...only to become more alone...
To share the wealth encapuslated, is truly divine...but to share with someone equally magnetic can be explosive. (in a good way) :)
I enjoyed reading this vibrant piece! Well penned, Sis. xoxo :)

Very well said sis... I guess, bubbles have something truly magic, I always am intrigued by them, and I know you're too, when you sent me those lovely pictures back in the day... :) I"m so happy you enjoyed it. :) xoxo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

me too Eli!!...I have always found bubbles to be fun, magical, and pure.... It was my pleasure to read this..truly lovely, Siss!xoxo

I'm so grateful to you, and have your words upon here sis, thank you again xoxo