~ Bubble Waves

~ Bubble Waves

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~ Bubble Waves, E.L. Elisa Laura, Echo's, Fun Writing, Fun Rhyming, Fiction, Other Dimensions, Poetry

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~ Bubble Waves

 

 

There were once two bubbles in the occult sky

And they had one direction,  upon storms high

 

Slowly closer to a parallel world they sang their song

She danced in her thoughts, and bubbled along

 

He was  dreaming words in waves, with no escape

While he was swirling echo's in  his red super cape

 

She needed to wake up, but the time was not right

He in her mind knew, and not fought the fight,

 

They waved thousand frequencies through the misty air

That was the beauty in bubble waves for them to share

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


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Ah, this is lovely. Two separate entities, lost within their dreams, loftily roving the wide expanse of sky in a bubble world that's all their own. I wonder if they are aware of one another- or perhaps he and she are totally immersed in their seclusion. Maybe it's a bit of both, as you described how she needed to wake up, but the timing was not right. There's a soft note of romance to your vision. I loved the third couplet, especially, and the line, "He was dreaming words in waves, with no escape" was brilliant. This flows with mystic grace. Well done. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Belle

10 Years Ago

It is perhaps my strong attachment to reality that I was not able to grasp the intent of the poem, b.. read more

10 Years Ago

Thank you Belle, for your words, hon. x



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I know some of this love story....I've never heard the ending though:) wondering if the world keeps them apart or is it just their natures. Either way, love the way you cast the characters and brought them full scale. The music lets me know that this vision is time sensitive. Thank you for always casting light on those bubbles.HUGS

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so so much my lovely friend. Maybe I will work on a second part.... :) you inspire me to d.. read more
The struggle love of lovers. Its a strong effect that controls both groups in a relationship. Strong write, love the message I personally got from it. For telling me that in love you must always be aware of the people around you,and everyone has their own feelings. Really inspiring write Eli :) Hehe and still your heading got the most out of it hehe :) Truly mind Controlling Heading hehe Loved it! It's own little randomness I must admit hehe. And love the picture that you got for it :) All and all Great write, and superb wording and the form also plays it's well earned role. Really inspiring Eli Hehe*

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much sweet friend, :) your words are highly appreciated !!
Carl Drake Barnard

10 Years Ago

Any time Poetess :)

10 Years Ago

........... :) thanks poet!
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ron
How beautiful thoughts intertwining can be. This is beautiful with a scent of sensuality.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Good you don't feel so, have a great day Ron. Until you see me by!
ron

10 Years Ago

Have a great day dear sweet poet xoxo

10 Years Ago

You too Ron xo!
You truely are one of the most talented person i know and that is a high praise my love this is so amazing every line as such power and emotion to it such grace and truth unbelievable this write is such a beautiful peice kind one that just lets you see only the words and not hear anything or see anything else it has that much depth

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

You're in my thoughts, darling heart... I wish you so well.... you deserve it sweetie. xxx
Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Thank you sweets

10 Years Ago

It's that we such have one of the most far time differences, but if I was near, I would carry for yo.. read more
Splendid couplets with rhythm. The picture is perfect to compliment your piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you dear Author Unknown, but so known by me.... :D
Your writing is interesting, always. It really makes me think :) There are so many ways one could go with this.. A bubble is transparent. You see right through it as if it isn't there at all. It's a safeguard, a shelter and a filter. It keeps the outside world at a distance, yet things can enter the bubble without bursting it. It resembles an aura too, colorful, when the light shines upon it. It has many shades, different sides to it, like all individuals. In this reality, we live in our own unique little space of existence, that's what most of us identify it. The bubble holds information, all that we are, and it is shared within the atmosphere, through thoughts, energy, frequencies.. We pick up on it, without knowing what it is, sometimes, as with the man and the woman mentioned.. That's my own understanding. There is so much this piece of writing holds. It is like a bubble all on its own! Wow.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

10 Years Ago

Definitely mongrels, haha, and I do love languages ^^

10 Years Ago

Oh we have so much in common... lol ^^
Michelle N. H.

10 Years Ago

Sure seems like it ^^
Inter-dimensional taste to this....
Pretty thoughts....gave me the feel of a cosmic love in this plain.

Excellent.
Scotty

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much again. :) *smiling* to you Scotty Wolf :)
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

My pleasure always.
S.
OMG!! This has new meaning for me tonight!! Refreshing!!!
I read this over and over... before, and now... it all makes a huge difference, Sis!

Especially since we last chatted... WOW!

How lovely this bubble is... It is to be cherished!~xoxoxo~:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

I love you, thank you Sis. :) Yep.... I do cherish my sweet bubble gum.... chew on it, it never get .. read more
Robbie~xoxo~

10 Years Ago

Sis, you crack me up!... :D
and you are my courage too... (((hugs)))...
Thank you! Love .. read more

10 Years Ago

Love you most!!! truly, without you, I didn't had such a good night here..... ♥♥♥ See you tomo.. read more
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Hi Elisa Laura, this was so cute and filled with a playful joy. I could feel the rhythmic beat of their journey entwined with our world and one unknown. Bubbles never seemed so cool until just now. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear new friend, I totally love your review, this was a write, an older one, but y.. read more
Bubbles are great symbol, which could tell so many stories...It`s lonely and dreamful and also not so easy to broken in its own world, as it exist without norms outside, it`s just free and soaring in the space..so I feel we need this bubble to let our mind be high and free from all chains. great poem!
{nia}
02.04.13

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Exactly we need them so much.... you and me know why ;) thank you dearest x

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