~ There Where the Trees Danced

~ There Where the Trees Danced, Elisa Laura, E.L. Fantasy, Other Dimensions, Fiction, Free style

~ There Where the Trees Danced

 

 

Yes  finally ...

 

 

There was light, after days of darkness

An early morning sun, smiled

 

 

                       The fog became a soft cotton blanket

                       The trees awoke with every sparkling

 

 

Slow movements, and limbs

The time delay in all presence

 

 

                       There was more oxygen, we survived

                       Did we? awakened from a dark wandering

 

 

Without gravity, or am I dreaming?

The trees seem to dance, without roots

 

 

                        I wonder where we are, where are we?

                        In mind? or reality?

 

 

There Where the Trees Danced

I felt your hand in mine...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thanks for your entry... ;) xx

Reviews

[Kristallo]

This one flows with such harmony, and the imagery here is profoundly beautiful. "The trees awoke with every sparkling" is such a tender line, each couplet is sublime and visually tasteful. Each couplet is as artistically satisfying as the one preceding it, although I would have liked to see perhaps one more addition, it seemed to end so abruptly. But this was utopia in words. Very rhythmic and lovely. Great write.

Thank you so much dear Kristallo, I am so pleased you enjoyed this, and found it visually tasteful, it was my intention to make real imagery and kind of "film fragments" to my readers, I'm glad you said that. I will think of another more addition, thanks for suggesting me that. I'm grateful with your presence here. Thanks again :) - Elisa

[Calissa Knox]

I love the emotion in this poem. The questions throughout really bring the scene to life. The words flow together beautifully, and the ending is absolutely perfect.

I love the dreamlike feeling all of your poetry has. This poem is one of my favorites from you, and one of the most beautiful things I have ever read. :)

Thank you so much love, I truly appreciate this review coming from you. :) Thank you for loving my fantasy scribbles, mixed with reality, and pain... you always feel me! thanks for the encouriging C. -x-

[Calissa Knox]

You're very welcome, Elisa! Hope you're having a wonderful day. :)

Thank you so much, it's night here, I was a sleep, but as you know, how we work, we wake up, and make music or poetry ;-) haha -x- wishing you the most lovely eve!! I will check out your album soon! can't wait, to buy it.

*woke... I'm sleepy sorry lol.....

[Calissa Knox]

Haha, that's alright. Hope you have a great night's sleep. Talk to you soon. :)

Yes, I go back to bed now, I'm yawning... ;) it was a pleasure to see you around as ever! :) if you played new songs, please send me them in the mail, love to check them out! Talk soon darling friend, be happy and smiley! -x-

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Wow, I really like it, it describes a lot of imagination and concludes with security to dream freely.

Thank you dearly Raven Sis.... so appreciated.

[A. Amos]

This one is really elegantly written you manage to take in your world of dreams and illusions once again and too be honest, i love enjoying such a travel in your magical world of writing. thanks for share

Thank you so much for being here my friend once again... :) it means much to me, you enjoyed the travel :D

[A. Amos]

you know i do and you're most welcome

Thank you again :)

[A. Amos]

You're always welcome

[Priscilla Sayers]

Beautiful.
Such a gorgeous piece. I was leaning in as you painted such a dream of trees, roots bare, dancing.
Your depths are coming to the surface my sweet Eli and I love the Soul who has such a talented loving way of expressing.
Always thinking of you and sending you my Love.

What a wonderful words by you my sweet Sister, thank you so much. I'm so happy to see you here. Your words make me smile! t'was an older one, but it has a life of it's own, lol in this time of the year... I think ;-) Sending you much love too! and a big hug from me! xxx I'm grateful to you Sis.

[Priscilla Sayers]

Love you too Eli!!!;)

[Rita L. Sev]

I saw this title in my feed - the imagery and flow of this poem is gorgeous.

Thank you Rita, for your wonderful words, :) very appreciated.

[Frieda P]

Oh my cara, how exquisitely divine my sweet friend. Hauntingly sublime, there are no other words to describe the ethereal yet darkly hue'd essence of this piece. I adore it. Always a thing of beauty on your page Elisa. xoxo

Thank you so much sweet Frieda, for the lovely review... mwah!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Hmm Interesting!! :D !! Analysing: in 3,2,1 Hehe First I loved the photo and second I loved the form of this hehe like your verses are dancing hehe. Must admit the heading of your poem really struck me Eli,Again hehe. Ok yes finally got me hehe, yes finally the trees are dancing or yes finally there's movement in the life of my lady friend hehe,Ahh there was light after the darkness I have an idea what this is about hehehe a love Affair!!! hehe Ohh an early morning sun smiled,did he smiled to your beauty or was the sun causing you to smile?? the fog started to lift,The trees are love, your love awoken again...

There was more oxygen, we survived hehe I was partly right hehe hehe I got this hehe, hand in mine, So yes finally your love is eternal again hehe. Wel my review is over hehe. Well done and great story line :) excellent work Poetess.

Once again Carl, thank you so much for all the effort, and words towards this piece.... I'm always happy when you come by!

[Carl Drake Barnard]

my pleasure :)

[David Scott]

I have danced in this dream before. Your creation of the dream's music in words is heavenly.

Thank you for dancing with me, and my thoughts, in my second world my friend, there is a special place for you at the bar. :) we catch up soon! xo

[David Scott]

I actually wrote a poem last year, well two poems..., about dancing with the tree nymphs... ;)
read moreI actually wrote a poem last year, well two poems..., about dancing with the tree nymphs... ;)
I love this thought.
You really captured it well and I love the picture too!

Thank you so much for telling me, I shall come by for that one ;-) I do like the fantasy pieces as you know lol!

[Scott Metro]

A beautiful write Elisa...flows like natures perfect rhyme..
Wonderful images dance just as your trees do.
Superior poetry.

Admiration.
Scotty

I thank you greatly for this heartfelt review my friend... :) I'm always happy to read your thoughts!

[Scott Metro]

Always my pleasure Elisa..!!!
Scotty Wolf.

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Hi Elisa Laura, I'll start of by saying the picture and font are beautiful and mesmerizing followed by chanting music that perks my interest even more so in the words. I must admit your ability to give life to everything that can host even a glimpse of it is fascinating. You make me see the beauty in every thing large or small. I would like to know what drugs your on because when I read your work I go on these epic adventures, these magical trips.. and trust me i'm so excited i'm already packed and ready for the next one. This was amazing. I love the tribal sounding beats so much.

LOL, what drugs? well call it true love.... ;) I am so ever happy with your deep and insightful reviews my friend. I'm a fantasy writer, mixed with a lot of reality... for the reader to find out ;-) and what he/she get's out of it, :) I'm loving your writings too, already such a fan, read them all tonight, and I will return the favor. I promise, just on a little hiatus.... but back soon..... thank you dearly! for all.