~ Cinematic

~ Cinematic, Elisa Laura, E.L. Cinema, Movie, Love, Nostalgy, Europe, Fun, Summer nights

 

~ Cinematic

 

Back in my memory, I watch that movie

We both so loved on that summer night

I still have that striped shirt I was wearing

It’s getting eaten by the moths right now.

The only thing that not got eaten yet,

Is my memory of time, long ago.

When I’m old and probably forgotten,

I hope to see back my memory

Like a movie fragment of my own,

And that I wear that striped shirt again,

With holes, and not based on lost memories

But on a favorite loved summer night…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Androglossia]

This is classic, my dearest and I loved it. You delivered the poem with elegance and certainty. I liked your choice of words here because they are spontaneous they made the lines flow smoothly while keeping the thought intact. I especially liked the photograph because it went well with the theme of the poem:) Brilliant work once again, dear! I'm going to favorite this.

My dearest :) thank you so much, your words humble me always, and I will be soon back around here... missing you! (((Hugs))))

[Stacey Watts]

Memories are quite so often like movie clips in our minds, replaying all the beautiful moments. This was a truly beautiful piece. I really enjoyed your sweet words penned here.

Yes, true Stacey! :) thank you for comming by into my world... :)

* coming (little error) :)

[icelandicblue]

The whole experience is stunning. What a beautiful combination of sounds and words. You have woven a spell.

Thank you for understanding my little brain :)

[icelandicblue]

LOL- I think that little brain is pretty complex. I love mixed mediums that are done with finesse.

Hehe, I saw you're one too :D great to know you!!! x

[s y e]

I love how you always have a beautiful picture and song to go with your poem. It adds so much more to it. This was exquisite! I loved it.

Thank you kindly dear :) :)

[s y e]

Anytime sweetie xoxoxo

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful moments should alwats be played back in cinemascope. When my time comes, my life being played back will resemble a Tim Burton movie :-)

Ah yes! we do love Mr. Burton :) thank you my friend...

[Distant horizons]

Welcome :-)