~ The Silent Rose

~ The Silent Rose, Elisa Laura, E.L. Romance, "The Man on Fire" Poetry

~ The Silent Rose

 

 

Words spoken out loud,

In a dream of silence

Days, run away like trains

On rusty railways

Doors open, for new passengers

But I'm holding on my rose,

Petals with each a story

To climb in my daily mind

To tell me; as they keep me moving

With the color of deep red

Fragrance and mortality,

Are born in little treasures...

I Watch them fall down

Piece by piece slowly on my knee

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Inspired by a favorite Movie of me... :)
Thank you xx

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Splendid imagery in this one, Elisa. I could almost see the petals falling slowly and tickling her knee. The music is hauntingly beautiful! "Days, run away like trains on rusty railways" heart touching emotion here, my friend. Excellent work. Knuffels, Lydi**

Thank you so much Lydi... so glad you enjoyed this. Heel veel knuffels... good to see you back!!! :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like the whole train analogy..

i felt i was riding the rails with you on this one.

no matter how tightly you hold on to that rose...the petals will find away to escape.

jacob

Thank you very much Jacob, good you enjoyed! it was my intention to travel my passengers :P so I did a good job :) will be back for your writes.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Dear Eli,
There is not another soul like you, my sweet sister... to take the reader into an amazing journey and leave a trail of rose petals in your wake.... astounding! Piece by piece a story stems from the beauty of your poetic heart...and romance fully blooms, unyielding...

I absolutely love the music accompanying this write.... Enchanting!

Thank you so much sweet sister, I feel honored to have you by, *blush* thank you for the nice review love xx

[Pax]

Your a beautiful rose with delicate petals that describes the lovely you dearest friend... this is a wonderful piece!

Thank you Paxie! dear. Oh my I do love the glasses! best brother ever! :D take much care I'll be back.... after those nasty obligations ;) x

[Pax]

haha... thanks big sis... i just want to hide hide behind the glasses for awhile... those nasty obligations we live by these... we love to comprehend and love them the same way;)..... your most welcome

[Distant horizons]

A wonderful visual to keep hold of where you have come from and where you are going. Your silent rose speaks volumes Elisa

Gracias mejor amigo escocés .... palabras de tu corazón ;) besito *x*

[Distant horizons]

Hmm, let me just run that through my translator :-)

He he... I said, you're the best SCOTTISH FRIEND.... AND THIS ARE WORDS FROM YOUR HEART!!! and a kiss :) (x) this was a movie I so loved.... and, "CARLOS VARELA" is one of my favorite artists, a true poet, in his lyrics.... :) have a nice day my friend, till we meet again! :)

[Distant horizons]

Ah, thank you my scottish friend. words from the heart???
Your welcome sweetie (x)

Did you had Whisky? lol.... Just kidding.... I'm Dutch ;) but yes, with you merged in Scotland a bit... and words from the heart means, you spoke truth! It is a write from where I came from, and where I will be burried probably... the music is Cuban pero... but Spain or Mexico would be perfect... :) LOL funny you are on this hour... (x) till soon!

[Distant horizons]

:-)
Damn translator, lol. maybe the translator drank all the whisky :-)

Haha, lol that's why I hate those.... ;) my dear friend... those who post translations, are not telling what I told... ;) now let us blame google... ;) lol

[Distant horizons]

Yes :-)
I must learn some languages.

Me too, I'm not finished yet..... more to learn, much more.... :D

[Distant horizons]

Wow, and here is me thinking that two languages in one head will make my brain melt. You are a true European, with knowledge of so many languages, we are so lazy here. Well, some of us...well, me anyway :-)

Well but I can't blame you dear, you're officially a NON European ;) ha! so... please stay the way you're brilliant on your island... :) x

(but promise me to dance with those skirts, and bagpipes one day will ya?) I would be smiling ha! x ;)

[Distant horizons]

:-)
We may be joining tou soon when we vote for independence, but I can't see it happening. No one trusts the SNP political parties leader, who is pushing it through.

[Distant horizons]

Promise :-)

Scotland is too "proud" maybe? I hope you join us though, let's drink a beer at Amsterdam and pay with EURO's :D x ;)

NOT BLAME GREECE OR SPAIN, they are the best places were we lay our but when we are relaxing in the sun, ;) but I can understand the statements... ;)

Portugal even.... I go on tour soon with my car... driving to Portugal and Spain.... can't wait. I will take pics and share them ofcourse :D

[Distant horizons]

A beer in Amsterdam sounds wonderful. :-)

I pay! I want you to taste the perfect beer! :D

[Distant horizons]

:-)
I love and miss Portugal so much. Will return soon, hopefully.

[Distant horizons]

yay, free beer :-)
Okay, but i bring the tunnocks goodies :-)

Yeah I know you do.... :'( I hope to make some wonderful pics for you :D hey I go.... busy day ahead of me... xo till soon!

[Distant horizons]

Nite sweetie. Happy night night dreamy sleeps (x)

Ah yes, b r i n g Those!!!!!!! *drooling* :D:D

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[Trigorin]

Not bad, and you use some vivid imagery in this piece which really helps the reader get a clear picture of the message you want to present. I'd just be careful of going overboard with that - a little is enough to spice up the piece, but too much can bog it down.

Thank you Trigorin, for your honest and meant words, always appreciate them... :) good to have you by!

[Stacey Watts]

Very beautiful words here, I like the way it paints a lovely picture here. Truly rich and captivating.

Stacey dear, do I believe my eyes???? you're back, thank you so much dear poetess... have missed your writings, come back soon for you, thank you for your comment on my words :) truly appreciated! - Eli

[Stacey Watts]

I have missed you too. I need to pop in more often. Time just flies away here lately.

Oh here too, dear, don't worry.... I have been soooo busy too, and have been through a really rough time, but I'm climbing out :D so good to have you back! :) xo

[Stacey Watts]

Thank you. Glad you are better.

:) slowly yes.... you writers from the old times, I shall never forget! :D

[Renée]

days go by in love .. enriching what you build ... lovely write E L I love your writing lately, its your souls serenity ( :

Thank you luv, great to have your words on my little words :) x

[Renée]

little words. big meaning ( : x

They always are with me :) xx

[Renée]

xo