~ The Silent Rose

~ The Silent Rose, Elisa Laura, E.L. Romance, "The Man on Fire" Poetry

~ The Silent Rose

 

 

Words spoken out loud,

In a dream of silence

Days, run away like trains

On rusty railways

Doors open, for new passengers

But I'm holding on my rose,

Petals with each a story

To climb in my daily mind

To tell me; as they keep me moving

With the color of deep red

Fragrance and mortality,

Are born in little treasures...

I Watch them fall down

Piece by piece slowly on my knee

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Inspired by a favorite Movie of me... :)
Thank you xx

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Splendid imagery in this one, Elisa. I could almost see the petals falling slowly and tickling her knee. The music is hauntingly beautiful! "Days, run away like trains on rusty railways" heart touching emotion here, my friend. Excellent work. Knuffels, Lydi**

Thank you so much Lydi... so glad you enjoyed this. Heel veel knuffels... good to see you back!!! :)

[Cherri]

This poem is beautifully penned and hauntingly sad. I enjoyed reading this.

Thank you so much Cherri, pleased to have you around!

[Chris]

Each petal a fragment of ...we...

touches very softl within.

Thank you dearly Chris...

[Chris]

It's quite true Eli...

take care.

Thank you, you too take much care!

[beautiful dreamer]

wowsers elisa! this is amazing! it had me captivated from the start! great write!

Thank you dear :) happy you enjoyed it x

[beautiful dreamer]

welcome welcome!

[Veronica Chandler]

This is such a lovely, and slightly, softly haunting piece. I enjoy the way you seem to have danced your words on the page. A sheer gauzy delight.

Thank you so much dear poetess...

[Veronica Chandler]

my sweet pleasure.

I will read more of you :) can't wait !

[Mandi D K]

Wow I'm not someone who is really into poetry, but this is beautiful.
And the song is so pretty too!
Well done!

Thank you fellow writer :)

[S. Doss]

This poem is amazing. I loved reading it.

Thank you S. Doss, for the visit, and your words :) appreciated! Eli

[exotic beauty]

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[WILDERNESS]

So elegantly put and pictured in abeautiful poem..................nice

Thank you Wilderness :)

[Hajar]

"Words spoken out loud
In a dream of silence"

You begin with strength , the first two lines are fantastically chosen , and then it's an explosion of sweetness and sadness also , at least it is what I feel, you take us into an inner journey as every poet should do .
Keep on writing ;)

Merci Hajar :) so glad I could take you with me on journey, thanks

[icelandicblue]

This is beautiful. You have slowed the moment down so each line takes its equal place as your vignette unfolds. It is both soft and wise.

Thank you for reading, and your beautiful words :)