~ In my Garden

E.L. Elisa Laura, In my Garden, Piano, Music, Notes, Touch, Peaceful, Quiet

 

~ In my Garden

 

 

In my Garden you rest, 

So beautiful, so quiet,

Dreaming, and sleeping

While your spirit moves,

And dances on winter's notes

I will awake you softly,

By each touch, to let melt

The snow, in your heart,

And awake your body

So we can dance together,

When time passes

On soften sunsets

Each moment anew...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx
:)

Reviews

[Jack...]

Wow, so very exquisite are your words this day, so soft and alluring, tempting and timeless. I am a pianist and seeing the black grand in the white snow has gievn my heart a spin, oh how I would love to be sitting there playing among this beautiful winter scene. You poem has touched me deeply, thank you so much for sharing this with all of us.

Thanks a million Jack, :) we should play one time together then... :)
I felt in a musical mood, (when not) actually... glad you enjoyed this, and thank you for stopping by again. I'll be back for your fantastic poetry. :)

[Jack...]

Elisa, I have one song posted here that I wrote the lyrics, music and arrangement for if you'd like to here it. I wrote it for a friend, so i don't sing it, but it is my song. I can send you an rr if you like. It is titled, And here you come.

Yes, ofcourse, thank you, good recommendations, especially from a singer songwriter as you are most welcome! :) I don't do RR's, since I came here, but you can mail me, or put the link here :) Thank you my friend, I shall listen... :)

[Renée]

"she" awakens his heart so softly and gently..coming into the sweetness of spring...Sweet and soft E L Beautiful work ! ( :

Thank you dearly Renée :) xo

[Renée]

xo.... ( :

[Rossen]

beautiful and tender words softened by you...

Thank you for the reviews Rossen, I will come back for you :)

[Souladareatease]

to be reborn within everydays notes new and old casually bleeding the feeling dreams!!!
Exquisite-delicate!!!

Thank you my friend, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[Souladareatease]

Indeed...I've played since I was little...started guitar and piano at the same time...string instruments are more to my fingers liking...but...there are days where I will touch only the ivory...twas an exhale My Dear...

So good, you keep on touching the ivory, it can heal and let you grow magically! thank you sweet friend.

[lee von cleef]

You throw pillows at time ,cushions to soften its blows staring back so clear in my mirror,Your poems are little protective air bags ,little pockets of pure powdered moments to erase the pain.

Thank you Lee :)

[beautiful dreamer]

oh how beautiful!

Thanks again :) :)

[beautiful dreamer]

welcome!

[Tina Kline]

This reads to me like a very tender poem of love. Very beautiful words and imagery. Very creative piece of work.

I'm grateful to you, thank you... :)

[AWickedMoon]

Beautiful! :)

Thank you very much :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I almost felt that you were writing a love sequence to the grand piano in the snow, such a pleasure to read

:) :) thank you dear, glad you could feel this one!

[Stacey Watts]

Soft and subtle. I love the lines:

While your spirit moves,
And dances on winter's notes
I will awake you softly,

Your words are very moving I really love the images you create.

Thank you so much :) winter is long and inspirational here... we all yearn for a little spring time I guess ;) and some love...