~ Transfixed

~ Transfixed, Elisa Laura, E.L. Mind Scribbles, Animals, Humans, Hunger, Love, Need? Perception, Philosophy

~ Transfixed

 

 

When two souls are resting,

Transfixed, and eyed,

Intrigued by their primal instincts

With nothing to hide,

Why there is this fate?

Of transparent protection

When they have a nice date?

 

Now the question is;

“Could the bird know

That the glass would protect him”?

“And would the cat know,

He could not catch the bird”?

Or were they too mesmerized by each other?

And did not even thought

Of any human perceptions

Nor even of anyone to hurt?

 

Blockades of life, on the path of lust

Similarly, and  also in the animal world,

Not reaching really one another

And while the one and only beasts,

Made sand into glass,

And of trees some wood

For these two just rested nothing less

Than observation, instead of food...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Just another scribble of my mind.... ;-)
Enjoy! xx

Reviews

[Tree]

You and Belle have good taste in music. As with your poetry they tend to illuminate and open a door in the mind. In regards to this poem you raise an interesting question. I think even the simplest of creatures are curious. And that the cat's curiosity overrides his instinct to kill here. Even if there were no glass. But maybe it is just what I want to believe :)

Thank you Bro, for this review, I guess you're right on that point, but we never know indeed how the cat shall react... this was beautiful :) Elisa

[hundi]

the wonders of connection or fate

Oh yes, that could be also.... :) thanks!

[Legacy]

Isn't it beautiful how the mind transforms thought to feelings.

Well done...

Legacy

Thank you precious, good to see you again... I will be back for you, after weekends xx nice words!!!

[Tierra Starr]

Wow, this is an amazing concept for a poem. It is interesting to think whether the bird and cat know that they can't actually be together or if they are too wrapped up in their fear/hunger to pay any attention to the window.

Sorry, my other coment, belonged to the other one you reviewd, oooops, late late here... eyes are fuzzy, :) thank you so much for this review, love, I will come back for your catalogue, I do love your interpretation, most wise hun xoxo

[Tierra Starr]

I've always wondered this. Like with a dog or a child, they will try to look around you if you step in front of something that they are transfixed on. Or with a forbidden love, this concept could be apart of that too.

Indeed, very well said.... it could be. I believe in a fact, Human beings are separated from our most treasured animal feelings, we got TOO RATIONAL... ;) but if we honestly honestly listen, pure, and strengthen too our inner animal, so much answers could be easier....... :D xxx

[Kenilo Kent]

Your spell had me enchanted. Most delghtful reading...

Thank you very much Kenilo for stopping by :)

[jisha ct..viswanathan]

wonderfully composed

Thanks again :)

[Pax]

feels like a picture prompt... a wondering scribbles of life and basic instinct... well aren't we all part of the animal kingdom... its just that we human are much higher in intellect... but then like us, the animal kingdom learn to adapt as they lived within our community... its a primal knowledged to learned to adapt, the basic key to survival... Wonderful work dearest!

Ah yes, Paxie, we all are.... I don't know why I feel so Animalish lately lol, (it has to have a thing to explore and think about more lol). So so right you are. Love your review. - xxx -

[Pax]

lol... taping to your animalistic instinct and turn it into art is amazing dear.... keep it up ;)

XXX :) you're the best animal ever Paxie hahaha... we say little Monjet... in Indonesian.... hope you will figure out what I mean, and it's a compliment :) HUG

[Hatchling]

LOVE IT!!!

THANKS A LOT :)

[TheSweet]

What would it be like to be an animal? It's impossible to ever know. But will be ever stop wondering? Nope.
This is so light hearted and makes my mind shoot to a million possibilities. Thanks again for an appreciated write.

Exactly, I wondered myself that a several times, in my Like a/an..... "name Animal" poems.... No we do love to wonder, and that is making us, thinkers, (we beasts) lol... it separates us from the Animals, You're most welcome, thank you so so much!

[J. J. Nightingale]

I had no need to slumber
I had no need to eat
All that I saw before me
Left me satisfied .. complete..

Beautiful thoughts of life, love , deception and trust ... ..

Hugs .. Forever Love, Jazz xx

Aaah Jazzy, wow, what a nice sweet poem, on my poem.../little scribble...
I so appreciate you, and the whole YOU!!! muwah! thanks a lot xxx :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

xxx Jazz :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

La música es la perfección...

xxxx Gracias dulce mujer.... :))

[Kenneth The Poet]

Deep, thoughtful piece. Barriers hinder mostly.

Yes, they do.... Thanks :)