~ Ink

~ Ink, E.L. Elisa Laura, Freestyle Poetry, me, Rehab wich can't be a Rehab, Slave of the Pen, a Poetic Junk :D

~ Ink

 

 

Powerful thoughts arising

Surrounded by beauty of nothing

Yet can be influenced in a

Poetic peaceful space

I breathe...

Wander and flying

Thoughts past my face,

As if my mind will be jumping

With such evidence,

Out of nowhere ...

Where is the border?

 

Where you're an artist?

And where you become insane?

How close all lays within,

Those creative brains...?

 

What are the forces

Of struggle

In just a moment of rest

If the writer calls,

The pen dances,

And your heart can not

Do anything then follow...

 

I write out of myself now

Like I did earlier,

It is the ink that is dominant

Colored in red tones

Love has prevailed

The proverbial

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

 

Author's Note

Just to be in my mind, is a maze....
Feel free....

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Pax]

First stanza:
~ ahh, I breathe in the beauty of nothing as our thoughts wonders… our life is poetic form as I perceived it…

Second stanza:
~ again our thoughts are in flight.. jumping out of nowhere… from thoughts to thoughts without borders… if I may say… the mind is a vast dimension like a two mirrors stand together you’ll see infinity all depends on how your think and feel the surroundings …

Third stanza:
~ oh, how those question manifest itself are true beauty of the mind… there is a fine line between an artist and being insane on our work… and that is balance… we can create all types of insane thoughts, words or our craft as long as we hold on into reality.. and that’s balance I think…

Fourth stanza:
~what a wonderful perception , yes at times … but then I always thought the heart dictates what it felt then the mind translate as the pen follows….

“Love has prevailed
The proverbial”
Last stanza:
~ the ink is the result of our life within our soul(when the heart and mind are one)… the love for art had succeeded….

My Dearest Friend, I love this write for its peaks so much of you and the art you are creating… Brilliant as always :)
Your friendly neighbor
w.Pax:)

Beautiful review my sweet friend, how do I love it too see you perceive, receive and creating very good philosophies, just amazing, thank you so much my friend, I keep on reading you over and overb:)

Last word without the "b" I'm on my phone outside x x

[Pax]

oh... your most welcome.... I'm glad you liked it... i did read over and over again to see some errors..:D this piece has some value that creates those thoughts..

You are brilliant my friend :)))

[Pax]

likewise ;) for your brilliant as well...lets fly high :D

Always dear.... With ink and water and oil paint lol xx :) and ecoline....

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

My sweet sister this stanza screams out at me:



Where you're an artist?

And where you become insane?

How close all lays within,

Those creative brains...?

I ask these same questions too. A most excellent write

Thank you very much sweet sister, yes, that question comes often... :) glad you were here dear... X

[Corset]

you never cease to amaze me sweet Ellie, you seem to write everytime the things that are rolling arund in my head, is it dna strands that make us poets, is it a calling if no one understands what you write but yourself, lol, (not you, me) where does that line exist where i stop being me and become the muse? Such a wonderful write dear :) hugs to the bestest and brightest light.

Wow, dearhart, such a lovely review you gave me... I'm so happy, and pleased you liked it. Thank you for your imput and thoughts on this x

[Corset]

xxxxxxxxxx

Muwah! XXX :D

[Pete Langley]

Your poem transcends the words that make it, Elisa.
You perfectly describe the poet`s void - we all know it - and your last lines are an eternal truth we all aspire to;
Colored in red tones
Love has prevailed
The preverbial.
Beautiful. P.

Thank you kindly Pete, for these beautiful ray of words. Good to have you by.

[Pete Langley]

My pleasure, sweetheart. I`ll stop by again. P

[PurpleQuartz]

I could say so many nice things about this poem but I'm afraid none of them would express how enchanting it is. A breath of fresh air.

Thank you so much dearest P.Q. I come back for you x

[captain]

I love the ending, this is great, write more, its your gift. awesome!

Sigh, too much for me sweet little captain.... I drown in your compliments ;-) he he, so good to have you by! :)

[captain]

throws life jacket and a rope, when the I'm around nobody will drown, its my job LOL ;D. your welcome :)

I feel safe now... sigh... I got some air :) :) lol

[sithlordjp]

"Where is the border?" I love this line. With the ink we use, we can make it vanish or reappear at will... Isn't that fantastic? ;) A great read for sure, thanks for sharing!

That is a good point, and very interesting you pick that out... it makes me see the rationalist in you... :) the thing with me is strange, I am both, as well the opposite... ;) glad you make me ponder on my own essence. - Elisa :)

[WhiteWillow]

A wonderful maze to be lost in. Beautiful words, vivid pictures, all truly inspirational.

Glad to be back reading your works of art!

Hey my friend :) :) so good to see you back, hope all is well with you. Thank you very much for your encouriging words, they mean a lot to me. Be back for your art :)

[David Scott]

"Colored in red tones
Love has prevailed
The preverbial"
This was the perfect way to sum up the write.
Without love everything fails. When we are motivated by love our efforts in that direction will always prevail.
You can write that in "ink" for sure.
Simply wonderful.

What a beautiful review my friend... I always like your interpretations.
Love is the key, there is only a little devil in me, who loves to ignore it.... ;-)
See beneath for more clarification lol :D xxx

[A.A.Romanczuk]

mm...i am in the state of this fine conglomeration of words.

Hi my dear, and so good to see you again :) thank you for your short but meaningful words, they mean the world to me.... I really hope to catch up with your art, (my bad) have been in a terrible chaotic situation lately, but I will come back for your stunning pieces lady! X

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Hello :) I apologize for their shortness..simply wanted to let you know I am appreciating your magic- I have been away some time also due to chaos- and sympathize ! take your time :)

You're one of my favs on here, I will come back for you! :) it's all ok.... sometimes real life keeps us so busy... You're a sweety. So do you ok! You will see me soon by! X and have a beautiful day/night, :) - Eli xx

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Yes ma'm. We shall take our time in rediscovering each other. :) Until Soon comes :) Enjoy the rest of this day xx

That freedom, and friendship is golden to me. Makes me smile xxx you too!

[stephen dillon]

loved it you are so cute and smart in your tone

Aw, thank you dearly Stephen :)