~ Little Swan

~ Little Swan, E.L. Elisa Laura, Ballet, Love, Dance, Free Style... Seasons...

~ Little Swan

 

 

Feel your flippers into the water

Dance your magnificent presence all alive

Turn skittish around your space

Preheat the world with your white beauty's grace

 

Move like a lady, in her beloved water

As an erotic dance on the axis you float

See yourself twinkle  in the morning sun

In the love of you being home

 

You peculiar character melts

On the lake when you companion

Deep soils, quiet area with silent bliss

Movement on the horizon’s kiss

 

Find your life partner through the light

In your flight from cold winter nights

By long trips to the south into hights

Where you land, and love your bridegroom

 

Your energy level touched real silence

You succumb prestige of all time through

With your wings white buckled, and flying

You will always freer draw those lines in hue

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xxx

Reviews

[Tree]

I appreciate the beauty of the swan, and have written about her, too. I thought you did a marvelous job of describing her in her element; graceful and pure. Truly one of the most exquisite creatures on the face of our little blue planet. If not the universe

Diego

Yes, she is... thank you dear Diego, she is rest and purity, and if we all looked a bit more inside her beauty, the world would be less rushing :) beautiful words...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is exquisite!...a flow of pure elegance written from your ink, dear Eli.
I envision a graceful dance of eternal love...pure from the heavens. The swan is beautiful creature to behold, full of grace. I enjoyed reading this lovely and tranquil piece. ~xo~

Thank you dear one :) I'm so pleased to read your beautiful words... we need sometimes a moment of zen and rest in all between the hectic life.... this was my escape lol... :) so happy you enjoyed, and loved it XXX :)

[michael.c.m]

sigh. You made my day, young lady.

Thank you so much Michael, I am so happy and honored with your words~

[sithlordjp]

delicate words to describe a delicate creature.... How appropriate! A lovely read, thanks for sharing!

Thank you very much dear poet/writer :)

[Jack...]

Exquisite and pure, one of my favorite creatures of nature. Thank you for sharing.

I'm so grateful for all your words, reviews... Thank you my friend, can't wait to read more of yours when I've a bit more time.

[Holly Mason]

beautiful from the words to the art
thank you for sharing your little swan

Thank you so much Holly :) x

[Priscilla Sayers]

Beautiful sweet pea! The soothing music made the vision of this lovely swan come alive along with the graceful ink of your magical hand.... I loved it dear sis!

Thank you so much dearest sweetheart! your words I keep in my heart always, Eli xoxo

[Pax]

i see you dance the swan lake play in your words....
The whisper of grace and silent bliss is written in the wings of your beautiful poetry…
Beautiful work dearest Friend.

Without you, I wouldn't have two wings, my dear friend.... fly with me ~ :) thank you xx

[Pax]

flying is our thing, ofcourse i'll fly with you... lets fly high in the skyline poetry...
your most welcome, always! ;)

That sounds divine... :) it is our thing... we must free our minds :) beautifully said poetic wonder! :D

[David Scott]

I enjoy the beauty of the Swan...
This poem does melt the cold.
Heart warming EL.

Thank you sweet friend, I long for spring....................... :)

[s y e]

This was amazing! The video was amazing too

Thank you Sye dear, I recently was on your page, in between all the rush, and listened to your music, woman, you have taste.... esp. that song of the women behind the piano I loved... ♥ thanks dear

[s y e]

No worries at all, ah yes, she is amazing! Brings a tear to my every time I listen to it! Beautiful, emotional song right?
Welcome! Anytime!

Glad I got to know her through your page, music is so important to me... ♫ so emotional, and heartfelt yes.... xxoxo

[s y e]

I know, I dont go a day without listening to music!♫ ♫♫♫
xoxx

Amazing creature you are ♥♫ :D

[s y e]

Thanks, so are you❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤