~ Oneness

~ Oneness, E.L. Elisa Laura, Fantasy, Desert, Love, Spirits, Spiritual, Mind Travels

~ Oneness

 

To be in one place so

Connected to everything

Where your body dances

With the warm wind

And your senses do excite,

I felt your roots

 

As if your ghost swirled

In this life through each element

And not could commit a touch

But as free as the grains of sand

in my hair

I hear you whispering

 

My great love

Back to your roots

I walk the long visual desert

Into your green eyes,

And you follow my trusty odor

I am one with you

 

The sun in my back,

Oases stretched out

I dance your heartbeat

Where it leaves me to

Bring you happiness

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Quill~]

I love this stanza, as much as this whole poem. But this stanza stands out to me. It's in the eyes where we see through each other's soul. I love the visual walk you gave me through your eyes to his. Awesome write!

"My great love

Back to your roots

I walk the long visual desert

Into your green eyes,

And you follow my trusty odor

I am one with you"

Thank you so much for this exceptional review, I like how you picked it up, in a "he" :) you're brilliant dear poetess. X

[Quill~]

one would have to be masculine to follow your beauty, Ms. Elisa. ;)

Now I wonder if the dessert is masculine too.... I think so. :) thank you for all tonight overhere, dear Quill, go sleep for a while, speak to you soon ok! xx

[Quill~]

ok...I need to spend time with my date...he's feeling ignored! lol
I'll be back to read more! X

Ooooh haha, yes you should dear.... don't let your date wait, for chatting with me ;-) have the most wonderful time sweetie X :D

[Quill~]

I will...he's pouting, but he'll get over it. ;)
Ciao Bella!

Aw, my greetings to both.... Ciao Tesoro, ti voglio molto bene! Ci vediamo domani. Eli x

[Quill~]

Grazie!

:-) Di niente... a presto! baci

[Horizon K.]

Lovely Elisa! There is such a peaceful fulfillment throughout this piece... It transmitted tranquility into me as I read it... And I needed this... Been feeling so restless recently so thank you so much for sharing your lovely words and message!
Xx Horizon

Love, thank you! for you have been there for me so much! really... I carry you on my shoulder each day, and we speak in silence... that is what this write does too... love to over seas honey, and till soon, when all is a bit calm overhere. Miss you bunches! love and light XX thanks!

[Horizon K.]

Thank you Elisa and my love to you as well! I hope things are calmer soon for you... We all need these moments to just reconnect with ourselves in stillness... Let the storm pass... You words and your friendship are such a gift! Xx

Oh that's it... when silence is loud, I seak for silence... ;-) high mediative. Yes, dear, wish that too... it's like a neverending hurracane lol ... but i know it will be better soon, your encouriging soul, spirit and words are connected with me, always.... you're my beautiful gifted sister love you X

*seek.... xx

[DriDri]

This is absolutely beautiful.

Thank you sweet DriDri :)

[DriDri]

You're Welcome ^_^

[Cassie Fraga]

oooohhhh how I love this feeling.... I feel it every time I walk the riversides out here in Washington. a beautiful sense about this write. so spiritual and free.... GREAT WRITE SIS!!!

Thank you beautiful sister!!! :) I'm so glad you enjoyed, and are back again, I will soon too, in full matter, I'm grateful to have your support by in this difficult situation I deal with overhere. xxx much love and a hug!

[Pax]

i felt the dessert roots in this poem... as i live on it right now... your mind and spirit is traveling in far far lands.... another enchanting journey of your words dearest!
wonderful!

Thanks Paxie :)

[Pax]

most welcome :D

[.]

firstly, that's a vivid and striking picture accompanying your poem.
and your poem is equally impressive.
(i'm glad i got to read it thru before your music video started and messed with my concentration)

nice job, elisa. love the visuals :-)

Thank you Jay, yes, (I'm a music lover) oops... I write on music I hear on the moment, I can understand it can distract... but I love to give the whole picture I had in mind, your words are truly appreciated :) Thank you so much.

[Androglossia]

Some place can remind us of someone significant to us. And when we're there, even if that person is long gone, we will feel their presence like a warm promise or assurance, even understanding. I loved this write Elisa.

Yes, that is so true, :) there can be an ambience of each time era that well felt be around us... Thank you so much for your encouraging words sweetheart.... this was also of the roots of my hubby ;) X

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a love poem to a desert...with such exhorbitant feeling...

breathtaking.

jacob

Thank you so much jacob, you don't realize what you just said, and what I took from it. :) grateful too you!!!

[CS]

The desert is a beautiful and mysterious place. All those grains of sand are separate unto themselves, but if viewed from the right perspective, they make one landscape. Good thing we have those oasis' to quench our thirst in those parched lands. Many travelers walk for miles just to find those green eyes to drink from.

What I like most about this piece, Eli, is that you give the landscape personality. Most people would think of the desert being a dull and inhospitable place but you have given it a sense of life. As if the woman and the sand merge together and there is no difference between them. They have an understanding....they have connected roots. They share their nature.

Lovely work on this, sis. I really like the concept a lot. It is something so relatable to me personally.I am taking this to my library :)

Oooh dear, you don't know how much this review means to me, really. You have the eyes, when I'm blind, and in that Nirvana, and help me paint.... That is exactly what I wanted to bring over, the woman, and the ambience, (if it is sand, an animal, love, or a season). That with pure meditation it can merge. I feel honored by your beautiful review, and I'm truly happy you can connect. That is what is most beautiful, to merge also with my best friends X

[CS]

I am glad to accompany you on this journey, sis :) X

Me too sweet sister, thank you XXX :)

[.]

I love this piece so much. It is so lively and colorful. The stanza "
My great love
Back to your roots
I walk the long visual desert
Into your green eyes,
And you follow my trusty odor
I am one with you" is magnificent and very handsome. lol:0

Mister Cord, thank you so much! and also for seeing those handsome little connections :P :D lol

[Distant horizons]

To be connected to all of your surroundings and being at one with them is truly beautiful. I feel this when I go climbing and sit at the summit looking at every detail from my feet to the horizon, and understand them all completely. beautiful sense of freedom and life in these words Elisa

Thank you so much my friend. It is exactly that... when all becomes totally nothing you're in [pure nirvana] :D

[Distant horizons]

I would love to stay there but they dont have 24 hour supermarkets up there :-)

Hehe.. so true! dang! :) but in my backpack there are always enough things to survive lol :)

[Distant horizons]

I need to get a bigger backpack. Ever seeng a lonely place to die it is full of weapons to fend off the loons :-)

That movie was just fantastic huh? :D I will buy it one day x

[Distant horizons]

It was, i'm gonna show it to the rest of them the night before we go our next climb :-)

You should do that, to make them a little "AWAKE" gnegne... ;-) :D

[Distant horizons]

Then when we are there, say to them "did you here that?" :-)

Ooooh yuck.... he he.... And then one goes for a pie, and finds a hole in the grass...... haunting and whimsical......

LOL I meant pee ofcourse ha!!! American Pie was on my mind ;-)

[Distant horizons]

:-)
Just hope I dont get locked in the box.
ps, sorry to anyone reading this who is just about to watch the movie :-)

Haha exactly! that box is freaky.... claustrophobic....

[Distant horizons]

And think of all the spiders that would crawl in :-)

Well lol I must say, I'm getting over my spider fear.... since lately in Andalucia, I catched a really big and hairy black one. And put it outside on my balconny, I overwon myself really. Just now when I see another one, I think twice, and remember that moment.... But I can't kill them, simply can't.

[Distant horizons]

Oh, I can. my rational side goes on vacation and leaves me with only one thought when I see one "It's going to wait until I look away then jump on me and eat my face" :-)
Probably fear us as much but I do turn into a big girls blouse when I see them :-)

Hahaha.... yes, it will be still a certain fixed primal fear, that deep in our cortex is hidden, though, when I tell you a story about my Dutch-Chinese friend who went to Laos, you don't want to hear that I think ha!!!

[Distant horizons]

hmm, sounds nasty :-)

Oh you read my mind already again :P it was nasty! ha!

[Distant horizons]

:-)
My neighbour has a snake and two tarantula. I never visit since i found out :-)

Imagine that snake end up into your toilet when you're sitting on it... ;-) that what happened to my friend, but then with a very poisonous spider... he could escape just in time.... !

[Distant horizons]

I always check first, but i bet i'll be quicker next time :-)

Ha! ;-)

[Distant horizons]

:-)