~ Oneness

~ Oneness, E.L. Elisa Laura, Fantasy, Desert, Love, Spirits, Spiritual, Mind Travels

~ Oneness

 

To be in one place so

Connected to everything

Where your body dances

With the warm wind

And your senses do excite,

I felt your roots

 

As if your ghost swirled

In this life through each element

And not could commit a touch

But as free as the grains of sand

in my hair

I hear you whispering

 

My great love

Back to your roots

I walk the long visual desert

Into your green eyes,

And you follow my trusty odor

I am one with you

 

The sun in my back,

Oases stretched out

I dance your heartbeat

Where it leaves me to

Bring you happiness

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[Quill~]

I love this stanza, as much as this whole poem. But this stanza stands out to me. It's in the eyes where we see through each other's soul. I love the visual walk you gave me through your eyes to his. Awesome write!

"My great love

Back to your roots

I walk the long visual desert

Into your green eyes,

And you follow my trusty odor

I am one with you"

Thank you so much for this exceptional review, I like how you picked it up, in a "he" :) you're brilliant dear poetess. X

[Quill~]

one would have to be masculine to follow your beauty, Ms. Elisa. ;)

Now I wonder if the dessert is masculine too.... I think so. :) thank you for all tonight overhere, dear Quill, go sleep for a while, speak to you soon ok! xx

[Quill~]

ok...I need to spend time with my date...he's feeling ignored! lol
I'll be back to read more! X

Ooooh haha, yes you should dear.... don't let your date wait, for chatting with me ;-) have the most wonderful time sweetie X :D

[Quill~]

I will...he's pouting, but he'll get over it. ;)
Ciao Bella!

Aw, my greetings to both.... Ciao Tesoro, ti voglio molto bene! Ci vediamo domani. Eli x

[Quill~]

Grazie!

:-) Di niente... a presto! baci

[Revery]

How other do linger, in multiple plains and dimension of us. Especially those that had permeated into the porosity of our being. Lovely Elisa, like you.

Wow dear G. what a beautiful review, that is too much for me hehe, thank you so much :)

[Jack...]

Oh to be one with someone, to hold them as your own, to listen to the sweet whispers of love and share an endless dream together. Very beautiful, this took me to a place of happiness.

Oh that's beautiful Jack it could take you there, thank you very much :)

[emmajoy]

Inevitablly we all have a somewhere that holds a special, pre-destined space - a breath of home, a spirit sanctuary. Like a jigsaw if you like, one piece missing, you're that piece, you complete the picture, IT completes you, it's waiting to wrap around you, inhale every part of you. You need each other. I have a place in mind.

Beautifully said sweety.... U have it in mind :) makes me smile xx thanks a lot ....

[Careline]

I love this. How did you add the video?

[Don Shaw]

Wow well done! I feel like this daily , its my heritage as well.

Thanks Don... that is cool! :)

[Sophia Marie]

The words flow so well with this added video. I really enjoyed the whole experience and the wonderful mood/emotions you create. Thanks

Thank you dear friend, I'm glad you liked it. :) And soon will be reading more of you x

[ObscurityNone]

Ahhh, nothing quite like a beautiful sight/feeling/savior, and much more.. amongst a barren and desolate waste, that can claim ones life easily.. If mistreated.

Thank you for your interesting interpretation....

[MOON]

To be at one with nature it quenches the thirst , great write.

Let's drink together spiritual sister X thank you megamuch!

[Robin]

Kensho ~

" Hai " Master.... Koan~ Love, Music and Light, till soon X

[Robin]

Light and inspiration Elisa