~ This Night

~ This Night, back in the mind, time, travel, you, me, we, love, rain, kiss

~ This Night

 

A long day resulted extended

In a drive along the busy

Streets with the green and red light

Reflected in every raindrop

My thoughts so full

Your thoughts even fuller

 

Doubly linked; not knowing

The tears of our universe

So utterly needed, and respected,

But also seen as our agony

United by fate, loved by skin

In dense thoughts slightly loosened

 

Where is the days council? so far away?

If our threads never separate

On the early morning sun

And our place is wet from the rain

A love felt in mid, through each journey

And by ground so unfinished ...

 

By growing in each flowering

Breath of life, each cell of our brain

Any thoughts flowing like water

And the days are numbered, but never counted out

In infinite minds like we share…

Though I'm halfway determined

 

Back roads are impossible

Ways forward, not good enough, yet…

The roads through the side? the side window?

Yes, I found you on my way to what I missed

And you found me, we accepted

The Northern rain this night

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Music: Ketty Lester

Just the real vision I had tonight.... x

Reviews

[sithlordjp]

"A long day resulted extended" yes, like those long summer days, when the sun slowly goes down for what seems like hours... Like lovers, trying to extend a kiss so they won't have to say goodbye just yet... And to avoid a fight, those "The tears of our universe", because when love is threatened, it feels like it's the whole world that is in danger. But in the water, in each drop of the warm summer rain, arguments can be washed away, and emotions can be renewed, reborn... Happiness is not found on a highway that makes you save time, but in these "The roads through the side? the side window?"... But rather on a long, appreciated detour toward what matter most. More dust on that road, but through that dust resides hope.... I really enjoyed reading this one Elisa, like so many of yours, it's full of superb imagery and just a feast of imagination and words... Well done ! 100/100

I feel so honored with your reviews JP, just wonderful how you enjoyed this... I wanted this write to give an "old" feel, and you know a typical cinema touch... so glad you enjoyed this :) :) :)

And I see I enjoyed it twice lol... ;) over enthausiastic me...

[sithlordjp]

some things are worth enjoying twice, like my mother spaghetti sauce for example !!! ;)

Oh Yummy!!! mum's spaghetti saus! I bet she can cook like an angel :)

[ObscurityNone]

This certainly has an "oldie" feel to it, classy and genuinely authentic.

Thanks brother luv.... :) INTP a.k.a J ha!

[Revery]

Very sublime my dear. I love your style. Especially loved:

Streets with the green and red light
Reflected in every raindrop
My thoughts so full
Your thoughts even fuller

How the experience of another makes our head spin.

Aw thank you sweetheart. Yes, I was driving tonight, the red and green traffic-lights in the rain, reflected my thoughts, on paper.... it was a over-full day, and the release was nessecary. :D you pick it so well up dear, hope you and yours are good overthere, my thoughts are always with you guys, even if I seem silent... remember, I will come back for you, when difficult times, here settle down, a bit..... :) Thank you for the love, and light tonight. Love to your wife and daughter too! xx Eli

[Revery]

Thank you Eli

Always welcome dear G. If there is anything you want me to read, mail me the link, I'm sorry I'm not so active on here lately, but for you I always will..

[David Scott]

It is a good thing to find companionship when the road is blocked to us.
To find that when you reach out in your last attempt to survive, you find the hand of the only one you could have hoped for.
Wonderful poem of hope.

Oh nice thoughts, you give me, new pondering thoughts dear David.... you bring me the blocked road... :) i like that. Thank you so much for your thoughts, they are always very welcome on my page hope you're well dear friend, soon I have more time and will be back for your beautiful insightful poetry :)

[Distant horizons]

Beautiful words Elisa. Such vivid imagery from the raindrops to all the hopes and days ahead and everything inbetween. Your words always shine.

Lorry, hun, thank you megamuchly (x) you always feel it...

[Distant horizons]

Manymegamuchly :-)

:-) thanks for all you whisper to us, your words are felt... remember :-)

[Distant horizons]

Always sweetie, foreverever (x)

Foreverever aye :-) x

[Distant horizons]

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Eli is triple smiling, like a good beer :-D

[Distant horizons]

Good, glad to here it sweetie :-)

XXX

[Distant horizons]

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