~ Alise

~ Alise, Elisa Laura, E.L. Voyage stories, Travel Observations, Espana, Andalucia

 

~ Alise

 

The splendid view

On the ninth floor

My heart beat

Faster,

Euforia in my lungs

Eyes closed

The swallows 

On my balcony

Nestled in a nest

On the rough wall

The quiet feeling of their

Velocity, faster then sound

Their dancing

In the evening air

I stared for a while

At the red purple sunset

With orange edges,

A fine glass of  “Rioja”

In my left hand

Enjoying the

Wavy azure sea

The love from the south

Balancing into the right rhythm

The sunset waved music

The horizon some notes

In a moment of ecstasy

And pure freedom,

I saw myself sitting,

Smiling, eyes closed again

Leaning back

Senses sharp, 

To the time of all times

Listening, breathing

The music,

The music which never ends

Alive…

      Alise… Ah sí...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

One of the many...... observations of a delicious eve in Spain.
Enjoy, Alise means "smooth" in Spanish, but also it has the letters
of my name. X

La musica never ends, in a warm heart...

Reviews

[Joe]

How Beautiful It Is Elisa (sigh)

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"A fine glass of “Rioja”
In my left hand
Enjoying the
Wavy azure sea
The love from the south
Balancing into the right rhythm
The sunset waved music
The horizon some notes
In a moment of ecstasy
And pure freedom / So Soothing ..... Ahhhh

Beautiful Write And Music, Elisa!

Merci Gabriel :) Nice to see you by

[Pax]

ahh the touch of your spanish roots is simply warm my friend... the music, the air, and the culture is too familiar much like ours but too different intirely... such wonderful reflection dearest...

Ooooh thank you my dearest friend, Salamat Indonesia loves the Philippines....X

[Pax]

that makes me smile very much.... hugs to you dearest... and your most welcome...

Thanks lovely man, Eli is back soon Will mail you all whatsoever is going on.... I don't unfortunately have much time right now.. but. Soon I Will, wait me please.... X

[Pax]

smiling here... no probs dearest... take your time, you know we your friends are always here for you... just take it easy out there like i always said to our dear friend ms. Belle... she's very busy now, she comes and goes... but always have time to her friends like us.. you will be alright dearest.. take care always!

You make me happy guys, that freedom is grand, you too keep strong and positive my best friends. Be soon back for your art works... Kisses

[ObscurityNone]

I love the Spanish feel, I myself am a Spaniard, though an American. Your poem was very beautiful, and it's display of a wonderful, natural; and oftenly taken for granted setting, is something that speaks about the person you are, all in a positive light.

Thank you so much for your review, and nice you have Spanish blood too... :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Lovely bit of prose. The Spanish masters of art and prose flow through you at this moment.

Thank you so much :) dear friend

[rivers]

The way you have captured a beautiful moment, it instantly takes me to a place in a past life. I have played the music 3 times because my memory is so poignant. This reminds me of the final night spent in Cortona, Italy with someone very special to me... Your wonderful poem takes me back to a time and place that has vanished forever. You are the real artist...Elisa

Wow, that is beautiful Harlon, I'm glad I could bring you back some divine memories... I'm happy you enjoyed it, thank you so much :)

[MOON]

Beautiful write journeys to places and how they stay long after twe have left.

Thank you so much Moon, for all the reviews... :) they always make me smile x

[captain]

i see a beautiful smile on the photo and on the write. The feel of shining sunset on your skin brings a warm feelings of joy, i enjoyed this read. Beautiful!

Thank you captain, I waved at your cruise on the port of Gibraltar, didn't you see me? ;) :) thanks for navigating by ! :)

[captain]

hahaha, your humor made my day. oh i didn't see you around, i was too busy navigating perhaps. Shame i didn't see your pretty face but its awesome to passed by in your beautiful views. :D

It was a perfect sunset, and your cruise was lightened already :) little tiny flickers on the horizon far away... you were going to Portugal... :) for sure LOL, taking a stop at the Algarve.... :) glad I made you smile my friend. :D

[Corset]

Omgosh, this is way too beautiful and still there is a feeling of connection, a poem about swallows, wild and wonderful, I love this Elllie!

Thank you so much dear X so good to see you back :)

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Softly exquisite my dear friend. Beautiful views you've shared!

Thank you sweetheart, glad you enjoyed it :) X

[Shelly Tennyson Taylor]

Lovely, I felt as if I was standing on that balcony with you, it was enchanting.

Thank you very much Shelly :-) I'm glad I could take you with me for a while :)