~ Pearls With a Story

~ Pearls With a Story, E.L. Elisa Laura, Life, Hurt, Surroundings in Real Life, Pain, Poetry

~ Pearls With a Story

 

 

Naked, yes bare you have me

In the night of mysterious thoughts

I surrender to each drop

Merging on my skin

Where miracles come true

To read your soul

 

Daydreaming postponed

To the wonders of the

Silent night,

Only the ticking of tears

Each with a story

Are hitting me

 

So I will follow them

In each deeper

Significance,

Piercing wet

In my soul

The story from

Your heart steeped

 

Dominant by it's weight

But quenched with a

Soft cool

Touch, after

Sliding on the ground

To thirst our earth

 

I'm here, let it rain

Let me embrace you and

The purity of your hurt

Let me enter your heart

For you and I shall survive

In true pearls with a story

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you for reading me.
I wrote this lately,
Now I have the guts to share it.

There are hard times coming for me
And my sweetheart. (man).
But (not between us)
But a very hard thing will happen...
Some know on here,
Others don't.

I just want this single poem,
Not be interpret wrongly.
As it would be written to you,
It isn't, I am here to vent...
This was pure healing, pure me.
It is how it is, and I wanted
To speak out what I really felt.

Do what you must...
Feel what you can...
Be silent if needed...

Thank you xx

Reviews

[sithlordjp]

I took a long pause after "Daydreaming postponed". I was deeply touched by this... The implications it has. When our daydreaming is cut short or denied, I cannot imagine a more troubling thing... Then of course, I kept reading, and was rewarded once again by such emotional writing, your words carry a powerful echo Elisa, I'm very aware and attentive to the sounds of words. Yours speak plenty. "Only the ticking of tears /Each with a story" is my favorite passage. The smallest parts of us, even the ones we leave behind, like tears, are so much snapshots of everything we are. Of course we don't know each other, but there is more than a writer in this poem, there is a full human being, sharing a rather personal journey, and I thank you for letting us in.

Thank you deeply for this astonishing review. You see things very keen. :) You're welcome, letting in, means to heal on pieces of your own which are broken. It is a pleasure to read your words. JP.

[Frieda P]

This strikes a chord and fills my mind of personal experiences. It's lovely and tragic in the same breath. You write your heart so elegantly, it's speaks your name, I can always see you in your writing. Captivating read my dear friend.

Thank you for your so heartfelt words dear friend, It is most appreciated to have your words here. xxx

[Frieda P]

Always Eli, your words fill me joy even when they are wrought with sadness. A pleasure.

And that is what I like about you Frieda, we always see positivism through. :) Thank you.

[Frieda P]

You should talk my dear! ;-D What else can we do, we write poetry as a balm, it keeps us in that semi-sanity place, remember? xo

Haha, yes, dear true to that. We all have a story, and we are not alone in this... :) xoxo

[s y e]

This poem is rather personal and I'd like to thank you for sharing it! This poem speaks of it.

We've all heard of it, sadness is really hard and a terrible experience for someone to go through. I hope everything is ok now my dear.

Amazing work! xox

Thank you dear, yes this one is personal... it is still very difficult, to see a person you love so badly and who stays so close not being well. We, (my hubby and me) are watching this for a several years, now, but it got worser and worser just lately... It will be soon ok... we hope. Thank you for your thoughts, and compassion dear friend xxx

[s y e]

I am so sorry lovely, that you are still going through this difficult time. It is must be terrible! Im sure it will be ok. Your very welcome deary, anytime xox

Your words already make me so positive again, :) thank you so much. xoxo :)

[s y e]

Aw, that's so sweet. Well, I am praying it all works out! :-) It was all my pleasure xox

[Revery]

We love you Elisa, your so special to us. Your soul is beautiful and that continuously shines outward. Thank you for sharing all you do with all of us. Our worlds are better because we know you.

G

Thank you dear G. The feeling is mutual, I love you too guys, my friends on here. Thank you for your heartwarming words in difficult times. They are so appreciated G. Thank you for being you. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and heart felt words in the poem. Best days and nights of a life when we are nude and free of all fears in the desire of love. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Coyote, my friend, thank you always for spreading your wonderful words and positivism, just when needed... :) hugs from over sea :)

[Horizon K.]

The sharing of some story so sad it cannot but bring heavy tears. With love even the worst can be survived, with hearts intact, souls scarred but not broken. This was so elegant and beautiful and penetrating with its heavy words of pain. My dearest Elisa, I hope all is well with you and your love.
xx Horizon

Thank you dear soulsister, I am so happy to have you around always... it really does me good... with us is all good, only with a very near person in our family not. It will be a heavy time, and sometimes through all love and smiles, tears can't hide... thank you dear, for understanding, and letting me have a grief moment.... I love you for that. X

[Horizon K.]

Oh dear Elisa, I suspected that from your Author's note. I am truly sorry for you family & I wish the best for all of your health & happinesses. Simple words can never describe these feelings so well as a poem though...
Your soulsister, Horizon

♥

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully penned emotion Elisa. Reading the soul of a loved one, and yes, miracles do come true. These are the beautiful moments that will outweigh the bad, to insignificant levels.
Wonderful images your words paint in the readers mind.

Thank you dearest, for understanding profoundly (x) and be here.

[Distant horizons]

You are most welcome, oh wisest soul :-)

(x) no, you're dear... :-) Learn so much from you :-)

[Distant horizons]

And me from you sweetie. kus :-)

Kus :-) Kus, and Kussie :-)

[Distant horizons]

:-)
ps.... the music is beauiful too. So thought provoking.

Thank you dear, it is one of my musical friends.... I promote here ;-)

[Distant horizons]

I will look out for all the success they deserve

Thanks my buddy :-) so kind of you xx

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[krish]

HEY.....I LIIKED IT.....BUT NOT READ AFTER UR POEM ,I LIKED AFTER UR'S AUTHOR'S NOTE...
FIRSTLY WHEN I CLICK HERE,& DID START TO READ,I WAS THINKING THAT...... IS THAT" ELISA",WHO HAS WWRITTEN IT YET.....BUT WHEN I READ UR'S AUTHOR'S NOTE THEN I SURED THAT YEAH...IT'S ELISA....THAT MADE IT.......REALLY UR'S WORD'S..I MEANT UR'S PEARL'S WORD;'S ARE SO WET LIKE A RAIN DROP'S.......I WAS TAKE FEELING THAT THE RAIN-DROPS ARE FALLING OVER ME....WHEN I WAS READING UR'S POETRY.....
I LIKED + LOVED IT DAMN...EVEN THIS TIME I CAN'T SAY INTO MY WORD'S...COZ....I HAVE NO WORD'S TO SAY THIS TIME.....
WHEN I WAS READING ,REALLY I WAS JUST ANALYSING AT THE TIME AS WELL.....UR'S VIDEO THIS TIME IS PERFECT,.............WHAT A NICE WAY TO SHOW UR'S THOUGHT'S...UR'S PEARLING;S,...UR'S FEELING'S...UR'S WORDING'S...UR'S.....DAY-DREAMING & SO ON ARE TOTALLY DOMINANT..........
THE LUNAR IS SO COOL.................THE TRACK'S ARE SO CLEAN...............THE MOON LOOK'S SO BRIGHT.....................
THE EARTH BEHIND THE MOON'S REVOLVING SEEM'S SO NICELY....................
NOW THE TIME HAS COME TO GIVE U 1000/100.......
IT'S REALLY A DEEP THINKING ....................I WISH THAT I'D ONE DAY MAKE SUCH KIND OF POEM WITH A BEAUTIFUL IMAGES + VIDEOS AS U DID......I'M REALLY TODAY SO IMPRESSED BY U.........
U FLUTTER' ME TODAY.......
THANK-GOD THAT I'VE/WE'VE SUCH KIND OF WRITER'S...........
MAY GOD GIFT U RIGHT PATH............
HAVE A CHEERFUL + BLESSFUL = HELPFUL DAY...........
NOW UR'S OVERALL RATTING IS AWESOME + AWESOME +AWESOME = AWESOME........
& ONE MORE THING U R THE FIRST PERSON WHO HAS GAINING MY AWESOMNESS + 1000/100.........
U R LUCKY ......HAVE A NICE DAY.........

You make me smile Shivam, thank you, this was a serious poem, about real problems... it has nothing to do with being "wet wet" in that sense... though. But I'm grateful you leave your thoughts here. Always...

[krish]

here wet mean's i was take felling's of pourness of pearl's,when i was reading.........this poem show's real reality...that's why i did like........

Thank you then........ :) It were real tears this night.....

[krish]

don't take it seriou's , i didn't know that the poem is based on u...........i was just lost in the world of wettiest pearl's ...that was ticking'ssssssss.........

It's ok.... it's all good Shivam. :)

[krish]

u were tearing.....ahh...that;s why u didn't read my poem....
may be if u wanna laugh then c'mmon have a look on my 1st...poetry.....:FUNNY IMAGINATION:...........i'm that u would laugh.......believe me.....
just take a look only one time.........
u'd forget ur's tears',.........

[krish]

hey...mistake in write...i was typing...that i'm sure that u would laugh...believe me..
just have a loook only one time.....u'd forget ur's tear's...........

I will when I feel the mood kind soul..... :) I will.....

[krish]

ok....i'll wait...........
let's see u laugh or not........but iknow u will/.........

[Tree]

My dear Eli. You truly have one foot in this realm and the other foot in another. A more, beautiful one. If you intended to take this reader by the hand to show him what you are privy to, then you have succeeded

Diego

................... thank you bro. X