~ Our Intimacy

Elisa Laura, E.L. Poetry, Our Intimacy, Love, You, Me, Just a little love poem in between... :-)

~ Our Intimacy

 

 

 

You are the sea, within my veins

Sloshing aqua instead of blood

The little space between my cells

And the brain when out of food

 

You are the man of all my dreams

How your character loves mine

The way you are lost, I ain’t

And when I am, you’re fine

 

I always dream of you in silent skies

Where our love can fly

Even as on earthly ground

When we touch the sky

 

O’er us a smoke of thoughts

Delight covered within our dreams

You’re the love when I’m insane

The freedom of our streams

 

You’re the diamond in my sea

My heart and air I live,

Grief with you isn’t there

For you is all the love I give

 

You love and reach beyond,

I made stronger our bond

We just are those who never give up,

Two birds with broken wings can fly

Chained to each others brightest sky

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

~ Just a little love poem, in between.... xx
Enjoy!

Reviews

[CS]

I have probably read this five times now, and every time I read it, it is like a little more of its beauty shines through. I have often felt like a bird with a missing wing. As I try to fly, I can only spin around in a circle, never able to completely lift off. But I know, somewhere, someplace, someone has found that wing. And someday....they will return it to me...and I will fly away.....as one.

"Two birds with broken wings can fly chained to each other brightest sky".....yes, I think they can.

Keep flying, sis. May your poetry give you wings.

Thank you so much sis, that is beautiful, if two can melt into eachother, and make eachother fly... that is what me and my hubby too went through... but love is strong, and will be forever. I know for sure, you soon have two dear... thank you dear x

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Love can ground us and yet give us the ability to soar to beautiful skies to dream the possibilities of life. It is a blessing when true love is there to carry us through our times of insanity or doubt....chains unbroken, bonds are stronger. I love this, as much as I love your heart, dearest sis!~xoxo~:)

"I always dream of you in silent skies

Where our love can fly

Even as on earthly ground

When we touch the sky"~ Breathtaking!

Oh thank you so much for your exquisite words sister... They make my heart smile, and love your heart too so much! :) Hope you're having the most lovely sunday my dear XXX

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This touched the romantic in my heart. I loved it! Thank you for "your" exquisite words Sis. Have a great Sunday as well! XXXX

Thank you so much, from Roberto and me... we love your words! Hope you had a lovely sunny sunday love xxx

[Horizon K.]

Wow this was beautiful Elisa! This love completes... Keeps you grounded at the same time allowing you to fly! Love it!
And love the picture too:)
:) Horizon

Great I could bring over that feeling, that was exactly my intention dear sister... thank you so much for your lovely words. :) - x Elisa

[J. J. Nightingale]

You’re the love when I’m insane

The freedom of our streams ..

A beautiful melody of love ..

The video is perfect ..

Touches places of the heart .... Jazz

Thank you for your beautiful words Jazz...
You're the one who always feels me xx Eli

[J. J. Nightingale]

Hugs ........ :)...........

[Larry Dyson]

"Two birds with broken wings can fly

Chained to each others brightest sky
" like it lots

Thank you my friend, I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Pax]

i always admire your words of love... its shines brightly with colorful wings and soaring in high emotional warmth... Heartfelt flight in blossoming beauty. awesome dear friend!

Thank you my dear friend, that is so sweet of you to say. :-)

[Patrick]

hello, 16 views, one shelved in the library and no one says anything about this beautiful poem..maybe they are speechless, they should be...it warmed my cold toes

Haha, thank you P.J. for stopping and leaving your thoughts, :-) greatly appreciated. - Elisa

[Devanshu Rajput]

sorry p.j but it is 16 views not reviews...

I understood P.J. it is all good... :)

[Patrick]

thanks for the heads up...you should have left one yourself..tsk..no problem E.L

P.s. there are nowdays more nosy watchers than reviewers, but that's ok... as long as they enjoy my poetry..... ;-)

[Patrick]

I'm sure they do enjoy and maybe the noses will stop moseying and the fingers will start typing...either words of appreciation or their own writing