~ Our Intimacy

Elisa Laura, E.L. Poetry, Our Intimacy, Love, You, Me, Just a little love poem in between... :-)

~ Our Intimacy

 

 

 

You are the sea, within my veins

Sloshing aqua instead of blood

The little space between my cells

And the brain when out of food

 

You are the man of all my dreams

How your character loves mine

The way you are lost, I ain’t

And when I am, you’re fine

 

I always dream of you in silent skies

Where our love can fly

Even as on earthly ground

When we touch the sky

 

O’er us a smoke of thoughts

Delight covered within our dreams

You’re the love when I’m insane

The freedom of our streams

 

You’re the diamond in my sea

My heart and air I live,

Grief with you isn’t there

For you is all the love I give

 

You love and reach beyond,

I made stronger our bond

We just are those who never give up,

Two birds with broken wings can fly

Chained to each others brightest sky

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

~ Just a little love poem, in between.... xx
Enjoy!

Reviews

[CS]

I have probably read this five times now, and every time I read it, it is like a little more of its beauty shines through. I have often felt like a bird with a missing wing. As I try to fly, I can only spin around in a circle, never able to completely lift off. But I know, somewhere, someplace, someone has found that wing. And someday....they will return it to me...and I will fly away.....as one.

"Two birds with broken wings can fly chained to each other brightest sky".....yes, I think they can.

Keep flying, sis. May your poetry give you wings.

Thank you so much sis, that is beautiful, if two can melt into eachother, and make eachother fly... that is what me and my hubby too went through... but love is strong, and will be forever. I know for sure, you soon have two dear... thank you dear x

[Distant horizons]

Truly beautiful Elisa. What love should be. Two parts of the same rhythym,. When one wing tires, the other will work that extra bit harder to keep you both soaring high, even without knowing they do so. It is an automatic respnse to work together as one. Beautifully captured.

That is beautifully worded my dear friend, yes, you feel me, and us... thank you so much for this. Good appetite in a while dear (x)

[Distant horizons]

:-)

(x)

[Quill~]

How is it that love can be so strong? Well I think you have proved this by reinventing the meaning of intimacy. It is more when words flow from your ink. Amazing!

Thank you kindly my friend, yes, pure love don't need much, it dwells on the perfect skies, and is happy with the little things. (it takes years to be at that point) often in many relationships. Thank you for being here. X

[Quill~]

:) I'm glad I was here, to dwell in your perfect skies.

X It can thunder too.... ;-) but that's important if their weren't thunders, it couldn't be that bright... good day at work sweetheart...

[-----]

An endearing write. Loved it in its simple purity.

Thank you dear Leona :)

[quinfinn]

exquisitely beautiful and very deeply moving write. i love a good romance write and this qualifies. well done!

Thank you so much my friend, I'm happy you found it deeply moving. - Eli

[quinfinn]

easily found its way to my favorites

Thank you so much x

[quinfinn]

my pleasure

[Frieda P]

This is off the wall crazy good love poem without being sickeningly sweet and overburdened with saccharin. Touched my heart and soul, strummed on those violin strings of intimacy. You do romance well my lovely friend....spectacular!!

Thank you for your beautiful words dear friend, xxx

[Frieda P]

Always my pleasure dear xo

[krish]

yeah....again it's a nice + cooooll = intimacy poem.................
i love ur's word;s much that u' use in everypoem &u've used here................
carry on.............
may god bless u......
i wish in a future u b a nicewriter...............

Well thanks Shivam again for your thoughts, and time... :)

[David Scott]

This is the oneness of complementary characters devoted to loving one another.
Thank you for sharing this.

Oh thank you so much my friend... and you're welcome :-)

[Androglossia]

Very lovely indeed! Love is something that can happen no matter the circumstance. I loved how you described your feelings here, I liked how you associated it with nature. Well, love is something natural so it is only appropriate. What a beautiful spirit you have, Eli. Keep it up! Much love xoxo

Aw love, thank you so much, always happy to see you here Maryanne! great you saw the connection with nature, and lovely how you see all... thank you again, much love right back at you xoxoxo

[Androglossia]

You're welcome dearest:)

[Grey]

Wow, your writing is absolutely stunning. You are incredibly talented. I'm blown away.

Hey Grey, Thank you so much for stoping by, and your time and review, I'm glad you liked it, and very grateful :) - Elisa