~ The Land of Her

E.L. Fantasy, Elisa Laura, Surreal Tea Cup, Cup of Tea, The Land of Her, Sleeping

~ The Land of Her

 

Let her sleep in beauty’s landscape

Do not ever wake her up

Leave the little birdies singing

For she is dreaming in her cup

 

Let the trees play with all fresh air,

And  let the climate change

Let every season but to come

And accept this isn’t strange

 

Do never touch her sensitive skin

Before she will be awake

Dance with her thoughts while she’s asleep

That’s the beauty you should take

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

Author's Note

Enjoy! xx

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Powerful write Eli, I could feel the emotion in this. So I went and read it like a few times more :) I know the path, peace and tranquillity, but the small things within that world, couldn't allow it because without the Land the small things wouldn't have a place and there would be a humongous gap. But all things knew,butterflies and ants alike, that they couldn't speak only pray... Well done Eli you wrote a fabulous poem!! :) loved the way you wrote this well done.

Dank je wel lieffie, voor je mooie woorden ;) I'm so glad you liked this older one of me. Sleep is something so special, and I really like it what you got out of it my sweet friend. Thank you so much.

[Carl Drake Barnard]

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[Chris Micha]

Just as is nature, this piece was beautiful. Very well crafted piece!

Thank you for the lovely words Christian. Very appreciated. :) Elisa.

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What an imagery! Impeccable is the word. : )

Keep writing!

Thank you for coming by sweet Saima. :) and for your words. Will check you out too.

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My pleasure. : )
Looking forward to that.

Me too :)

[sithlordjp]

It can be a powerful experience to watch someone sleep. May it be a child, a lover, or an older relative. Makes us so self aware of the slightest move, or the smallest sound we make. We become the guardian, chasing away the bad dreams. As we watch quietly, we can almost share the peaceful rest... I enjoyed what you wrote here Elisa, this piece is refreshing, delicate and almost whispered... Your words are not intrusive, they are just the witness to the beauty of the sleeping creature.... Great work!

Thank you JP for this awesome point of view, again, and your great words. I agree with all you say here. Thanks again, a lot... :) I'm off and on, but I will check the beautiful mail within the moments, I can.... :)

[sithlordjp]

:) You are quite welcome.

[Jack...]

Wow, as if I have just read a wonderful dream. Your imagery is stunning and soft upon my eyes. Your words carry a beauty all their own. This is gorgeous.

Thank you so much Jack , for your time, and reading this little lullaby :) glad you found it gorgeous :) I feel honored.

[Jack...]

You are very welcome

[Patrick Henry]

My goodness!! You didn't even ask me, first, if you can take me to dreams and adorn a smile....... without asking!! ; ) Leave to all what passes, be the lesson of love and the life that seeds its beauty. I am not even sure how to comment on what seems like it should be published. lol I have only been writing for the better part of a year's time, and I am intrigued by you as much as I am left to my senses to pull you in with these beautiful poems of yours!! xoxo -Mark

Ooooh too much that I deserve dear Mark, thank you so much from the Netherlands, so appreciated.... I will be back for you and your writings. X

[Patrick Henry]

I appreciate, and see very rarely, reading a "poem" within a poem. It is hard to feign talent of one who both feels and loves what they do. YOU have easily captured me with respect to your work, and if you like.... I can remain silent from her on out if you'd like. I will still enjoy your poems immensely, should you not block me from reading you. ....gorgeous!! It feels like a "About time!!" moment. lol xoxo -Mark

:-) I love the way you have readed me.... that is precious. Thank you for it. Not everyone takes that deep effort. Never be silent, though, this was a fantasy poem, a lullaby, for (actually my little ones, I have in the family) I sing them to sleep often.... it came to mind.... and if they don't understand Dutch nor English yet, it doesn't matter, how I sing.... :) but it was out of the heart, so glad you felt it. xoxo Eli

I will profoundly back for your artworks, promise :-) thank you so much!! :)

[Patrick Henry]

I am not looking for reviews ad after last week, I'm not adding anyone anymore. Then I come across YOUR page!! I prove to be possessing of a brutish pose and stoic stare where it seems not much lately impresses me, but my best of friends on here. YOU are creating this weight, a beautiful one, that is making my chest cry. I don't know where I am going, reading you or listening to this beautiful song that is playing right now...... but I know to TRUST it!! Beautiful Elisa. My goodness..... : ) xoxox -Mark

That is brilliant though, I do only review too what I totally love, no read requests, and that not means I'm selfish, though, I'm just selective I call it.
:) I do truely review what I adore, and if I not have read you you or you yet, it means, I'm not having time, first people get first.... And I never forget those who made an impression on my retina. Or in poetic art with me. Thank you so much for being here, and loving what I do, that's the reason I'm here still, after a lot of trouble... and pain... I write for those who still appreciate me. And I never forget who they are. X :) Eli

[Patrick Henry]

This is not for the selfish purpose of seeding your heart with words that borrow on tired emotions. YOU will be my daily read and knowing that already, for me, feels like I have accomplished something. ; ) Beautiful, beautiful poetry!! I didn't expect this and if you ever read my page of poems, you will see that I am not known for being "without words"!! I will allow your poems to protect me, break me down to bring me up, and fall in love with my favorite lines. You have hit me so fast!! I can't think of you leaving... that is too much right now to take in. I'm just really happy that I have come across your page on here when I was ready to click off the site.... xoxo -Mark

Well I've read some of yours, as I do read everyone on here, even without reviewing, I read a lot.... :) and I liked it. So I will come back for you.
It means a lot to me, someone not Dutch love my works, I feel blessed. Thank you Mark for this. :)

[Brian]

This is fantastic!!

Thank you very much dear Brian :)

[Priscilla Sayers]

I love this! Such a surreal read. It makes mee smile as you so easily draw me into this beautiful fairytale dream land! Oh how I've missed you my beautiful sis!

Thank you love, I was in this mood lately lol, I have missed you too... Xxx

[Ken Simm.]

This should be in a little book, illustrated by Arthur Rackham. A lovely little Victorian verse.

Aw, Ken, that is coincidence, I was just reading your latest one... and felt the magic... I will continue. Thank you so much for your words, very appreciated my friend. - Elisa

[Pax]

"let the climate change, Let every season but to come, And accept this isn’t strange" ~ i see the beauty of acceptance despite natures harsh anger or should i say weather on us... I see you dance in methaphors dearest friend... the last stanza made me really think of how deeply it was meant... a sensitive soul who flies with strong persona...very much admirable.

Thank you very much dearest and sweetest friend. It is about how beautiful dreaming can be... sometimes, it is more beautiful then dreaming awake... :) Thank you so much for your lovely words :) xx