~ Endless

Endless, E.L. Elisa laura, Poetry

 

~ Endless

 

 

The road was difficult

Days without light

Suffocating narrowness

Claustrophobic smallness

Little breath

 

Wandering in

The last pure power

A living dream

An endless battle

The metamorphosis

 

Now from the mountain looking

On the doomed fields

The landscape without water

The grim without hope

No light in sight, ever ~

 

Wings were spread

Senses sharp

The eagle left

While marking his footsteps

On the snowy top

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

Just wanna say first off that the picture really helps visualize this piece and that the third stanza really helps describe the picture. It's always tough to feel as if we have no hope or no way of resovling our problems. A world without light would then depend on darkness. A world without problems would depend on peace and harmony. If at all, we always have to depend on something along the road.

Yes, thank you. I've been through that... Traveling helpt a lot... That's why my heart is my compass. Thank you dear friend.

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

That's an interesting way to look at it, a heart as your compass...

It's what I've learned to listen closely too ~ Thank you again :)

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

You are very welcome :) And I also love the title of this by the way!

Thank you so much dear :-) always happy to have you by

[DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf]

Welcome :) Anytime!

[Emerald Seas]

Hopeful and pure. A delightful read, Elisa!

My heart thanks your words.... dear soul! xxx

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

there is always hope............brilliant sweet sister

Love you for saying that my soulsister.... you're cracking me up! thanks a lot! x

[Horizon K.]

Lovely and so many ways this can be read... A mountain trekker making it to the foresaken peak or an apocalyptic vision... I love your words "Wandering in the last pure power," simply vision inspiring as we all seek for ourselves the powers the universe holds.

;-) sister you felt both... Wonderful visions, thank you greatly! p.s. I will mail you soon! just have a busy time, I won't forget to share our deeper roots... xx

[Horizon K.]

Ok Soulsister!!! Can't wait! Have a great weekend!

I work on it :-) it's a lot to tell..... You too soul! much fun, and have a great time, ~ Namaste

[I Shred This Cabbage]

mysterious, captivating, a feeling that every line belongs to its own distinct moment. I imagine it was penned whilst travelling, perchance walking, and edged out slowly.

Yes, it was. You did felt that right. Thank you John for your insight, and review.

[writing mojo]

such heighten senses and closed in desolation between the cramped lines of this thought provoking piece..makes me want to stretch out my arms and see how far and wide I can reach...great poem

Thank you my friend, I appreciate you, and your words.