I think this is my favorite one of yours so far. You were able to achieve a complete picture with your words, you really took me there. I saw the snow, felt the cold. The stillness of the whole landscape. When snow covers everything, are the screts beneath being buried, or slowly exposed? When all colors dissapear under a white coat, must we finally confront what is in that "valley"... I mean, wasn't that the whole point of The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo? "Small frozen particles" all weaving a larger picture... You write beautifully, it's a great joy to browse through your work.
Indeed or slowly exposed... it's a winters mystery. I like that. Thank you for picking so much inter.. read moreIndeed or slowly exposed... it's a winters mystery. I like that. Thank you for picking so much interesting things out... :) pleasure to read your reviews . :)
Snowflakes, the beauty of this small frozen particles is a giver of both blissful and solitary mood. A profound description of the season Dear Eli. I experienced one long winter season few years ago and now this poem brought me back to the breeze and smell of snow.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much dear soul sister, I'm so happy my feelings and thoughts could do that with you, so.. read moreThank you so much dear soul sister, I'm so happy my feelings and thoughts could do that with you, so happy to have you by too! thanks dear. X
11 Years Ago
Your feelings and thought always reaches me, Dear Sis.:D
I would like to ask how to do the mus.. read moreYour feelings and thought always reaches me, Dear Sis.:D
I would like to ask how to do the music in auto play? I would like also to do that in one of my poem.
11 Years Ago
I would love to explain you that, but I promised mr. Tate not to tell... ask Tate Morgan... he will .. read moreI would love to explain you that, but I promised mr. Tate not to tell... ask Tate Morgan... he will explain it to you xoxoxo your words are beautiful dear, always a pleasure to be around of you!
11 Years Ago
Ho, okay :D Thank you Dear sis as it is also a pleasure to be around here with you.
Mr... read moreHo, okay :D Thank you Dear sis as it is also a pleasure to be around here with you.
Mr. Tate is a good friend too, I hope he will tell :D
11 Years Ago
I hope too, I'm sorry, but a Dutchess always keeps her promise.... I don't want to be annoying or an.. read moreI hope too, I'm sorry, but a Dutchess always keeps her promise.... I don't want to be annoying or anything lol.... it's just I promised and I do what has been asked to me. Love to be around you too, I've watched the site, I will buy it soon... :D you're a godess Belle, for who you are and what you do! xxxx
11 Years Ago
Yes, I understand definitely, no worry and nothing to be sorry. You are a woman of conviction and fo.. read moreYes, I understand definitely, no worry and nothing to be sorry. You are a woman of conviction and for that I understand too that you are a woman of words. Aha, two godess LOL! ;D Cheers for this! :D
And for the books, thank you so much. that made be happy more. The children really need new school and we are still struggling in helping them building new one. A copy is more than enough Dear Soul Sister. :D
11 Years Ago
I miss our Pax dear... Our soul brother, he hopefully comes soon back, as he mailed me like I must t.. read moreI miss our Pax dear... Our soul brother, he hopefully comes soon back, as he mailed me like I must too... :D:D:D (that time)
Thank you for all you say, yes, the godess you're!!! and I do admire my sis.
I will help, I promise, but first I have to have money myself a bit ;-) I know, all the little things help... hugs sister love you xx
11 Years Ago
I am missing him too. I just had a talk with him last night and I believe he will be coming back soo.. read moreI am missing him too. I just had a talk with him last night and I believe he will be coming back soon. :D
BTW here is the direct link of the book in your vicinity, I just asked our publisher for it, I think the words is in Dutch, reson why I do not understand them LOL...Well it is all for you anyway, Dear Sis. :D hugs too and love to you too...
http://www.amazon.de/Angels-Cried-Stephen-L-Wilson/dp/1481852191/ref=sr_1_cc_2?s=aps&ie=UTF8&qid=1357789226&sr=1-2-catcorr
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It is in German, (Very often confused with Dutch) as it is pretty simular, and I understand it perfe.. read moreIt is in German, (Very often confused with Dutch) as it is pretty simular, and I understand it perfectly so no worries, it's great to have that link, thank you dearest !!! xooxo
11 Years Ago
Ho German. I do not know the difference at all. Ho God! LOL.
I understand dear, German is pretty difficult, as Dutch is too.... but for me very easy, as I had it.. read moreI understand dear, German is pretty difficult, as Dutch is too.... but for me very easy, as I had it 8 years in school
11 Years Ago
this conversation made me smile... miss you both...:)
hugs to both! :)
Somtimes I fantasize about living in an ice castle, like the forts I made as a kid. But as the Inuit who had 100 names for snow, well - the season's will inspire a trillion more poems no doubt.
What's winter like where you call home? Brief/mild? I thought so......nice poem.
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11 Years Ago
C -25 F -13 almost max, rough wind, Icy skin feeling... I guess like your home, almost. We are quite.. read moreC -25 F -13 almost max, rough wind, Icy skin feeling... I guess like your home, almost. We are quite on the same line....
You're also such an HSP, no doubt, as you as a child
Had already really vivid thoughts. Interesting isn't it?
Thank you very much for your thoughts :)
This is so elegant, Eli. There is a fine mix of science and nature with the "frozen particles" and the "waves of the valley". All come together to paint a picture of serenity. Those winter deserts are something very special.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for these words dear friend, Winter is really coming here, like it had a month of .. read moreThank you so much for these words dear friend, Winter is really coming here, like it had a month of delay. And I'm excited for it, as I do love those magical views, when the feelds are white, and I can take my snowboots on, and make long hikes... Thank you very much! :)
pull such blankets up ever so tight
so that we, may cuddle the night
a secret of whispers, frozen in air
seal the connecton, that we both share
you are the scarf round my neck..
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11 Years Ago
Buddy you're so romantic... it must be your Mejican blood ;) lol :D
Thank you with whole my h.. read moreBuddy you're so romantic... it must be your Mejican blood ;) lol :D
Thank you with whole my heart for your review!
11 Years Ago
my blood is always caliente.. but then you make it that way..
you DO know I wrote one within the review box... "Seems..." I didn't want to intrude on your space -.. read moreyou DO know I wrote one within the review box... "Seems..." I didn't want to intrude on your space - it inspires thoughts and perhaps mine might distract. But you do have a way that will inspire thoughts.
You never disturb kind sir :) it is great to have your thoughts, by. They are as snowflakes always. .. read moreYou never disturb kind sir :) it is great to have your thoughts, by. They are as snowflakes always. Thank you so much.
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well then - "Seems..." came from yours.
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It is wonderful we can inspire eachother, so do you so often with your writes... I will pop in later.. read moreIt is wonderful we can inspire eachother, so do you so often with your writes... I will pop in later to read your thoughts.