~ Winter Valley

Winter, Winter Thoughts, Season, E.L. Elisa Laura

~ Winter Valley

 

 

Small frozen particles

Become a cold blanket

Merged into a winter desert

 

White clouds on the ground

Of perfection and balance

The broad waves of the valley

 

Dancing along the terrestrial

Structure... under which secrets

Are sleeping, a season long...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you xx

Reviews

[sithlordjp]

I think this is my favorite one of yours so far. You were able to achieve a complete picture with your words, you really took me there. I saw the snow, felt the cold. The stillness of the whole landscape. When snow covers everything, are the screts beneath being buried, or slowly exposed? When all colors dissapear under a white coat, must we finally confront what is in that "valley"... I mean, wasn't that the whole point of The Girl With the Dragon Tattoo? "Small frozen particles" all weaving a larger picture... You write beautifully, it's a great joy to browse through your work.

Indeed or slowly exposed... it's a winters mystery. I like that. Thank you for picking so much interesting things out... :) pleasure to read your reviews . :)

[sithlordjp]

you are quite welcome.

:-)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

peace and perfection

Thank you so much ... :)

[captain]

love the song choice well much to the solemnity you painted in your word. Just right in its snowy magnificence. there is something about the winter that makes it so peaceful & calming aura as if everyone is asleep. i like this, short and straight to the heart.

Beautifully worded my friend... all lays hidden under our Dutch snow right now, true treasures.... to be found when spring comes.... thank you for feeling this one with me :)

[captain]

a pleasure to read you :), everything wakes in spring, and its even more beautiful in that day, where everyone has bright ever green. keep penning

That's the dream, and elusive romance of winter, making a rebirth to spring... till they meet again next year :) thank you dear friend :)

[AWickedMoon]

A spectacular poem. :)

Thank you so much :)

[Distant horizons]

What a beautifully scenic thought to go with the picture Elisa. Like the earth in hibernation, storing its energy for the coming season.

:-) Thank you very much!

[Thy joke on me]

I like this poem, it is very peaceful. Like the silence of falling snowflakes. Very inspiring. :)

Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it, truely appreciated!

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

It is a winter valley indeed, and it is winter here where I live now. Anyway, I'm glad that you're back on. Miss reading all your beautiful works.

Greg my friend, so good to see you around. Hope all is well with you, thank you so much. Here it's winter too, and brrrr too cold :) I will be back for your works :)))

[Pax]

you describe it such a balance that its really beautiful and appealing to read...
i love this... how wonderful as it falls and covered everything around hiding the sleeping history. Wonderful work dearest Friend :)

Yes, winter is so magical dear friend... Thank you for your wonderful words, there is much snow here now :)

[Pax]

oh... that've very nice to look at... like before in 2011 when i was there...then my sister said its good to see it now but when it melt it gets muddy which she really hate...she's a bit of a clean freak.... she doesn't want muddy shoes on her floor..lol... and your most welcome!

Yes :) I hate that too... today I got out on my bike, and with snowboots on, I saw people slip, looked really hurtful. :( I didn't slip fortunately, but I have a bike with winter wheels. :D HAHAHA women ;-) very recognizable dear hehe x

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I could read this over and over. As a matter of fact, I have! lol
It is in the blanket of snow that purity is captured. The refreshing beauty is not only heaven on earth, it is a season to rest in peace...to be still in serenity. Gorgeous write Sis!

Oh sis, yes, you felt it.... landscapes of love, of mystery, they are covered with snow, of the view of this season. It is so so so true as you have the eye sis..... I can't say it enough. Your emphatic skills are 10 versus 10, nobody on this site has them. Just you and me. I love your thoughs, and splendid feelers....

[Robbie~xoxo~]

We have always had a connection Eli...I just can't explain it as well as you can. You're truly amazing. :)

We do, did, and have... nobody can enter.... it is truly special. So are you! my all!

[Yasmin]

woow
This is beyond description
Simple beautiful and deep
Well done

I thank you from the cold Netherlands.... hugs!

[Yasmin]

lol
you are most certainly welcomed

:-) Eli smiles....