~ Amor II

~ Amor secondo, E.L. Elisa Laura, Poetry, love,

 

 

~ Amor II

 

 

Real love doesn’t ask for much

It dwells on the perfect skies,

It embraces the richer shores

It has golden treads lighter than speed

 

For me it is a thing I always had,

I lost it, but found it back again,

I saw it sparkling against the streams

And it whispered my ambience

 

Love is something to hold on strong;

Among the different changing spaces

The waves of natural kindred flows,

And in the daily eyes of people’s faces

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

Author's Note

This is a write I did when I was with my love in Andalucia lately. The sky was filled with ozon, as it could thunder every minute... it brought me thoughts, as I wrote them, as in life thunders can be there, but after rain you know what will come~
And I hope you enjoy it :) always do what you must :)

P.s. the title " ~ Amor II means the second write about "Amor I wrote, the other one is still onder construction, but it will be here in no time....as the (same title I used...) "
as Amor is Spanish for Love.

E.L.

Reviews

[sithlordjp]

"Love is something to hold on strong" Yes indeed, yet so many people make the mistake of holding too strong, crushing and breaking what they cherish the most, so sad... Love the positive energy that emerges from this piece, it breathes on large spaces, the skies, the shores... devastating to lose love, but invigorating to find "it back again". You have a smart philosophy on your subject, beautiful writing once again!

Oooh thank you so much sithlordjp :D so good to have your thoughts by always.

This one I wrote lately in mi Espana :)
Elisa

[Renée]

So Lovely E L ... love never asks .. it just gives and should be cherished ...

Exactly love, I'm pissed off tonight, but I'll will be back for your lovely writes.... much love dear xxx it always should be, so true!!!

[Renée]

never worry about reading luv... you take care xo

[khalid]

very nice sweet images written in a wonderful way..

Thank you so much xxxx

[khalid]

my pleasure

[Pax]

Great music choice... i felt the Spanish love as i read it....
i always love your definitions of love...
it evolve as it speaks its true nature...
an awesome piece you have here...
a sequel that is worth to read!
brilliant dearest!

Oh thank you so much dearest friend, it is so good to have you by again, and I'm truly sorry I'm so silent... I'm numb of meds... I will be soon back in track... You touch my core, thank you my friend, your words make me truly happy :)))

[Pax]

i so love the music... it so relaxing... though i hate my internet slow connection it keeps on buffering.. that is why sometimes i only listen to your words as it sings... hey no worries in my part... always take care of your health... let the meds do its job in healing you... always a pleasure to read you...

Oh buffering is bad.... :-( yes, this is a song from my roots... so glad you love it. :) If you hear the women sing, it's really Spanish :D on the end....thank you sweetheart. I will be better soon :-) big hug and many thankyous...

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

The last rhyme was really good and at least these two magical lines:

1. It has golden treads lighter than speed
2. And in the daily eyes of people’s faces

The idea that love is easy for you was also nice. Great love poem.

Thank you very much Michael for your thoughts! :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you do love poems so naturally, there is no pretention..no focus on convention...just a natural flow of love that feels like it moved the pen.

I just watched and listened... the weather, the love, and nature, thank you dear friend. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful poetry and amazing music. Real love need a open door and a lot of free time. Real love need patience and desire to fulfill the person we love and need. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Oh my friend, thank you for your beautiful review. Yes, Real love need a open door, and a lot of free time, you are one of the few who does understand it, and understand real love. I wish I was born in the early 60's. When my caracter was nothing more than normal.... Thank you for your thoughts. Dear friend.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

When you write like this, I get carried away....for me, Love is a magical journey. A place where we long to go, wrapped in it's warm embrace. And if we are lucky, it will let us stay...
You have depicted the spirit of Love, and it is everywhere. Breathtaking write, Sis!

That is so true beautiful soul sister, and sweetest friend.
The love I refound is much deeper than superficial yearnings, me and my love sometimes feel... and let eachother free in... real love doesn't need words, it is like nature's moods.... it happens, and the sun shines again, it is sometimes for the world hard to understand what a free relationship of true love can do, can have, can be~ you and me are on that same point sis, and it is true love. That was my intention of this poem, I felt your Asian European roots always through you, as it is some pleasant freedom. You felt it so dearly again. I so love you for taking care with that third eye you have.... love you! X

[Kenneth The Poet]

You bring light and love to a world that is in desperate need of it.

Oh, so great to have you by my friend, thank you so very much....

[David Scott]

You pen the moments cherished in life and love as if preserved and mounted trophies on the walls of poetry. Yet your trophies live and breath. They roar and lick their lips, knowing the power they wield over the hearts that find their gaze...
How very lovely!

Awww thank you so much... When I wrote this write, I looked to Marroc from Southeren Andalucia (Spain) where some of my roots lay... it was such a eve, with lightning in the air~ Thank you my dear friend....