This is a write I did when I was with my love in Andalucia lately. The sky was filled with ozon, as it could thunder every minute... it brought me thoughts, as I wrote them, as in life thunders can be there, but after rain you know what will come~
And I hope you enjoy it :) always do what you must :)
P.s. the title " ~ Amor II means the second write about "Amor I wrote, the other one is still onder construction, but it will be here in no time....as the (same title I used...) "
as Amor is Spanish for Love.
E.L.
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"Love is something to hold on strong" Yes indeed, yet so many people make the mistake of holding too strong, crushing and breaking what they cherish the most, so sad... Love the positive energy that emerges from this piece, it breathes on large spaces, the skies, the shores... devastating to lose love, but invigorating to find "it back again". You have a smart philosophy on your subject, beautiful writing once again!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Oooh thank you so much sithlordjp :D so good to have your thoughts by always.
This one .. read moreOooh thank you so much sithlordjp :D so good to have your thoughts by always.
So Lovely E L ... love never asks .. it just gives and should be cherished ...
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Exactly love, I'm pissed off tonight, but I'll will be back for your lovely writes.... much love dea.. read moreExactly love, I'm pissed off tonight, but I'll will be back for your lovely writes.... much love dear xxx it always should be, so true!!!
"Love is something to hold on strong" Yes indeed, yet so many people make the mistake of holding too strong, crushing and breaking what they cherish the most, so sad... Love the positive energy that emerges from this piece, it breathes on large spaces, the skies, the shores... devastating to lose love, but invigorating to find "it back again". You have a smart philosophy on your subject, beautiful writing once again!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Oooh thank you so much sithlordjp :D so good to have your thoughts by always.
This one .. read moreOooh thank you so much sithlordjp :D so good to have your thoughts by always.
Great music choice... i felt the Spanish love as i read it....
i always love your definitions of love...
it evolve as it speaks its true nature...
an awesome piece you have here...
a sequel that is worth to read!
brilliant dearest!
Oh thank you so much dearest friend, it is so good to have you by again, and I'm truly sorry I'm so .. read moreOh thank you so much dearest friend, it is so good to have you by again, and I'm truly sorry I'm so silent... I'm numb of meds... I will be soon back in track... You touch my core, thank you my friend, your words make me truly happy :)))
11 Years Ago
i so love the music... it so relaxing... though i hate my internet slow connection it keeps on buffe.. read morei so love the music... it so relaxing... though i hate my internet slow connection it keeps on buffering.. that is why sometimes i only listen to your words as it sings... hey no worries in my part... always take care of your health... let the meds do its job in healing you... always a pleasure to read you...
11 Years Ago
Oh buffering is bad.... :-( yes, this is a song from my roots... so glad you love it. :) If you hear.. read moreOh buffering is bad.... :-( yes, this is a song from my roots... so glad you love it. :) If you hear the women sing, it's really Spanish :D on the end....thank you sweetheart. I will be better soon :-) big hug and many thankyous...
Beautiful poetry and amazing music. Real love need a open door and a lot of free time. Real love need patience and desire to fulfill the person we love and need. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Oh my friend, thank you for your beautiful review. Yes, Real love need a open door, and a lot of fre.. read moreOh my friend, thank you for your beautiful review. Yes, Real love need a open door, and a lot of free time, you are one of the few who does understand it, and understand real love. I wish I was born in the early 60's. When my caracter was nothing more than normal.... Thank you for your thoughts. Dear friend.
When you write like this, I get carried away....for me, Love is a magical journey. A place where we long to go, wrapped in it's warm embrace. And if we are lucky, it will let us stay...
You have depicted the spirit of Love, and it is everywhere. Breathtaking write, Sis!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
That is so true beautiful soul sister, and sweetest friend.
The love I refound is much deeper .. read moreThat is so true beautiful soul sister, and sweetest friend.
The love I refound is much deeper than superficial yearnings, me and my love sometimes feel... and let eachother free in... real love doesn't need words, it is like nature's moods.... it happens, and the sun shines again, it is sometimes for the world hard to understand what a free relationship of true love can do, can have, can be~ you and me are on that same point sis, and it is true love. That was my intention of this poem, I felt your Asian European roots always through you, as it is some pleasant freedom. You felt it so dearly again. I so love you for taking care with that third eye you have.... love you! X
You pen the moments cherished in life and love as if preserved and mounted trophies on the walls of poetry. Yet your trophies live and breath. They roar and lick their lips, knowing the power they wield over the hearts that find their gaze...
How very lovely!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Awww thank you so much... When I wrote this write, I looked to Marroc from Southeren Andalucia (Spai.. read moreAwww thank you so much... When I wrote this write, I looked to Marroc from Southeren Andalucia (Spain) where some of my roots lay... it was such a eve, with lightning in the air~ Thank you my dear friend....