~ She

E.L. Elisa Laura, Poetry, Song, Lyrics, Children, Love, Happiness

 

~ She

 

 

She…

She is the sun and the moon in me,

She is the dream that could ever be

The dream world of lost glorious times

Just to live… she….

She is just

The purity of the tender soul

A humbling creation inside every one

She want you to see… just pure beauty

Yes, that is she

 

She…

She is the sparkle of love in me

The little one that is hiding to be

The time passes by but she….

She is always there when I need to be,

Loves me back just that tenderly

When it’s too late to be she,

She will always remind me of

The love for new days, yes

That is she...

 

So is she…

The only true one that can make me smile

The most precious soul of the universe,

Nothing will ever be sad… as long as

She…

She still dances the rumba inside of me

 Laughs at the people who need to be

Happy in love, and not feel that free

And to all who are sad,

She...

She wants you to be stronger

Than you’d ever be, she wants you

Healthy in each moment,

Even when you’re ill, she is always there

So is she…

She… she is

The most valuable one I ever seen,

The most tiny sweet love of me

I know her so well

As my heart beats the same,

So is hers…

              So is hers…

 

She, she is one soul to accumulate

One heart in my body to see

That is she...

 

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

A little song to those little ones ;-)
As I do love children so much!
Enjoy

Elisa

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love this, Elisa.

i look at this from another angle...i feel as if my poems are my children...and the she in this poem, for me, is the muse...

she never lets me down...she is the one relationship i have sustained in the last 40 plus years, even though all of my others have come and gone.

this perfectly depicts that for me.

thank you for this

jacob

Thank you so much jacob, I'm happy my poem / little song could bring you there.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

this is a very beautful , moving tribute, straight from the heart
and says so much about your as a person...... well done dear Elisa

Thank you dearheart, for seeing that. X and for coming by, I will be back for you

[SHEEMA HUQ]

well Elisa, you seem to be churning out a awful lot of good quality, stimulating poetry, so it has been a real pleasure to come back and see you again

[Distant horizons]

A beauty of wonder from the heart of the child within, who reminds us of who we truly are. Beautiful words, as always Alise :-)

Yes, thank you dear friend... :-) true what you say it reminds us indeed...

[Distant horizons]

:-)

[Pax]

such a soothing tone in the poem just like everyone said it: just like a lullaby. I feel nice reading this, it gives a sense of loving warm feeling on the subject of a child. Yes, a smile of a child a day takes away the weariness of the whole day... a lovely dedication all children's and parents out there. Thank you for sharing this dearest friend.

Thank you so much sweet friend... and welcome back :D

[Adam M. Snow]

Awe, this poem left me speechless in a good way.... Its that adorable

Adam, I'm glad it did, sweet friend. Thank you very much! again for your wonderful words. Long time no see :) I will return the flavor!

[Adam M. Snow]

You are most welcome my friend and it has been along time

and favor ;-) lol.... it has been, yes, I was closed a several times, I needed some rest but I'm back now, and kicking :D I do not ever forget who did something wonderful to me. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"She" is connected to us all... the core of strength, love, peace, and happiness, can be found in her. From young to old, "she" will always be there.
This is a multifaceted gem you have written Eli!...a lullaby to cherish.

♥ Thank you with whole my heart love ! xxx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I loved reading it! ~xoxo~

So happy you did.... sis :) Hugs!

[h d e rushin]

You sparkle EL like no other and certainly at no other time. There is no greater
accomplishment of mankind than the love of eachother, the approval and
accreditation of the youngest among us. This is a very tender song sung
by a very tender songstress.

Were the Neanderthal's capable of love? Wherever there was warmth
(woman, children) wherever the distillation of a man becoming complex
and responsive to experience and cultivation (sex and childbirth) there must
have been love. And not just longing and knowing but true sophisticated
love.

The love you speak of here is primal, first in importance.
Though primative. fabulous, dana

Dana love, you're marvelous yourself first of all, wow what a review, thank you so much for this. I so appreciate your wise thoughts, on each poem you leave a note. And second, I guess the Neanderthal's did felt true love... as animals do too, see a mother chimp with her child, and how she carry him/her. Primates do... :) We are just a clever human race nate out of them. The ones who could haunt, and made "spears to kill in Prehistory" for survival, our brain was intelligent enough to separate emotions from instincts..... it is sophisticated love when love not ask for much, when love just is there, with no words, and that's the love i so adore, the free love, without talking just knowing it's there.... children have this, innocent love, the love to just give a smile, or a so most lovely answer on things we don't expect.... it could bring me the best daily smiles.... :) Thank you so so much for your understanding, and great thoughts my friend! love to you!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Excellent. I played with my daughter as I read this.

Ken that is most wonderful..... so happy and really sitting here with a smile if you tell me this.... :-) give her a big hug from Eli

[Kenneth The Poet]

Will do.

[amy p]

Wow! I really liked it. Thank you. It makes you think of your own children and everything they bring to us, as well as, our own inner child.

Thank you so much Amy :)