Amazing, truly inspired by your love of nature and of the ancients. The ancients whisper to us the secrets, the hidden treasures, through nature for those who are awake and ready to receive. As we are more and more aware of what is happening in our lives, we are shaped, our rough edges polished, our dreams molded into what they were always meant to be. This is where love grows, in the awareness, in the processes of truly living of becoming, this is what becomes of the great lover of yester years. Truly inspiring, you once again have touched my heart so deeply, blessings to you sweet heart.
Artwork and words were amazing. Love can grow and died in all places. I like your description. I had to read twice. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so so much my friend, I always enjoy your wonderful reviews.
This is refreshing! Oh how I love the mountains...it breathes new life in the lungs.The beauty inhaled is good for the soul, washing away pain to cleanse the mind.
This is sheer Perfection!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much R. I was not in the mountains though, as we don't have them pity enough, but it sa.. read moreThank you so much R. I was not in the mountains though, as we don't have them pity enough, but it says enough of my yearning... I do love to climb and walk them. Through Spain I was though.... just for a moment. "the pyrenees" are beautiful. Hugs and much love xxxxx
The heart ruminates of what it knows and people we have loved, but the higher love encompasses all these things and something more, I like this write, it's as if where our loves in the past enables us to see the transcendent love, mostly I felt this however in the 1st stanza.
my first thought is of the heart traveling back to a past love and wondering if their heart hears your own crying out to be heard. Lovely
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you for your thoughts dear sister, but I must say, that it wasn't hihi.... I was just hiking a.. read moreThank you for your thoughts dear sister, but I must say, that it wasn't hihi.... I was just hiking and saw hills with moorland, as we have that so much here, and I visualized the mountains, and the yearning of climbing a real mountain once in my life, next to that I saw a stream, and i felt their connection. No, I'm more than happy with the love I have for 13 years but indeed it could be interpret as you did... lovely anyway sweetheart Xx
it sounds like things you might hear while hiking in the mountains...all the different voices of nature.
really nice imagery in this piece...makes me want to go there.
jacob
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much Jacob, you know I tell you a little secret, (the Netherlands don't have mountains).. read moreThank you so much Jacob, you know I tell you a little secret, (the Netherlands don't have mountains) it was all in my mind ;-) what i heard... and on my retina what I saw, and then it was on paper, lol glad you wanted to go there, I guess me too. Eli
11 Years Ago
wow, Elisa, that makes this poem even better..because it really relates to the speaker actually bein.. read morewow, Elisa, that makes this poem even better..because it really relates to the speaker actually being there and experiencing what is in the poem...so much so that the reader can experience it as well.