~ Like Mountains and Streams

~ Like Mountains and Streams

A Poem by
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E.L. Elisa Laura, Poetry, the Love for Nature

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~ Like Mountains and Streams

 

 

 

 

Where does love grow?

On top? where I breathe thin air

And where days will turn into light

For I will be there

 

O' great lover of yester years

What of you shall become?

If time of years dances

On your rough edges

And peace always will deform

 

Icy foam sloshing against

The sharp forms of your vast corpo

Cut shapes by centuries

Still it hurts from ages ago

 

So fresh you are onto knees high in;

The voice of the golden glacier stream

Crossing you slowly, passing you by

Where each era I sing to you

A tiny lovers scream

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

© 2013


Author's Note



This is a poem I made when I was off for a long time,
Far away from home.... and I was hiking, and got inspiration...
I hope you enjoy!




Thank you xx

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Amazing, truly inspired by your love of nature and of the ancients. The ancients whisper to us the secrets, the hidden treasures, through nature for those who are awake and ready to receive. As we are more and more aware of what is happening in our lives, we are shaped, our rough edges polished, our dreams molded into what they were always meant to be. This is where love grows, in the awareness, in the processes of truly living of becoming, this is what becomes of the great lover of yester years. Truly inspiring, you once again have touched my heart so deeply, blessings to you sweet heart.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thanks for this lovely review :-)
Healing Star

11 Years Ago

you are most deserving :)

11 Years Ago

Xxx



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Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

And thank you for another smile :)
Dream Mistress

11 Years Ago

welcome again
Artwork and words were amazing. Love can grow and died in all places. I like your description. I had to read twice. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so so much my friend, I always enjoy your wonderful reviews.
That final stanza was extremely powerful..dana

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much sweet dana :) you make me smile!
This is refreshing! Oh how I love the mountains...it breathes new life in the lungs.The beauty inhaled is good for the soul, washing away pain to cleanse the mind.
This is sheer Perfection!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much R. I was not in the mountains though, as we don't have them pity enough, but it sa.. read more
yes it was worth the wait to write this jewel! Thank you for the feeling of home away from home.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your words. Truly appreciated...
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

yes its mutual
The heart ruminates of what it knows and people we have loved, but the higher love encompasses all these things and something more, I like this write, it's as if where our loves in the past enables us to see the transcendent love, mostly I felt this however in the 1st stanza.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Beautiful visions Michael. Thank you :)
my first thought is of the heart traveling back to a past love and wondering if their heart hears your own crying out to be heard. Lovely

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughts dear sister, but I must say, that it wasn't hihi.... I was just hiking a.. read more
it sounds like things you might hear while hiking in the mountains...all the different voices of nature.

really nice imagery in this piece...makes me want to go there.

jacob

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Jacob, you know I tell you a little secret, (the Netherlands don't have mountains).. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

11 Years Ago

wow, Elisa, that makes this poem even better..because it really relates to the speaker actually bein.. read more

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