~ I had a Dream

~ I had a Dream

A Poem by
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E.L. Dreams, Fantasy, Mind Jumps, Surreal,

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~ I had a Dream

 

When I dozed off into a deep sleep

Curled eyelashes smiled

Cheeks blushed and

My mouth that peaceful

 

I saw a new world,

One of pink travels

Cotton visions

And surreal love

 

I had a dream

 

I walked through

Shadowed roads

Winked to silken skies

Smelled the Cherry Blossom

 

Danced in circles

Sung out loud

Faced my youth

Into deeper levels

 

I had a dream

 

Heard a violin, a Cello

And some piano notes

I touched the sky

And kissed the ground

 

Walked by the fields of hope

Resting and lying on my back

Then I smiled and smelled

My pillow

 

I must have had a dream

 

 

 

 Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note

Music: Enya - Hope Has a Place


Thank you xx

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I think it's interesting how we are able to do anything in our dreams as opposed to real life...also see anything, touch and smell anything, go anywhere we'd like. Our minds always take us to new places or just the places we'd like to be. Our dreams are the perfect place for fantasy to take place :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

You're a vivid person, I can tell you ;-)
DoNt LoSe YoUrSeLf

11 Years Ago

Haha, vivid?

11 Years Ago

In other terms; alive, in spirit, observation, and not afraid to let in some of your true feelings.... read more



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The poem read like a dream. Believable.
Enjoyed this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

It was a real one :-) Thank you so much for all your lovely reviews!
Beautiful surreal almost , the stuff of dreams!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you sweetheart x
In your dream I heard music, danced, smelled the cherry blossoms, and smiled. I enjoyed the treat of being in a wonderful place which is your mind. Thank you for writing this, I'm glad to have read this beautiful piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much, great and happy you felt it. :)
Quill~

11 Years Ago

This is what dreams are made of, especially in pink. :)
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CS
So many times, we look back on our youth, and find only pain. We think about our inner child and find hurt. But this, this makes me think you found peace and beauty in the past, and that is comforting, like a very nice dream.

I love cherry blossom. They are so unique. They make the world look a little less ordinary and more surreal.

The imagery in this is stunning. It really draws me in. As if I am walking this dream with you and feeling the same emotions and hearing the cello. Just for a moment.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear, I'm happy I could take you with me, for the fragments that I've dreamed :).. read more
I really like this poem, it is a dream.
What really stood out to me was the Danced in Circles, Sung out loud.
My wife tells me I go places in my dreams. I laugh and laugh, and
I sing out loud... The other morning I consciously new I was singing,
and my wife said it was an awesome song about healing yourself. It is the connection with or subconscious that is so amazing. I think our subconscious can go to other dimensions at any time, it remembers what wonderful beings we truly are. We have been programmed to forget, but if we really try we can start to remember. Touched the Sky and kissed the Ground, is the connection with Father Sky, and Mother Earth, when we are in their love at the same time we become the Holy Child. I loved the softness of the cotton New World, Pink travels beautiful. Winked to silken skies, again very cool line, very playful and again soft and warm. Thanks for writing this and sharing, I love it. blessings to you Elisa - keep your dreams alive and follow where your heart leads.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your amazing experiences and nice you share it with me, beautiful words fell.. read more
Healing Star

11 Years Ago

You are very welcome, sweet heart.

11 Years Ago

:-)
it is a facinating subject...dream interpretation. My daughter bought me a dream book for christmas to help analyze my dreams....I had a nightmare the other night and it didn't help all that much, I think it is better to go with your instincts on what the dream meant. This one was lovely, and written beautifully. Like you walked on a road to heaven.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear for your wonderful review, it is such an interesting subject, I all talk more about y.. read more
You had a very good dream. I need to have a good dream. Stress been killing my thoughts and dreams. I like the vision create by a hopeful dreams of music and beauty. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

And thank you my friend for your honesty and thoughts, I'm sorry you feel much stressed lately, I ho.. read more
So sweet, love that twist at the end. Ahh that sweetness that lingers, but it's not there! Beautiful dream, may I borrow it? Lovely.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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11 Years Ago

It is the Romantic in me lol ofcourse you may... I dreamed it also for you dear friend :)
What a lovely dream! I think the picture already started the visual but your words were so dreamlike as well and took me there in my mind. Too bad it was just a dream. *sigh*
And I LOVE Sakura. Its my favorite thing about spring:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Yes Sakura I love too... My favorite :) oh Horizon, thanks a lot for your beautiful words.... I long.. read more
Horizon K.

11 Years Ago

I was at the park today and noticed the rows of leafless Sakura trees, yet they had developing buds .. read more

11 Years Ago

Oh wow did you? I'm so happy you did.... That is truly wonderful my friend... I guess we will have t.. read more
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Pax
a dreamy write, i love the description of each stanza... i would love to see the Cherry Blossom in the flesh someday... this is such a nice touch of your dreams in beautiful surreal vission of a dream.
Wonderful work my dearest friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

My dear thank you, so much, they are always just a little period blooming in spring, here around my .. read more
Pax

11 Years Ago

i would love to see it... and your most welcome, hugs :)

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