The need of pleasure and pure essence,
On that cloud we produced our afterlife
We are the pinnacle of impermanence
1. This piece reminds me of two things the instinct to love and recurrent dreams of flying I have xD
Your poetic voice is like the world-soul's memory of poetry, memory of life. I think when you have left your body, people will read your poems and it will cause quite a good scandal.
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LOL, that is what I mean with "Impossible" you're so impossible.... ;-) scandals or not, I transform.. read moreLOL, that is what I mean with "Impossible" you're so impossible.... ;-) scandals or not, I transformed into a nude Ephemera.... I'm already death, the 24 hours, I lived spoke history :) x
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But thank you deeply, most appreciated, ( you know my jokes by now don't you? ) ;-)
The need of pleasure and pure essence,
On that cloud we produced our afterlife
We are the pinnacle of impermanence
1. This piece reminds me of two things the instinct to love and recurrent dreams of flying I have xD
Your poetic voice is like the world-soul's memory of poetry, memory of life. I think when you have left your body, people will read your poems and it will cause quite a good scandal.
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LOL, that is what I mean with "Impossible" you're so impossible.... ;-) scandals or not, I transform.. read moreLOL, that is what I mean with "Impossible" you're so impossible.... ;-) scandals or not, I transformed into a nude Ephemera.... I'm already death, the 24 hours, I lived spoke history :) x
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But thank you deeply, most appreciated, ( you know my jokes by now don't you? ) ;-)
The first stanza captured me. It could have been the entire poem and I would be happy with that. But your talent spreads like wildfire and continues to burn throughout this piece. This is an amazing write.
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Thank you very much for your time, visit and beautiful words, I look forward to your writings :)
It's a pleasure to read your work. :) You have set the bar for excellence.
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If my readers enjoy my work, that makes me stay and write thank you very much when I'm home later, I.. read moreIf my readers enjoy my work, that makes me stay and write thank you very much when I'm home later, I shall read your work too. :))
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:) No rush. I just enjoy reading talented writers such as you.
We can go, we have achieved our purpose…"
too many big words for an old bird like me...
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He he... and that is what I so adore about the mayfly, in twenty-four hours, there is a whole life t.. read moreHe he... and that is what I so adore about the mayfly, in twenty-four hours, there is a whole life time... as we sometimes are thinking of death my friend. You and me know. Life is just a passage...
The thought is one that many an insect has inspired the mind to contemplate. Your poem however, is such a lolvely worded collection of thought as to inspire new perspective.
Thank you for your work. It was worth the read indeed.
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Thank you David for your insights, and beautiful thoughts. :)Nice to have you by
well, I like your description in the flight of life dieing to be heard...some great flighty visuals in this piece. I am very amused by the word choice "fault of natural genetics" very great line to sustain my brain mutter to clear mystery. Is this about life, death, love or just being free from the constrains of a dream?, any way the enigma in reverse was looked upon when my tunnel vision disperses...great piece
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It is just I had some poems written were I imagined and transformed myself in mind to some animals, .. read moreIt is just I had some poems written were I imagined and transformed myself in mind to some animals, this one is the mayfly, one who lives only for 24 hrs and when it is born is programmed to do all the things a human being does in a life time, I found that very interesting..... Thank you so much my friend :)
A Joy to have your presence at the cafe. You pen flows with beauty, as you share the special touch of your insightful thoughts. You inspire my exqusite friend! ~ xoxo
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Thank you so much Judi dear, I'm happy to be back, I took a lot of rest in my time off, I have misse.. read moreThank you so much Judi dear, I'm happy to be back, I took a lot of rest in my time off, I have missed you, xoxo
like the creature in your verse may you fly on gasp and wisp, past the arms of darkened glow and through the glint of sparling memory.. flight is but a fleeting wish, resting quiet soft upon..
- Antonio
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Beautiful just beautiful my friend your words nail the celebrating of death so well........ I know, .. read moreBeautiful just beautiful my friend your words nail the celebrating of death so well........ I know, you're a great soul in the same spirit.... thank you very much!!!
thank you, for letting me be a small part of your joy this moment..
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Thank you sweet friend. It is lovely to be around your precence again. Talk soon! happy eve/night ov.. read moreThank you sweet friend. It is lovely to be around your precence again. Talk soon! happy eve/night overthere
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around each other, yes, always my friend.. rest well, dream vivid..
I agree, with Courtney...Although, I have my own thoughts...just a wonderful write, Eli....for English to be your second language, your message was still profound. Well done.
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Hey Ev! thank you so much for your visit on here. Hope you had a wonderful New Year. Don't be afraid.. read moreHey Ev! thank you so much for your visit on here. Hope you had a wonderful New Year. Don't be afraid to tell me your thoughts, or where I could do better, I"m happy with people who help me out. :)
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Ha ha, I'm not much of a critique...as people who know me...you write your thoughts out...as do I..... read moreHa ha, I'm not much of a critique...as people who know me...you write your thoughts out...as do I...its either I like it or I don't...I Loved it, and I have enjoyed your work despite any drama, Eli. :)
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Alright, well thank you again then :) good to have you back :D
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No problem...I want people to understand, like you do...that we do have our own Lives...we are here .. read moreNo problem...I want people to understand, like you do...that we do have our own Lives...we are here to share our thoughts...not to cause stress from others...beside I want to enjoy art, not to stress about it. :)
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That's a real real good thought Ev. However, for me stress is to be not as good as I like to be ;) l.. read moreThat's a real real good thought Ev. However, for me stress is to be not as good as I like to be ;) lol.... I always want to improve myself into the next level. You maybe would do the same, if you tried to write in Dutch, or another language, I bet you would be happy with my help :D take much care... and relax always, it's a good caracter thingy! :)))
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Ha ha everyone should improve on the next level...it goes without saying...I would love to write in .. read moreHa ha everyone should improve on the next level...it goes without saying...I would love to write in Dutch, if I spoke it...I'm sure it is a beautiful language. :)
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Oooh lol it isn't I hate it lol..... it's all back in the troth, and ugly to hear, lol :D one of the.. read moreOooh lol it isn't I hate it lol..... it's all back in the troth, and ugly to hear, lol :D one of the most difficult languages too in the world.... pfff... even I have difficulties with it still.... each Dutch has.... I would love to hear you speak it though, it would be awesome! :D
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Any new language to learn is difficult, to learn...I know 3, not that I'm willing to learn anymore.... read moreAny new language to learn is difficult, to learn...I know 3, not that I'm willing to learn anymore...its the story of Babel...when we as humans only knew one language...then the Gods, said, we were too smart for our own good creating this ginormous tower....dispersed us all over the world with different language...even now, in each country there's even internal dialects...strange...no...its true...so don't get me wrong...the Dutch are beautiful people with their own language...and all over the world people speak their own language in their own beauty...okay, truth be told, I don't think Cantonese is a beautiful language, but that's just me lol. :)
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Yes, that's the wonderful ancient story, nobody ever could speak the same language... and there was .. read moreYes, that's the wonderful ancient story, nobody ever could speak the same language... and there was misscommunication. At least the language of love, and friendship is universal. It's very sweet and I feel honored though you say this. Cantonese (China) is wonderful... Manderin too.... it has just the beauty of one syllable stylish words. That's me too lol :D
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And I can't denial I have a weak for Russian and the "Cyrillic" letters.... so magical.....
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lol, I'm not going to lie...Cantonese sounds like cats fighting...again, that's just me, and if anyo.. read morelol, I'm not going to lie...Cantonese sounds like cats fighting...again, that's just me, and if anyone wants to direct that towards me, that's cool, I'm not being racial, it just sounds like that....Mandarin has a different intonation, since I've been to that part of China, and Mandarin sounds a little bit better than Cantonese lol.
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HAHAHAHA, it does... it's very nasal.... and ai ie shu wa to a..... but it has it charms.... :) read moreHAHAHAHA, it does... it's very nasal.... and ai ie shu wa to a..... but it has it charms.... :)
No, nobody is racial... it's freedom of speach, how it is interpret is not always how it's meant. I'm half blooded, well triple blooded myself, Euro, Asian roots, so, I would never be racial, It does, one of my best friends here in the Netherlands is a Mandarin woman, she's beautiful, and I often eat at her restaurant were she speaks Mandarin with her parents... and I melt each time... :D
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I rather eat at a Vietnamese restaurant...then Chinese, but that's just me...I do have my favorite C.. read moreI rather eat at a Vietnamese restaurant...then Chinese, but that's just me...I do have my favorite Chinese dishes...truth be told, the most spoken language in the world, IS Chinese...you would think it would be English, but no...its about numbers...and they have the most people in the world...and like you, I'm a half breed, which I hate to say due to the racist connotations in America that people around the world don't know about...I've traveled...and seen the ugliest Americans during my travels and I'm American...or I think I am...since I'm being political....its truth...if there was a war like world war 3, for example, it would be about resources and nothing else...I won't believe BS about ideoligies...you look at past American Wars and Geo Politics...its about resources....oil, etc...we have a billion people living on this earth and who is to say we can feed them all? Just real talk Sweetie.
So If I offended any Chinese...Sorry, just speaking truth, it doesnt sound well to me. :)
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No it's Chinese, as the Economy is beaten USA and Europe, always Rotterdam was the biggest harbor, n.. read moreNo it's Chinese, as the Economy is beaten USA and Europe, always Rotterdam was the biggest harbor, now it's in China. So it goes. And it's ok..... Vietnamese foodies are great, I love them! But I do love all Asian foodies. (Indonesian especially ofcourse my roots) I make many rice dishes always, I do love to put my whole heart in cooking. I can understand what you're saying.... in all you say. I always try to see the world as one big fam. I love to travel, and see like you new places. Even I find bad Turist Dutches, laying on the beach with a plastic bag of our most famous supermarket, and think, geez, coudn't you just be not that stingy, and buy a decent beach bag.... you know what I'm saying??? just those little irritations of my own peeps....
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Well everything is Made In China...sad to say, I went there to visit the Great Wall Of China...and t.. read moreWell everything is Made In China...sad to say, I went there to visit the Great Wall Of China...and the products on the streets, Were Made In China...they were homogenous people...they don't take kind to half breeds but ae willing to use us in their favor...that's what I seen...even in the Philippines they own Corporately...mind you, they work hard and do anything for money...what America doesn't know...is all Asian countries dislike China. And that's truth.
Now, Iay order beef broccoli over rice lol...have nice night Elisa. :)
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:D I am listening dear poet......
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Ha ha, that's enough politics...they don't want to hear the real truth...From An American...I'm prob.. read moreHa ha, that's enough politics...they don't want to hear the real truth...From An American...I'm probably deemed dangerous already...Freedom of Speech here is NOT Free.
But HEY I write Romantic/Erotic Poems....nothing Political...sheesh....BUT If I did, I'm sure the Whole World Would Listen.
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Oh just come to Holland, and be free dear.... I was still letting it all down, landing in my brains,.. read moreOh just come to Holland, and be free dear.... I was still letting it all down, landing in my brains, and wanted to come back with a thoughtful word, but it's late, and I'm jawnin here.... as I already must have gone to bad much earlier this night, it's so freaking irritating I have so often time difference with the thinkers of great countries... lol. I know how you're Ev... and how you write. And it's YOU, so it's good. I know the world does listen to you.... Pity and for me strainge to understand in the Land of the living dream, Freedom of Speech isn't free, explain me more about California, as I see it as the state of the most free experiences, and dreams that could ever be~ or am I wrong? I'm just a little Dutchie... you know, nothing more.
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bad = bed, geez.... haha
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California has the Best Marijuana in the world...BUT, to bad I've slowed my ways...The state of Wash.. read moreCalifornia has the Best Marijuana in the world...BUT, to bad I've slowed my ways...The state of Washington and Colorado legalized it, which is great, and it sets up our Wonderful State...I'm sure, Gay Marriage will be approved in the years to come...to give equality...but not for our Southern States of our union...it doesn't bother me, unless, they impose how I live as a Straight person, and that's the conundrum of things....give an inch, they take a mile. Nite nite, Eli.
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Oh maybe you mean HERE on WC? you shouldn't care about WC. Who hates it can easily press the flush b.. read moreOh maybe you mean HERE on WC? you shouldn't care about WC. Who hates it can easily press the flush button, who is interested shall respond... :)
WC is wonderful...its FREE, and its the only website I write for...you know, how many other websites.. read moreWC is wonderful...its FREE, and its the only website I write for...you know, how many other websites write me to write for their website? A Lot...but I choose this place...and I express myself to write here...who gets the traffic for their advertisement? They do...its not me. They should be glad they have writers like us. :)
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Yes, true, have been through that too... this is the best place. Others aren't that good. You speak .. read moreYes, true, have been through that too... this is the best place. Others aren't that good. You speak truth, Yes. I'm more reservated though than you, but maybe I should walk out of my little shell more.... thanks for being you Ev.