~ Like an Ephemera

~ Like an Ephemera

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It's all temporary....

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~ Like an Ephemera


 

When I fly, it is most intense…

And when my tiny wings reach the sky,

As I live breathe and will die

Feeling each breeze through my body

Just up high thinking one thing;

Now I still live, and breathe,

“It was the most intense day”

And rather I would be around longer

And stay…


 

The law of nature will maybe bring me back

But just now I’m dying, and I got to go…


 

Flashes of light bring me back to facts;

I was early mature,

And programmed to love,

To find food, and to build a nest,

To fly around on the ninth hour

To lose my founded food, and to re find it,

And to find my love…


 

But seen as a fault of natural genetics

I shall be just unacceptable and going anyway...


 

Just before I leave, know I found you,

My dearly mayfly, high in the sky

There we fulfilled the moment

The need of pleasure and pure essence,

On that cloud we produced our afterlife

With the sun in our back shining bright,

To be born out of the seas, like our revelation

Or in Greek; “apocalypse” of love,

Maybe just for a daytime…


 

We are the pinnacle of impermanence

And we had a most beautiful flight

But in twenty-four hours you can do more than

We think we would ever reach…

So it’s worthy to let go, this life,

There is no need for tears, as they dry

Of happiness, and only shine…


 

Hold my wing, youth shall be born soon,

We can go, we did achieved our purpose…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note

Thank you xx

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The need of pleasure and pure essence,
On that cloud we produced our afterlife

We are the pinnacle of impermanence

1. This piece reminds me of two things the instinct to love and recurrent dreams of flying I have xD

Your poetic voice is like the world-soul's memory of poetry, memory of life. I think when you have left your body, people will read your poems and it will cause quite a good scandal.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

LOL, that is what I mean with "Impossible" you're so impossible.... ;-) scandals or not, I transform.. read more

11 Years Ago

But thank you deeply, most appreciated, ( you know my jokes by now don't you? ) ;-)



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beautifully done..beautiful words :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emman

11 Years Ago

Walang anuman :)

11 Years Ago

:-) Wishing you a beautiful day! hook up soon!
emman

11 Years Ago

Likewise ;)
The need of pleasure and pure essence,
On that cloud we produced our afterlife

We are the pinnacle of impermanence

1. This piece reminds me of two things the instinct to love and recurrent dreams of flying I have xD

Your poetic voice is like the world-soul's memory of poetry, memory of life. I think when you have left your body, people will read your poems and it will cause quite a good scandal.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

LOL, that is what I mean with "Impossible" you're so impossible.... ;-) scandals or not, I transform.. read more

11 Years Ago

But thank you deeply, most appreciated, ( you know my jokes by now don't you? ) ;-)
The first stanza captured me. It could have been the entire poem and I would be happy with that. But your talent spreads like wildfire and continues to burn throughout this piece. This is an amazing write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quill~

11 Years Ago

It's a pleasure to read your work. :) You have set the bar for excellence.

11 Years Ago

If my readers enjoy my work, that makes me stay and write thank you very much when I'm home later, I.. read more
Quill~

11 Years Ago

:) No rush. I just enjoy reading talented writers such as you.
"Hold my wing, youth shall be born soon,

We can go, we have achieved our purpose…"
too many big words for an old bird like me...


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

He he... and that is what I so adore about the mayfly, in twenty-four hours, there is a whole life t.. read more
The thought is one that many an insect has inspired the mind to contemplate. Your poem however, is such a lolvely worded collection of thought as to inspire new perspective.
Thank you for your work. It was worth the read indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you David for your insights, and beautiful thoughts. :)Nice to have you by
well, I like your description in the flight of life dieing to be heard...some great flighty visuals in this piece. I am very amused by the word choice "fault of natural genetics" very great line to sustain my brain mutter to clear mystery. Is this about life, death, love or just being free from the constrains of a dream?, any way the enigma in reverse was looked upon when my tunnel vision disperses...great piece

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

It is just I had some poems written were I imagined and transformed myself in mind to some animals, .. read more
A Joy to have your presence at the cafe. You pen flows with beauty, as you share the special touch of your insightful thoughts. You inspire my exqusite friend! ~ xoxo

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*** Hey Jude***

11 Years Ago

Miss you, Blessed Be ~ "heartsmiles" ~xx

11 Years Ago

Till soon sweet Judi, when you're on :) I'm always most happy xxx
*** Hey Jude***

11 Years Ago

Very soon Bella. :-) You inspire every life you touch! Thank you for you "touch" ~xoxo
like the creature in your verse may you fly on gasp and wisp, past the arms of darkened glow and through the glint of sparling memory.. flight is but a fleeting wish, resting quiet soft upon..

- Antonio

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Antonio Valentino

11 Years Ago

thank you, for letting me be a small part of your joy this moment..

11 Years Ago

Thank you sweet friend. It is lovely to be around your precence again. Talk soon! happy eve/night ov.. read more
Antonio Valentino

11 Years Ago

around each other, yes, always my friend.. rest well, dream vivid..
I agree, with Courtney...Although, I have my own thoughts...just a wonderful write, Eli....for English to be your second language, your message was still profound. Well done.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Everett DeValle

11 Years Ago

WC is wonderful...its FREE, and its the only website I write for...you know, how many other websites.. read more

11 Years Ago

Yes, true, have been through that too... this is the best place. Others aren't that good. You speak .. read more
Everett DeValle

11 Years Ago

:)

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